Kashmakash -thread 2-Epilogue(pg 99) - Page 72

Originally posted by: achiever

its A. W. E. S. O. M. E!!!

tht awesome!

the tender father daughter moments wer so heartwarming...

oh Aasha is sooo sooo cute.. i luved the little details of her.. the way u described..

so finally its happy endings for our AshNi.. ashu Nidh and thr little bundle of joy!!!

God Bless!

thnk u sooo sooo much for this wonderful wonderful FF.. i luved ur AshuNidhi soo much.. thr luv, thr passion.. thr problems all seemed so real and i felt so attached to thm.. I m not sad bt happy tht thy r gonna have a wonderful life!!! Cheers!!

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Oh God...just tooo good for words...feel so privileged to get to read such kind of work...am so very lucky to get to read such awesome chap. on my dearest ASHNI...Thanks a lottt...!👏 Oh...finally it has come to an end😭...unbelievably splendid journey is what Kashmakash has been all about...just don't have enough words to express myself...you ROCK...👍🏼...Looking forward very eagerly to your new work...take your time...and a very very 'HAPPY DIWALI' to you and your family...!🤗

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Beautiful chap, and touching too. Its cute how ashu does nt get it when nidhi says doc gave the green signal. 😉

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

You write so well...we are lucky that we have a writer of your caliber on the forum

🤗thank you..☺️

P.S loved Anji's comments about the 'heartstone' look in Asha's eyes

i think thats the best compliment one can give a man...that his kid looks like him...

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

awww...what a beautiful ending di... Amazzzinnng !!!

loved every bit of it... Kashmakash was truly a fab FF...

ashu and nidhi's love, their fights, their passion, their insecurities... everything was brought out sooo well through you writing..🤪

thanku sooo much for giving us the pleasure to read this FF...

.🤗 and...

um...eagerly waiting for a new FF from ur side 😃

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

A very well-written and a truly heartwarming finale...I can't help saying this again...your stories always leave me with the same warm, fuzzy feeling that I get after watching a Sooraj Barjatya film..!

Originally posted by: turags

thank you Sujatha...

i am not a huge fan of SB's films but the fact that you are comparing this FF to that...is indeed a great compliment to me..😃

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Like I mentioned... I loved the chapter... to the last word...

itna lamba review!!!! but thank you so much...

I loved Ashu's reaction through and through... I felt like Ashu... and yet couldn't help empathize with him... feel sorry for him... His reactions were so believable... ... Perfect!!!

The family reactions were awsesome... Each person was full on in their element... 😆😆

writing the family reactions and making sure i didn't miss anyone is the toughest part...

We spoke about this... so maybe the reactions were more believable to me... i think... So Ashu taking a step back... was spot on!!

The fear is back... and yet how he tries to fight it... Each word describes his love, his happiness and yet the fear comes forth ...and he wants to run away... dig a hole probably and bury himself in it.. rather than risk losing his battle, risk losing Nidhi's faith, risk hurting his child...

Oh So... Beautiful!!

You included every menbers reaction... loved it!!

Anji: aur aap iske liye bhi rishte dekhna shuru karde..hain na DB?

🤣🤣 and yet so true!!

🤣yeah..typical DB...and typical Anji..

Finally you get to name a baby haan??

😆yeah...

Again you sprung one on us... Ashu doesn't want to take Nidhi home...

I am thrilled you didn't show Nidhi as Miss goody too shoes... I loved to see her angry... and react giving Ashu the cold shoulder...

yup...she would be..wouldn't she??here she thought he was over the fears etc..and he didn't even tell her face to face about his decision...😡

Forget Nidhi, I wanted

i had tears in my eyes writing that scene...

Nidhi questioning Ashu's intent... and yet Armaan spills out pearls of wisdom...

@Red !! This was the best of what you have written so far... After every story we read... there is one na...

The details was magnificent... describing the baby's routine, Ashu's pride,like every worried parent... silently cursing the doctor!!

😆 thats what my dad did when i was small and had measles..he almost shouted at the Paediatrician...😆

And finally... after such a long wait Ashu ne I LOVE YOU Bol hi diya!!

even i was while writing that scene..

Sujatha... Splendid, Beautiful... and Kashmakash end on such a high note...

😡 not ending..epilogue baaki hain and i am tired of repeating it...😡

hum kitni bhi wah wahi karle kam hai...

Madamji Take a Bow!! You did an amazing job!!

Will sure miss this FF!!

me too

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

wow. no words ...so touching and emotional and very much satisfying the thirsty heart which wanted to see such pure and intense love between ASHNI. Such love can only concur the fears and demons in you and and opens the door for happiness.

I can only say...excellent and nothing but excellent.

Sujata you deserve 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

⭐️

don't stop writing dear ...u r 2 too good

( the post is accepting only one star ,actually consider it 4 stars)

Vidya