Gehraiyan: New Thread Link Posted Page 141 - Page 8

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Here we have an update again! But, before I comment on how it was (and what I could understand of it! 😆), I'd like to say something I noticed. It's quite comical to me that how from the third chapter, the number of your update and the page number are in sync. Chapter 3 on page 6, chapter 4 on page 8 and chapter 5 on page 10. 😆 No offense! 😊

It's funny how both of them, and even Heer, are so astonished by the fact that they carried a conversation normally. Seems like it's a rare thing for them at present!

I like Sanjh's interpretation of Maan and Geet. Their names have a HUGE impact on their personalities! On one side, Geet is willing to give it a shot and try anew and on the other side, Maan thinks they shouldn't even consider trying it! Such contrast of thought! I wonder how they even ended up falling in love and getting married!! 😕

Thanks for the PM! 😊

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

I hadn't noticed! 😆 I would be willing to break the pattern by giving slower updates if you'd like? 😉

True, we often see what happens when polar personalities attract but rarely do we see what happens when they actually get together. But I wouldn't write Geet and Maan off as total opposites just yet... ;)

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Some people may prefer longer updates, but I think for a story like this, short snippets are perfect. It keeps the story intriguing, fresh, the update finished but not quite finished.

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Oh no, no slower updates! In fact, the pattern will be broken with more comments. 😉

Yes, our stories usually end at the 'they lived happily ever after'. Never do we think about the 'ever after' that happens! I'll be waiting to read more into their characters. 😊

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Caught up with this. I always loved when the couple stop themselves rather some "thing" would tie them down. This is going to be an interesting journey. Looking forward to read more :)

A short one (yes, even by my standards) coming up...