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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#401

Thank u for updating, all four parts were amazing. I just love the way u pen down all of khushi's emotions so well. Khushi's outburst was so perfect, every word she said was right. You really make the story come to life, beautifully written. Im just so glad that Arnav felt a little guilty that he actually apologised, cant wait to read more. By looking at the teaser video i was expecting khushi to faint and arnav taking care of her, cant wait to see what happens next and how arnav behaves towards khushi.

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sheethal

@sheethal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4 parts in one go

superb👏

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Pd2012

@Pd2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

Excellent. Waiting for the next update. I know i am very greedy but cant help it.

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow!

The last 4 chapters were unbelievable. It was so worth the wait. You described Khushi's emotions so beautifully! I felt her pain so deeply. And when she finally went off on Arnav I was cheering her on. He has been such a jerk!

Loved it! Perfection!

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Edited all the four comments on 56 :-)

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Just saw you updated the other two as well...
And I wanna hug you for giving me the outburst I've been waiting for'!!!! That was absolutely brilliant!
I don't even have words to explain I'm practically shaking amazing!!!!

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choochootrain

@choochootrain

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#407

Good...v v good...kushi's outburst is long overdue...at times i do wonder how she managed to suppress her anger n pain again n again...poor gal...feel so sorry for her...don deserve such kind of hubby...now arnav shd realise khushi wont take his crap anymore...go kushi go!!!!

Love ur updatez...thank you!!

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uuna

@uuna

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#408

the trailer was absolutely fantastic. Perfect prequel to the actual read.

I loved how khushi controlled herself until she reached the bedroom. goes to show that despite all that has happened between them, the sanctity of the institution of marriage remains intact in her mind: where fights remain between husband and wife...and are not a public affiar -- something that we see very little of these days.