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Hey guys...
I am back with another os...
Ok i have already written  a few os's on arrange marriage and again this ine us having that kind  of story,but i love writing on arrange marriages as they gave a feel of  reality amd the otional display of two souls, totally strangers, coming  togethe, feel so romantic.

Beware:
its gonna b a long story n i will update in parts...

So here it goes...

Kaise Unhe Main Pukaron
OS | 13

AR Version

(Scroll down for ARSH Version)


Gumsum gumsum gup chup, gumsum gup chup 
Halchal halchal ho gayi teri, honth hai tere chup
Khalbal khalbal ho gayi teri, baithi hai tu gupchup


riddhima  was seating in her room infront of the dressing table. few of her  cousins were surrounding her. while someone was busy with her hairs,  other was trying to make sure that her makeup was done perfectly. it  shouldnt be over but it should be enough to make her beautiful facial  features prominant. muskaan was busy pinning the duppata over her head  that had to be followed on her shoulder. the single safety pin, that was  tightly held in between her lips, was showing how concentrated she  is.and why not, she was asked specially by smriti, riddhima's mother to look  after everything aand being riddhima's bestfriend she was adamant that all  came out perfect. muskaan choosed the sweet elbow length sleeved purple  kameez having a patiala shalwar below. the silver work on the v-necked  dress and on the sleeves was looking so pretty against her milky skinand  muskaan made sure that the duppata is being wrapped in such a way that  it will show that work. riddhima's lips were shinninh with a light gloss.  her eyes were looking dazzling after kohl, eyeliner and mascara was  applied on them. her cheeks were having the natural pink color, all  credit to her blushes. her cousin's were mercilessly teasing her. "didi,  tell us na...how r u feeling?" her younger cousin asked her in a  teasing tone that made her face beet rooted red. "riddhima, are you too  feelin butterflies in ur stomach like i felt for the first time your  jeeju came to see me" now, her elder cousin aria asked in a dreamy tone.  "didi" riddhima whinned with a cute face that made all her cousins  giggled. "whats going on here?" riddhima mother asked as she entered the  room and pushed all the girls aside to get close to riddhima "why are you  teasing my riddhima?" she said with an affectionate tone hushing all girls  away and turn to look at riddhima. "ohh..." a happy sound escaped from her  mother's throat as she was unable to say anything else. smriti hands came  up to cover her face as her eyes get teary. she cant believe that her  daughter grew up so fast. it seems like yesterday she hold her for the  first time in her hands while laying on that hospital bed. she was  adoring her tiny baby but everytime, noticing her sweet features, and  delicate body, all she qanted was to cherish this baby forever. time  passed on quickly and now, her daughter is on the verge to start her own  life. riddhima eyes too filled up seeing her mother teary, and getting up,  she hugged her tightly. thekr hands were running on eachother backs,  ensurring eachother that everything would be fine, and unknown to smriti  and others, that hug gave her lots of confidence. "aunty, dont cry...see  riddhima is also about to cry...and we havent worked so hard to let all  that ruined by these awful tears...you both can have ur share after this  rishta is finalized" muskaan commebt made all other smile as smriti  break the hug and hushed her. "ok, i will call and then you can bring  riddhima down" then she turnwd back to riddhima, applied a black mark behind  her ars and after squeezing her hand, left the room.


Pyaare pyaare chehre lekar dediya ishaara
Dekha teri aankhon mein hai sapna koi pyaara
Humse gori naa tu sharma, kehde humse zara 

armaan  was sitting downstairs with his family. his parents rahul and juhi malik was just so happy that finally, there son has agreed to get  married. was that easy? they had a whole lonf story to tell in the reply  of this question but do they care. there son agreed and that was all  that married. armaan cleared it before that he doesnt have any feelings  for any girl and just was lingering on his wedding topic because he  wanted to make his own name in his father's textile business and soon  with his hard work and determination, he did it. he is 28 years old and  really successful and now he kniw, as the struggling part is over, he  would have time for his personal life too. rahul and juhi immediately  started the search of there to be bahu. while rahul wanted someone from  fthe family of his business fellows, juhi was out looking for a match  with her kitty party friends daughter. armaan was fed up with the amount  of pics, his parents showed to him and he was feeling so irritated.  above that his sister, sapna, instead of helping him, all will do is to  laugh out loud on his miserable state as mostly he would b sitting in  between his parents and each one will look at him with expactant eyes,  and damn, he dont want to disapppoint any one. "then marry two girls,  bhai" sapna would chip in and all he wouldo is look daggers at her as  she would giggle. "mom, dad...that enough..."finally he said one day. " i  dont want to marry any business associate daughter or any kitty party's  friends daughter...i want a simple girl...who will love to make this  house a living heaven for me and for you with her love...not a business  advisor or a party host, please" and that was the time, when his lovely  bua came with an appropriate proposal and he agreed to go with it.  lovely bua was close to armaan and knew him better than juhi. armaan  trusted her more than anyone so he even didn't dare look at the picture.  and here, now, while sipping his tea, he was waiting for her entrance.

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile


soon,  the shimmering voice of the anklet ring in his ars. Strange, even in  such bustle of there families talking, he could feel a real soothing  presence. the giggles erupted from a corner. a silence took place in the  hall and he lifted up his face to see what cause it when his eyes saw  and witnessed the beauty of a God creation. she was looking so delicate.  her persona seems so enchanting. her downcasted lashes and her crimson  cheeks completely explaining her nervousness. the girls beside her wete  supporting her as she lead them to the place, armaan and his family was  sitting. "beautiful" armaan heard his mother whisper and sapna, who was  sitting beside him, nudged him with a knowing look. riddhima came and took  blessings from his parents who blessed her with happy chirpy voices.  sapna was being introduced by lovely bua who was a friend of riddhima's  chachi. and sapna moving forward, hugged her tightly. armaan was quietly  peeking in between tsee her and his heart doesn,t have enough fill to  admire her while his mind, doesnt seem to find enough words to define  her. muskaan made her sit on the sofa, opposite to him, the competent  boy for her best friend, looking at her in awe. she bend closer to  riddhima's ear and whispered. "jus once, look up and see, how handsome he  is...and how dreamingly, he is looking at you" riddhima blushed at  muskaan's comment but looked up for a fraction of a second only to get  caught by the dazzling brown eyes, she had ever saw.


Kaise Unhe Main Pukaron
OS | 13

ARSH Version


Gumsum gumsum gup chup, gumsum gup chup 
Halchal halchal ho gayi teri, honth hai tere chup
Khalbal khalbal ho gayi teri, baithi hai tu gupchup


shilpa  was seating in her room infront of the dressing table. few of her  cousins were surrounding her. while someone was busy with her hairs,  other was trying to make sure that her makeup was done perfectly. it  shouldnt be over but it should be enough to make her beautiful facial  features prominant. muskaan was busy pinning the duppata over her head  that had to be followed on her shoulder. the single safety pin, that was  tightly held in between her lips, was showing how concentrated she  is.and why not, she was asked specially by smriti, shilpa's mother to look  after everything aand being shilpa's bestfriend she was adamant that all  came out perfect. muskaan choosed the sweet elbow length sleeved purple  kameez having a patiala shalwar below. the silver work on the v-necked  dress and on the sleeves was looking so pretty against her milky skinand  muskaan made sure that the duppata is being wrapped in such a way that  it will show that work. shilpa's lips were shinninh with a light gloss.  her eyes were looking dazzling after kohl, eyeliner and mascara was  applied on them. her cheeks were having the natural pink color, all  credit to her blushes. her cousin's were mercilessly teasing her. "didi,  tell us na...how r u feeling?" her younger cousin asked her in a  teasing tone that made her face beet rooted red. "shilpa, are you too  feelin butterflies in ur stomach like i felt for the first time your  jeeju came to see me" now, her elder cousin aria asked in a dreamy tone.  "didi" shilpa whinned with a cute face that made all her cousins  giggled. "whats going on here?" shilpa mother asked as she entered the  room and pushed all the girls aside to get close to shilpa "why are you  teasing my shilpa?" she said with an affectionate tone hushing all girls  away and turn to look at shilpa. "ohh..." a happy sound escaped from her  mother's throat as she was unable to say anything else. smriti hands came  up to cover her face as her eyes get teary. she cant believe that her  daughter grew up so fast. it seems like yesterday she hold her for the  first time in her hands while laying on that hospital bed. she was  adoring her tiny baby but everytime, noticing her sweet features, and  delicate body, all she qanted was to cherish this baby forever. time  passed on quickly and now, her daughter is on the verge to start her own  life. shilpa eyes too filled up seeing her mother teary, and getting up,  she hugged her tightly. thekr hands were running on eachother backs,  ensurring eachother that everything would be fine, and unknown to smriti  and others, that hug gave her lots of confidence. "aunty, dont cry...see  shilpa is also about to cry...and we havent worked so hard to let all  that ruined by these awful tears...you both can have ur share after this  rishta is finalized" muskaan commebt made all other smile as smriti  break the hug and hushed her. "ok, i will call and then you can bring  shilpa down" then she turnwd back to shilpa, applied a black mark behind  her ars and after squeezing her hand, left the room.


Pyaare pyaare chehre lekar dediya ishaara
Dekha teri aankhon mein hai sapna koi pyaara
Humse gori naa tu sharma, kehde humse zara 


armaan  was sitting downstairs with his family. his parents rahul and juhi malik was just so happy that finally, there son has agreed to get  married. was that easy? they had a whole lonf story to tell in the reply  of this question but do they care. there son agreed and that was all  that married. armaan cleared it before that he doesnt have any feelings  for any girl and just was lingering on his wedding topic because he  wanted to make his own name in his father's textile business and soon  with his hard work and determination, he did it. he is 28 years old and  really successful and now he kniw, as the struggling part is over, he  would have time for his personal life too. rahul and juhi immediately  started the search of there to be bahu. while rahul wanted someone from  fthe family of his business fellows, juhi was out looking for a match  with her kitty party friends daughter. armaan was fed up with the amount  of pics, his parents showed to him and he was feeling so irritated.  above that his sister, sapna, instead of helping him, all will do is to  laugh out loud on his miserable state as mostly he would b sitting in  between his parents and each one will look at him with expactant eyes,  and damn, he dont want to disapppoint any one. "then marry two girls,  bhai" sapna would chip in and all he wouldo is look daggers at her as  she would giggle. "mom, dad...that enough..."finally he said one day. " i  dont want to marry any business associate daughter or any kitty party's  friends daughter...i want a simple girl...who will love to make this  house a living heaven for me and for you with her love...not a business  advisor or a party host, please" and that was the time, when his lovely  bua came with an appropriate proposal and he agreed to go with it.  lovely bua was close to armaan and knew him better than juhi. armaan  trusted her more than anyone so he even didn't dare look at the picture.  and here, now, while sipping his tea, he was waiting for her entrance.

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile


soon,  the shimmering voice of the anklet ring in his ars. Strange, even in  such bustle of there families talking, he could feel a real soothing  presence. the giggles erupted from a corner. a silence took place in the  hall and he lifted up his face to see what cause it when his eyes saw  and witnessed the beauty of a God creation. she was looking so delicate.  her persona seems so enchanting. her downcasted lashes and her crimson  cheeks completely explaining her nervousness. the girls beside her were  supporting her as she lead them to the place, armaan and his family was  sitting. "beautiful" armaan heard his mother whisper and sapna, who was  sitting beside him, nudged him with a knowing look. shilpa came and took  blessings from his parents who blessed her with happy chirpy voices.  sapna was being introduced by lovely bua who was a friend of shilpa's  chachi. and sapna moving forward, hugged her tightly. armaan was quietly  peeking in between tsee her and his heart doesn,t have enough fill to  admire her while his mind, doesnt seem to find enough words to define  her. muskaan made her sit on the sofa, opposite to him, the competant  boy for her best friend, looking at her in awe. she bend closer to  shilpa's ear and whispered. "jus once, look up and see, how handsome he  is...and how dreamingly, he is looking at you" shilpa blushed at  muskaan's comment but looked up for a fraction of a second only to get  caught by the dazzling brown eyes, she had ever saw.

will update next part asap...No PMS Yet

Edited by cool_SK - 11 years ago