Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 37

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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok Shina....let me breath first lol! My heart beat just went up by like a million lol! I can't blieve all the twists you gave in ONE chapter. You're just amazing.

OK....soooo Adi is Anjali's brother. I get that...and She's also Ajrun's sister. Dude, she better be Jai's sister too! I'm telling you....she better not come between Jani at all. cuz u know me...i'd go crazy! and u don't want me to go crazy!!!

Arjun is Ranveer's father. Ok...im assuming Arjun had an affair with Jigs or something but Adi raised him as his own son. Maybe that's why Anjali hates jigs?

How is Anjali connected to Jai? She better not be an old flame of Jai! She's not allowed to come between Jani...not after everything that's happened. Btw, why single out Jai? Maybe she's his adopted siser? Or his favorite sister? the baby of the family? Maybe Adi and Jai are brothers? Girl, this suspense is killing me. u just have no idea...im going crazy here. (maybe u know cuz im being a pain on msn? hehe)

OK Tarun and Anjali, i think they would make a good couple. My only question is, how is arjun connected to the PR raaz? is he the one who killed? Wait...what IF Tarun turned out to be Bani's bro? and he tells the truth about their mother dying some other way...and not being killed?

Something yaar, just something for my Jani to not split.
Shina, girl, i'm telling you, u better not harm my Jani. I've already ruined it by opening my big mouth earlier and giving u a stupid idea. You should know, never ever listen to me lol!

As always awesome chapter. I LOVED IT! and u know it cuz u know u write awesomingly (is that even a word?) well. can't wait to read the next part. dying here. the suspense is killing me.

update soon....early tomorrow....so i can read before going to work and not after!

love,
anam
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Posted: 19 years ago
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what an awesome part! i am speechless! plz do continue!

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Posted: 19 years ago
Arre bhaago 😆 Arjun aur Ranveer ka baap 😆 this is getting way too good yaar,don't end it yet......any ur fanfic is not crappy,u need to stop saying that it's simply mindblowing!Plz continue soon!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh wow! that will be interesting! plz continue soon! well done 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: khattimeeti

Oh god... dont tell me Anjali is jai old flame 🤢 the update was good.. wat arjun is ranveer's father.... how disgusting........ oh god......... i really hate jigs......
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heheh you have to wait to find out anjali and jai's relation. lol.

yep Arjun is ranveer's father.

lol i just added i hate jigs cuz you say it. lol.

Thanks hun,

shina

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: inavars

i did what i usually do reading.....read the ending 😆

awesome part shina........this seems really interesting....although i'm perfectly confused....awww ranveer...poor guy...huggy 🤗 and bani ma'am has to investigate in every story apparently 😆

cool.....will read the previous parts now 😉

heheh sravs hun you really amaze me.

i hope you find it interesting when you actually read all the parts.

yaar bani is just like that, until she doesn't start her investigation she can't rest in peace. lol.

lol will be waiting for your comments for the previous parts, hopefully you wont' be confused after reading those. 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jigna_07

Shina!!! Arjun is Ranveer's father?!?!!?!?!
oh man!!!
please continue soon!!!!

thanks hun!!!!!

heheh the details in the next part.

shina

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

whoa!!!!!!!!!.. awwww man i like tarun and anjali.. wat's up wit jai and anjali .. arjun's ranveer's father.. another WHOAAA.. so many questions left unanswered.. so many.. im so happy that ranveer cares bout his mama mami so much.. cho chweet 😳 .. awwwww i hope jai returns home soon.. let bygones be bygones.. 😃 but now im worried cuz of anjali.. cuz tarun's head over heels in luv wit her.. and if anjali and jai had a thing in d past.. i hope that doesn't get stretched.. they just leave it at that. as jai's wit bani now.. wow.. that was gr8888.. and i did NOT get bored or fall asleep i was just goin thru 😲 and then more of 😲 when i read d unanswered questions.. haila.. can't wait fo d nxt part.. 👏

heheh Jai and Anjali's story will be revealed soon. don't worry. lol.

yep ranveer is sweet, what can he do he loves his mama and mami so much thatz the least he could do.

about jai anjali bani and tarun i dont know will have to wait and see i guess. lol.

ehhe thanks for not falling asleep.

I hope i can answer all the unanswered questions soon.

Thanks,

shina

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Posted: 19 years ago
dont you dare finish in two parts!! 😡 😆 the twists are really good hun, you have to update soon, and dont even think of finishing !!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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