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shona136

@shona136

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

ohh god krani after such a long time...and what a briiliant effort, i must say...truly heart wrenching...u are blessed... brilliant work...keep it up...all the best ... waiting eagerly for the next parts...please dont delay so much...

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

Practically speechless in the excellence of all 4 posts!

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Khushi's outburst was PERFECT! She couldn't have said it any better and I am glad that when Arnav pushed her to the wall she didn't become scared, didn't succumb in any way but spoke her mind!

Very cutting indeed, very appropriate. She shouldn't regret saying these words - Arnav needed a reality check and when someone's pain is directly in front of you it is impossible to ignore. Glad he felt somewhat ashamed!

There are obviously things the readers are not privy to - bits of information on why Arnav is like this, exactly why they had to marry etc. But from Khushi's point of view you wrote her reacting the right way - she gave him a chance and made allowances, but he has to learn that no matter how much one detests one's wife this individual is a human being and they can only take so much insult with a smile before they crack!

The chapters describing Khushi's fear of being in an unknown place - her reaction on seeing a line outside a nightclub was spot on! And Arnav's indifference the perfect calm foil to the outburst that was well deserved!

Gonna go back and read that again, cos it was just that GOOD!

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aridj

@aridj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

as you say stressing parts .i felt as i'm khushi's place in street .aw the fear to be alone at unkowledge town and ur husband is there with you and ddt at the same time..tks for this parts.and plz make arnav regret his ref at khushi

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#434

OMG! I am speechless.. its PERFECT!.. especially last part..wow.. 👏

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Jenni

@prettyasjen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Wow! I'm so glad Khushi just didn't sit and bare it all! Finally, I think something's ticking in Arnav's head! Please update soon... I can't wait to read what happens next!

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

khushi's outburst 👏

i'm very much the same way, all happy and wonderful and self sacrificing and trying to make the best of the situation type person, that i was waiting for this outburst because it is exactly how i react. so very real 😆

i will also say though that if you keep it close to reality then arnav has a 90 degree slope climb if he wants to reach khushi.