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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks a lot my dear mitrams.🤗
@Manish and Navya A big Thank you and Hug to you both🤗
@-vibhakarthi- Thank you. As navya said, SS means Short Story. 😃
@ pretty_h - Thanks a lot Hansa. You can call me Kavya😊
@silpasivan - Thank you dear. Sure will PM you😃
@Ani Thank you🤗
@-GiNa- Thank you Sherry😊
@delsi Thank you delsi😊
@ramasuresh78 Thank you rama😊
@X.Sisi94 Thanks a lot Siham.🤗
@ jeanniefan - Thank you!😊
@ Nadiine_- Thank you😊
@Savi_S - Thanks Savi...next part is coming soon😃
@zabo123 - Thank you zabo😃
@sandhyaa13 - Thank you sandhya. Sure will update😃
@nikkitta - Glad that you liked it. Thank you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: GiNa_kavya


Yeah I noticed it too dear.😆


rekha Di

I am back now.. dont wrry 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: GiNa_kavya


All the best for your results Manish. Now its time for some rest to you.😊


Thanks a lot Kavya... So sweet of you 😊 Aaram kismat mein hi nahi hai.. I am in the office 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: GiNa_kavya

Thanks a lot my dear mitrams.🤗
@-vibhakarthi- Thank you. As navya said, SS means Short Story. 😃
@ pretty_h - Thanks a lot Hansa. You can call me Kavya😊
@silpasivan - Thank you dear. Sure will PM you😃
@Ani Thank you🤗
@-GiNa- Thank you Sherry😊
@delsi Thank you delsi😊
@ramasuresh78 Thank you rama😊
@X.Sisi94 Thanks a lot Siham.🤗
@ jeanniefan - Thank you!😊
@ Nadiine_- Thank you😊
@Savi_S - Thanks Savi...next part is coming soon😃
@zabo123 - Thank you zabo😃
@sandhyaa13 - Thank you sandhya. Sure will update😃
@nikkitta - Glad that you liked it. Thank you😊


Where is my name Kavya 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Mitrams!😊 Glad that you all enjoyed the first part. Here is the second one. In this, the text in purple are flashback of the past. Hope you enjoy this part too.
Part - 2

She heard a shriek of a girl. She immediately opened her balcony door. She saw a dark gigantic man with angry eyes who gave her a terrific look. Mrs.Ganguly woke up screaming and shaking with fear from head to toe. By that time Doctor Doctor has arrived at Vicky's home. Hearing her scream both hurried to her house. There Mr.Ganguly is trying to calm her down. Doctor asked her to calm down and asked her what happened. She couldn't able to say anything. She just raised her hand and pointed out Vicky then the left-side wall of the room and became unconscious.

Doctor examines her. Vicky is confused as to why she pointed towards him and then had a look at the left-side wall of the room. It consisted of a night lamp, a scenery photo frame and a table with flower-vase. He couldn't able figure out anything. He, then, consoled Mr.Ganguly.

Later, he returned home. He felt so empty. He went to his room and sat on his bed.

He explained to Priya that what they have for each other is not love but care and friend-ship. Priya was in tears. She rushed out of the cabin. After a few days she came to meet Vicky and said even she feels the same that they are good friends and can't be lovers and that she had never felt the spark between them and it had always been an artificial force and now she understood it. Vicky apologized to her. But she said that they should thank God for making them realize as they wouldn't have made a successful couple in married life. Vicky then apologized to his boss and again to Priya.

Vicky stood up and went near the table and took the photo of his and Jeannie's.

After Priya met him, he was happy that Priya understood. He got leave and immediately returned to home.He couldn't find Jeannie in the living-room. So he went upstairs to his room. He got a call and it was his house-agent. He was talking to the agent in phone about his new house. He was very happy about the two good news. One is Priya understood him and the another was his new house is progressing well with the construction. Jeannie came there.

"What new house are you talking about, Juju?"

"Jeannie!!! I'm so happy today. My new house's construction is going on and I've another…"

Jeannie cut in and asked,"Juju, you are going to new house? Then what about this one?"

Vicky decided to play some pranks on her and said "You stay here Jeannie. I'll be going there with my sweetie-pie". He turned around and smirked.

Jeannie got angry and "Juju I'll not allow you to leave this house"

"Oh oh what?!? No Jeannie you can't stop me"

"I can, Juju"

"What'll you do Jeannie. Will you destroy my new house ya kya?"

"That's a good idea", thinking so she winked her eyes.

In a few seconds Vicky got a call from his house-agent who said that something unusual and unbelievable had happened. His new house had got destructed suddenly.

Vicky got infuriated. He turned towards Jeannie who was standing there smiling at him.

"How can you do this Jeannie? Do you know this is my dream house? My hard earned money. You just destroyed it with a wink. Do you know how painful it is?"

Jeannie was about to talk, "Juju I'll…"

"What Jeannie? Just shut up. Where…where it is? Ah here"…He took Jeannie's magical bottle house and without a second thought threw it to the floor.

Jeannie screamed, "Juju", in anguish.

It was broken and purple smoke is coming out of it.

"Now you know how I feel". Vicky stormed out of his room without even hearing her. He took his car and went to the construction site.

Tears fell from Vicky's eyes on the Jeannie's face in the photo. He cleared away his tears on the photo with his shirt and kept it on the table back. Then he left to living room.

But there are tears still flowing from the photo.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ---Manish---


Where is my name Kavya 😡

Kavya you are a gone case now 😉 Manish is behind ur back 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Manish---


Where is my name Kavya 😡


Manish, I replied to you and navya immediately and also separately. Thats why didn't include it there dear.😊 Do you think I'll forget/miss your names? Ofcourse not!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: GiNa_kavya


Manish, I replied to you and navya immediately and also separately. Thats why didn't include it there dear.😊 Do you think I'll forget/miss your names? Ofcourse not!😊

😉😊 chill kavya...for Gia, Manish will do anything...so he will not get angry 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: navyab

Kavya you are a gone case now 😉 Manish is behind ur back 😛


Haha!😆 No navya, I didn't miss both your names. Since I replied individually to you both, didn't include it there yaar😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyab

😉😊 chill kavya...for Gia, Manish will do anything...so he will not get angry 😛


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