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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Woww awsome concpt. . . . . .
And 1st update was super awsome. . . . .
Kriya and rey itni jaldi BFf bann gaye. . . .
Lovd the update. . . .
Pls continue soo. . . .
And pls pm me wen u update the nxt part. . . .
Update soon. . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Wow . . . . Lovely story...
fb frndship 😛
rocking concept . . . . 🥳
kriya sweet 16 & rey handsome hunk of 20 😃
do pm me...
I never knew dat u r on IF too . . . . .
I used to visit ur page alot 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Woww awsome concpt. . . . . .
And 1st update was super awsome. . . . .
Kriya and rey itni jaldi BFf bann gaye. . . .
Lovd the update. . . .
Pls continue soo. . . .
And pls pm me wen u update the nxt part. . . .
Update soon. . . .


i m glad u liked it😊
thankx for your lovely comment
yaa ill cont.
will surely pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: yogini64

Wow . . . . Lovely story...
fb frndship 😛
rocking concept . . . . 🥳
kriya sweet 16 & rey handsome hunk of 20 😃
do pm me...
I never knew dat u r on IF too . . . . .
I used to visit ur page alot 😊



😳ohh thankx alot for such a cute comment
yaa surely ill pm u😊
yaar it has just been 2 months i hav joined😃
sorry which page u r talking about???😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
awesome...
plz update soon n plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
heya i m back wih the update hope u r liking my writing so here goes the update
after having no contact with rey since a month she was very upsat she thought all this friendship and all was fake and he was just talking to her for a time pass so to get chilled a bit she went to take a cold water bath after she went in the washroom 2 minutes later her cell rang she thought that her college friend had told her that she will call as she had some work so she wore a bath robe and came out to pick the call when she reached the cell se saw an unknown number she was confused that who it must be but she picked up the call ansaid hello on the otherside of the call a guy answered hey with a smile in his hey
kriya-whoz this
guy-didnt u recoginze me
kriya-no may i know your name
guy-i dont need to tell u my name u already know my name (after he gave a small laugh)
by this time kriya was pissed off
kriya-dekho agar aapna name bolna hai and seedha seedha baat karni hai to karo (she was cut)
guy-aarey aarey chill itna gusaa aacha ni and thode din baat ni ki tum to mujha bhool hi gai huh aaisa bhi koi best friend hota hai???( with a sad voice)
kriya-hain???
guy-hope itna time chat ki hai abb to aachi edit banana serkh hi gai hogi tum (he winked and then laughed)
kriya-u how dare u call me i hate u
u idiot where were u so many days u horrifed me dumb do u even care that how tensed others r for u
(hope u all guessed it none other than our rey)
rey-woah woah girl chill yake a break yaar ley me speak also
kriya-ohh sorry
rey-now listen i hav something for u
kriya-what(exicited)
rey-for that u hav to go to CCD of charni road at 4 in evening on this sunday k
kriya-k ill be there but what is there ??
rey-surprise
kriya-surprise wow i cant want
rey-i know babes k now i gtg byee n yaa this is my no. save this k byee catch u on facebook tc
kriya-byee(in a sad voice)
rey-hey y sad
kriya-nothing byee
rey-i know u r sad but i m sure on seeing your surprise on sunday u will be very happy
kriya-hmm
rey-now cheer up n byee
kriya-byeeafter cutting the call kriya was feeling out of the world she had no words how much happy she was
kriya-ohh god i cant wait when will this sunday come n when will i get the surprise
pbut this was not the real reason for happinese the real reason was that she talked to rey and he is totally fit n fine
its was thursay there were 2 days more to go for sunday she used to chat with him and used to ask him about the surprise but he being he ignored
finally after waiting so much the day arrived she was very exicited but in mornin she was alone at home the door bell ranged ahe was still in her night dress she opened the door and found a boy with jeans n top n his face was hidden with cap
she asked yes the boy showed him the currior
curior boy- miss kriya ghai
kriya-yup
curior boy-mam i hav a curior for u
kriya-me?? who has send it
curior boy-mam its from some reyansh singhania
kriya-what rey k give it
she tooked the curior n in excitment she opened the curior in front of the curior boy all the time there smile played on curior boy's face seeing kriyas exicitment
she opened the curior and found a beautiful red knee length dreess seeing it she could only utter 1 word wow her smile reaching her ears( means she was smiling that wide)
curior boy was very happy seeing that n he did a samll chukle which brought kriya back to earth and she starred at the curior boy after that the boy sayed nothing they finished the fornalaties of reciving the curior and the she clased the door after she closed the door the curior boy turned and looked up for the 1st time chuckled and said pagal and then again laughed and then he left
ohk guyyzz thatzz it for today sorry if u thought its small but i hav to write from cell so soorry k now hell tired see u later
do hit like button n comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Woww woww and woww. . . . . .
At last we got our nxt part. . . , . . .
Bt,mujhe pm nahi milla. .
Nevrmind,
update was awsome and the way u describd the curior boy,m sure voh rey hi hoga,
and the suprise. . .hmm. . . , . . . .
I guess is tat rey and kriya face to face milenge. . , . . . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna,
and pls nxt part bada likhna,
and most imp.,
dnt 4get to pm me. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28



😊i didnt expect u will comment after your that alvida update but thanx for the comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Woww woww and woww. . . . . .
At last we got our nxt part. . . , . . .
Bt,mujhe pm nahi milla. .
Nevrmind,
update was awsome and the way u describd the curior boy,m sure voh rey hi hoga,
and the suprise. . .hmm. . . , . . . .
I guess is tat rey and kriya face to face milenge. . , . . . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna,
and pls nxt part bada likhna,
and most imp.,
dnt 4get to pm me. . .




ohh sorry was not getting any idea what to update next so i took a bit long
and dorry i was chatting wid some1 so i didnt send pm to any 1 next time pakka
u got most of the story yaar 😃
and yaa sure ill next part big with pm's
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Awesum updates..just read d whole concept..luv it..thnx for d pm

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