FF Bani getting bold(pg299, part118) - Page 132

Created

Last reply

Replies

2.1k

Views

572.6k

Users

120

Likes

39

Frequent Posters

sanam84 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago
Navs as u said I sud warn u I am doing that don't read it.


Part 97

They polish off all the strawberries.

Jai smiling– I thought u dint want them, u have polished off the bowl.

Bani looking at him– I'll still say I dint want them but….., he cuts her off wid a full kiss on her lips.

Bani – wot was that for.

Jai – I just felt like, and I love the taste of cream and lipstick together.

Bani getting up – jai u r just too much, goes to the basin to wash her hands, jai comes from behind and starts washing his hands with her and nuzzling her neck. She throws back some water at him.

Jai – Bani!!!

Bani – just cooling u Mr walia.

Jai – mmm is that so, wot if I get you all hot n hungry now.

Bani – u can try.

Jai – is that a challenge. Soch lo Bani baad mein mat bolna I did not warn you, you r plying wid fire. Bani is quietly smiling at him, a wanton look in her eyes. (bani behave, u r makin me blush)

Adrenaline rushing thru him – mmmm I love challenges and this is one challenge I am gonna enjoy and succeed.

He goes to the fridge and takes out a wine bottle, pours it in two wine glass and brings it to her on the couch.

Bani – that's cheating Jai Walia, u want me to get drunk.

Jai huskily – No Bani its not cheating, the game u hav started, there r no rules in it. (Is that so, I dint know I thought every game has rules, but then how wud u know sam, u are so innocent)

Bani – I am not havin this anyway, Remember wot happened in Goa.

Jai laughs – how can I forget, you blabbered and then passed out on me, but it won't happen here I will keep u in check. (And who will keep u in check Mr Walia the mood u r in) And he hands the glass to her and glups down his. Bani takes few sips and they sit n talk for some time. Then Jai takes her hands and says "lets Dance"

Bani – on this music (its very soft n slow)

Jai – u'll hear music darling just come. (navs there's still time STOP)

He takes her to the middle of the room, takes her in his arms but keeps a little distance, moves around dancing, eyes devouring her, then very huskily starts singing close to her ears (the male version guys by Kunal Ganjawala, love his voice, n love this song, sorry if som1 does not like the song choice but I cud not come up wid any other song given the situation)

Teri chaahton ke jal se, Bana hai, dil mein sanam
Kuwaan kuwaan pyaar ka, I wanna make love to you
Gawaara mujhko nahin, Aitraaz yaar ka

Main na jaanu kaisi ye pyaas hai, Kyun chubhta har ehsaas hai
Aankhon mein chaahat ka khwaab hai, Har dhadkan kyun betaab hai
Teri khwaahishon ke damse, Khelenge ham sanam
Juwa juwa pyaar ka, I wanna make love to you
Gawaara mujhko nahin, Aitraaz yaar ka

Rehena hai mushkil ab hosh mein, Aaja bhar loon tujhe aagosh mein
Tujhse ye kaisi laagi lagan, Seene mein jalti hai ik agan
Teri saason ki mahekse, Uthh raha hai sanam
Dhuwaan dhuwaan pyaar ka, I wanna make love to you

(why always Sanam yaar, cant they use balma, deewana, janemaan etc, in wrtitero ka kuch karo yaar mere naam ko mazak bana ke rakh diya hai)

All the time he is singing, he keeps trailing his fingers on her face, neck arms, goes around her doing the same on her back and shoulders, his eyes full of obsession locked with her, she going insane, stops dancing n just stands there while he plays her like an instrument, she tries to come close but he does not let her. He curls his finger into her hair and drew her forward, tilting her face up to him, her lips parted in reaction but he does not take it, she was breathing quickly her chest rising and falling. He knew she was responding to him but he kept singing huskily driving her crazy.

Then he takes her back to the couch, she is trembling, his husky voice filled with so much passion ringing in her ears still. He goes to the fridge to refill the glass sees some ice cube (SAM STOP ur thoughts, there r kids on this forum too all right change track) he puts his palm on the freezer base, then comes back and places his palms on the back of her neck, his hands are ice cold but it scorches her, (wow Sam not bad that is kinda sensuous) he then joins her on the couch and gives the glass to her and sits close to her but still havin some distance. (Am I making sense) he takes her hand and starts carving letters on her palms just looking in her eyes deeply, not sayin a word (ah those deep sexy eyes). Her mind instinctively starts reading wot he is carving, she blushes shivers running up her spine at wot he wrote, pulls her hand back and he lets her. Smiles at her

Jai -Bani I want you to sing for me now.

Bani shakes her head, dose not trust her voice.

Jai – bani please

Bani – u did not dance for me when I asked you

Jai – I'll do everything for you but right now you sing and like u did at the party you have to reply to my song.

Bani blushing – there can be no reply to that (I also don't know guys)

Jai – try

Bani starts singing but her voice is breaking, when she is on the second line jai takes her hand, trails his lips on her palms moving up, bani choking on the words, Jai says–" bani don't stop"

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan

Baahon Mein Teri Yun Kho Gaye Hai
Armaan Dabe Se Jagne Lage Hai
Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin
Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

(after this song I am not sure who was seducing whom, the way bani sang it, spl the line Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan )

he nuzzles her neck, drops kisses on her face he is not unaffected by her husky singing, desire in her voice, the pressure of his lips increase his hand moving all over her body, and bani cant take it any more, She places the palms of her hands on his chest and pushes him.

Bani – – jai dont

Jai– Dont wot

Bani passionately- jai please

Jai impatient – please wot, say it Bani.

Bani smiles wickedly – please don't do that.

Jai frustrated – all right I give up, I concede defeat. I cant take it anymore.

Bani shyly– jai to tell you the truth you had won even before you stated. I love you and I want you.

Jai is blown over he cant speak after hearing that, he carries her to the bedroom.



Navs navs r u ok I told u, now u can't blame me.

Guys I wrote this part, then rewrote and I did it more then once, hope I hav not gone overboard, hav tried to keep it romantic but if some of u think it's a bit too much then sorry. But yaaro meri kya galti hai I get so many msgs for more JB romance to ab lo.

sanam84 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Taz234

Hey Sam, I was gone for a couple of days and what is this I am hearing??? Your planning on ending this ff??? NAHINNNNNNN!!! AISA PLZ MAT KARO!!!! Even the thought of u ending this ff is making me cry…. 😭 😭 agar band kardiya to mein kahaan jaoongi!!! 😕 Whilst away from my computer for the last two days I was thinking "what must be happening in your ff"…when I got back the first thing I catch up on your ff…loved it… 👏 👏 👏 the strawberries and cream…and the songs u added…specially "Tune mera chain wain le liya, ajab sa haal waal kardiya, yeh kaisa dard ward de diya, Oh Walia!" I like this song and often hum it thinking of my munna! 😳 😉
If daily updates for u r getting difficult…then try every other day…but plz for Ramu sakes don't end it!!! Keep it going girl…u know I had a dream yesterday (yeah! Yeah I know u all must be saying I dream a lot, but being exposed to jai on a daily basis has this effect! 😉 ) that Ram read ur ff and posted comments on it saying how paagal we all are..and how he loves reading all the Jai and Bani antics! 😆 For a minute I thought the dream was real and was dying to get back to my comp. Sam u never know he might just pop in one day…my dreams can come true occasionally…like when I dreamt of Salman and him telling me to come to his concert, there was no way I could go, but I had this same dream three times, and at the last minute someone planned to take me!!! I was over the moon! Not to mention I was seated in the same place I imagined in my dream…I thought it was quite creepy in fact! !!! Keep it going girl…otherwise I will have to invade your dreams to prompt u to continue writing!!!! 😆 😆 😆
Taz

that was so sweet , well i am continuing for now but ek baar in log ko mumbai to wapas laon, they seem to be goin insane ye JB mere ko is forum se bahar niklwa ke hi manege😉as for Ram posting here i hav had the same dream and i know dreams dont come true but agar kabhi any KS member posts here i will faint and if Ram does it then thats it i am dead.😳😳

Henna 786 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago
😳 😳 awwwww

cant wait for the next part now 😆

Henna x
sanam84 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: j&b84

wow taz that so gd. tt u got u watch ur fav salman show. pls do invade in sam dream and prompt her to continue with her ff

ya same here u got to watch salman i got carried away wid the ram comment so forgot that, and hina behave, taz dont invade my dream yaar i love my sleep and already hav to many ppl invading cant handle it anymore😉JW/RK/AB/VM now even Bani at times so .......😃

sanam84 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna 786

😳 😳 awwwww

cant wait for the next part now 😆

Henna x

are jaan loge kya😉it took me 3 hrs to do that part i just posted and u r askin for the next part lol😃

Henna 786 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sanam84

are jaan loge kya😉it took me 3 hrs to do that part i just posted and u r askin for the next part lol😃

😆 aww bless.. kk i cant wait..

Ramadhan mubarak btw.. (ur muslim nah?)

Henna x

***srk*** thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
very good sanam! very nice and romantic part! well done!
u know everytime i listen to a song which hace ur name, i just think of u! hahah thats true and especially when i listen to jaan meri jaa rahi sanammmm! hehehe sorry! 😊
TiaMaria93 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pakiza_srk

very good sanam! very nice and romantic part! well done!
u know everytime i listen to a song which hace ur name, i just think of u! hahah thats true and especially when i listen to jaan meri jaa rahi sanammmm! hehehe sorry! 😊



SAME HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahahahha...well it's been quite some time since i read the parts, busy with school and what not....ahahaha, u keep changing the track ms. sanam, what dirtiness are u playing at?! ahahahahahahah ok ok just kidding, ur all adults so i guess u know these things....i guesssss i'm gonna have to stop reading this FF though, along with all others, cuz my mom insists that i break away from my IF/KS obsession now and concentrate on my work, so i've been assigned a weekly ban from my PC!!! well i can use it, but it's like a ban for me cuz i see no point going on any other website...and mum has password protected the website somehow, so i can only go on maybe on a saturday, or another day if i'm lucky!! well, all the best yaar, i wished i cudda keep up with the FFs...but!

Anyways, it was the greatest FF i've ever read, it made me laugh the most(remember the millions of 'hehehehe's' and 'hahahahaha's'??), and it definitey made my heart race the most!! and i do hope u continue along with it (for the rest of ur fans' sake)..........and now u have one less kid on board to look out for!!

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehahahahahahahahahah
haahhaahahahahahehheheheheheheheheheheheehehehahahahaha

Byeeee guyssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xoxo Tiff xoxo


sweetu144 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
😳 😳
WOW
That was so hot and intense!
Made my imagination run wild 😳 😳
wow amazing!
Nice i loved this part, along with the many others.
I think i am obsessed with your ff 😆 😆 😳
Amazing and please don't end your ff!
Amazing and intense...
Luv
Sweetu.
Piku_S thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 19 years ago
😳
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was romantic, love and romance in shimla 😳
tsk tsk bani never play with fire, you always get burnt 😳
plz write soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".