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sreshta90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

hey its awsome.. i love the way u wrote explaining every feeling clearly..plzz do PM me if u update it.. plzzz

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Shabana0786

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Interesting concept!!..

Looking foward to more of this FF...

Thanks for the pm..

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NeethuEli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Fab. I just love the beginning. Cont soon.

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esha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

hey elena... waooo new ff lmaooo havent even read ttoml and humsafar or venice welll most of the parts... sooo busy... anywayz commenting now... i commented on your bllogs as anonymous lmaooo could make an acount... anywayz what can i say ur an amazing writer the way you describe each and every moment and ur characterization i must say it;s awsome... this ff is gripping too... will comment regurlary now that i am free... lmao...

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sn2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

It's interesting how you manage come with these new ideas and again love the way you portray the characters!! Just recently read TTOML and love how this story seems completely different from that one! I've read other comments talking about your other FF's apart from TTOML, would love to read them so was wondering if you could send me links to those please?? Please update soon! :) xx

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sakshi_aditi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

very very nice! 😊

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MaebyFunke

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Brilliant it is! Your works are always very effective and this one gonna be something beyond that. I love the starting how you gave an insight of her parents and her hatred towards her father! I see a really beautiful story coming up which gonna make me wait like a mad.

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Crazyvirmanfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Amazing as always :) i have pm you with my email address :)

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Niki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Hey Elena,
Sorry have been away from IF for a couple of weeks because of studies, so I missed this beautiful FF. Received your PMs for Humsafar and this one, and now will read them all peacefully
Well firstly Woah...!! Another FF...!!!! 😲
okay I know too dramatic... 😆
But seriously you are absolutely Fantastic as usual, I don't need to say this because every time I feel short of words for you amazing works

Thanks for the PM and please include me in your PM list for this one 😊

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maham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Hi Elena,

Interesting start. Very well written.. You captured Maanvi's pain well. I have always admired precision, especially when my own writing seems to lack so much of it. The backdrop looks interesting.. I like how you told the story from the POV of Maanvi's Father and not Maanvi herself which would have been the case with most writers. Resentment, hurt, abandonment issues and the loss of her Mother... Overall very intriguing. A trip to India and Virat enters?

I will pm you my email ID for updates... God. IF really is no place for a writer sometimes.. Maybe I should be as strict as you. Perhaps I'd actually get more feedback then. 😆 You wrote this after finishing an assignment? Haha inspiration is such a thrill sometimes.. I don't blame you at all. 😆

Maham.

p.s: Love the name!

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