MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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Nimrit

@arna753

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#991

fab update. but it was as an emotional update.

i'm soo glad that akash aka aryan is dead. pls bring manveer together soon.

btw congrats 4 becoming goldie!!

cont. soon

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Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#992

awsm...both the two updates was grt...whn m collapsd i thought m pregnent hogi...bt koi na..nd pls bring back m's halkat...bechari m..

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#993

hey navina fab chapter😊
something tells me uday wudnt hav died.. or that u wont kill him😉
btw am extremely glad that manyata killed that psycho..😆
continue soon.. pls bring back uday in d next chapter..
relly cant wait for him to be back.. after all our uday is immortal😆😆

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#994

and ya congrats once again for becoming a goldie🤗🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#995

Originally posted by: anushruthi
Hoooray
First to comment

fantastic double updates

loved them

it wasnt less than the climaxes of movies

bas***d Akash/Aryan

i hate the stupid blundering fool

I HOPE Uday is alive

he Should be alive

Please let him be alive ...

Loved the justice

Thankgoodness Manyata completed UV's

incomplete job

that son of a bitch Akash deserves a more painful death

do cont soon

How did u create the pumpkin text ??

i liked it very much

P.S.

I am sure You will get more than 35 likes

and Please bring our prince back alive

If UV isnt alive then your inbox will be flooded😉

who said " blackmail" doesnt pay ? 😆😆😆

Yikes😲 ... so long comment Anu😕!!!!

I gave a double dhamaka :

... in the 1st - UDAY DIED😭

... in the 2nd- AKASH DIED😈

I have 3 chapters left in this story ... in the last 1 ... I'm still deciding whether to kill Manyata OR NOT😉!!!

Anu - if u want me to keep Uday alive ... u better start praying that I get 35 LIKES 😃.

Manyata had to FINISH OFF the job , her husband left . And I think , she did it really well 😎.

Here's the link for the pumpkin graphic:

https://www.grinzy.com/glitter-text-generator-2.php?type=83

U just fill in the text that u want!!!

Hawww Anu ... u are blackmailing me 😭 !!!

MAIN TUJHE DEKH LOONGI😈 ( Haan nai toh😉)

Thanx a lot for commenting 🤗 .

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#996

Navi , if you have any final wish tell me now as am sending mr shark behind you for killing uday
how could you kill him?

wait dont run away. after reading the second part i told him to leave you alone as you killed akash. Atleast now i can breathe in peace as he is gone away for good

jokes apart , navi it was an awsome update
thank you for the double update
loved the last ( pls not the last) manveer scene it touched
poor uday he was so helpless
no i dont believe uday died ,he cant leave manyata and go
i loved the way mnyata killed akash .navi you didnt make him suffer much- not fair ok
pls do bring uday back give us our manveer back
or i may not hesitate to send mr shark behind you
pls continue soon
navi youll get more than 35 likes
so bring uday back pls

Edited by andy.a - 13 years ago

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#997

mindblowing update Navina...loved it...but ya very sad..i knew ur going to show something like this..plz bring Uday back soon...i feel bad for manyata 😭😭

but the way she killed Akash was excellent..I wished to watch it in TV but woh to hope hi reh gaya..so choro but u did it in a superb way Navina.👏👏.u actually bought a smile in my face with ur surprising update..i never thought ull update today...

But plz don't finsish this SS..make it a FF..plzzz...tell me do i have to sign a petition for this😆😆

Edited by sweet_gargi - 13 years ago