SS:'Friendship,Feelings and TROUBLE'[pt8.pg#17] - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
PART: 4


-AT SCHOOL:

Ginny is looking comfortable now, as she has got to know that Sam has left the school...
She happily goes to attend her classes...
But, After the school, trouble continues for Ginny...

The boy again smiles and waves his hand. like he's saying good bye...

Ginny still can't understand what to do?

Sweety is getting too tense about her daughter... Day by day...

OneDay,


-AT AHLUWALIA'S:

Rocky is talking on the phone asking his friend "Guatam" to come to his house to watch a football match together...

Sweety listens "Haan...!!! Bus yehi kaam karna padhne k liey toh aaj tak kisi dost ko nahi bulaya"

Rocky irritatingly leaves...


At the dinning table:

Sweety, Rocky, Ginny having lunch...

Door bell rings,

Sweety asks Ginny to open the door. Predicting that Lucky may have come for lunch...

Ginny goes and opens the door...

... ...

... ...

... ...


SHOCKED...

It is that boy...

"Ginny socch rahi hai kay bus main kisi tarha ghayab ho jaoon..."

Rocky comes from behind...

Hey! Gautam come man..."bilkul sahi time pay aya hai match shuru honey wala hai... Aja..."

He leaves seeing Ginny quite cutely...

Ginny runs to her room...
"ab kya hoga yeh to Rocky bhaiya ka dost lagta hai"...

She secretly watches him... From upstairs... Rocky and Gautam having fun...

Sweety comes to give them juice, biscuits and Banana's...

Asks Gautam typical Sweety questions:

Like,
his parcentages, favorite subects...etc...

Rocky irritated again "Mom humain Match dekhne dogai...?"

Sweety "chup kar!!"

Rocky, then picks up the banana..

Tries to throw the skin in the dustbin but misses... So, the skin falls on the stairs... Sweety doesnt see it...

On the other hand Gautam,
Answers all Sweety questions happily...

Sweety is impressed...

Sweety "bohot accha beta... Tum mere is nikammay bete ko bhi kucchh sikaho"

after the match...

Ginny needs water so she "chhup chhupatey" trying to hide from Gautum... Starts coming down...

Just then Gautum starts leaving...

Ginny When trying to run back... Slips by the banana skin... She starts to fall...

Gautam catches her...

Rocky shocked...

Sweety see's that...

To be continued...



2 Questions for Readers:

* What will be sweety's reaction?

* Who will she blame for this situation?



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Edited by AhsaanBaig94 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Part 4 na? y 5 in the above comment? :P

Forgetting that, Awesome Update, I love this chapter. So that guys name is Gautam. Hmm.. Looking forward to what next. I really loved this chapter since it shows many emotions of a girl!

* What will be sweety's reaction?
- She'll thank him since, she had a good image of him because she was impressed! A different reaction would be great on Sweety's part!

Or Maybe She'll shout at him for catching her, thinking that he threw the banana peel there 😲

* Who will she blame for this situation?
Either Over-smart Rocky or Bechara Gautam 🤣

I need the answers for these questions!! 😆

GREAT UPDATE! Waiting eagerly for the next chap!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
OMG amazing Ahsaan ...nice part

So d guy is after Ginny ...

i smiled throughout d chapter
What will be sweety's reaction?
Sweety ji is gonna first see whether Ginny s fyn n Mite she is gonna break d first small eyelock b/w Ginny n gautam
she will try controlling her anger but will definitely say sumthin

den definitely Rocky is gone

* Who will she blame for this situation?

Rocky is dead for now ...sweety ji is definitely gonna screw his head
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
First of all thanx Ridzzi for correcting me...

Nd then,

Thanx both of you. For liking..

Well, some answers are right some not..

We'll see that next week...😊...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
That was awesome!!
Woah..sweety saw gautam catching ginny!! Oops!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: --Sarun--


That was awesome!!

Woah..sweety saw gautam catching ginny!! Oops!

thank you... Wait for the future parts... More interesting things coming..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Good one Ahsaan! So, he has got an excuse now to come over at the house

What will be sweety's reaction?
Since she doesn't know about all the eye-locking and smiles in the school, she would just thank him. But, Sweety Ji won't like her daughter in the arms of a boy, so she had to take out her frustration too. 😆 Since that can't be done on the boy, I think she will scold Ginny "Itni bari ho gyi hai aur chalna bhi nhi aata".

Who will she blame for this situation?
Ginny, I think.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Thnx FT.. For liking...
Nd we'll see. That, does your answers matches my story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Ok...
Friends...
Ready for the next part???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
READDYYY! 😛

Bring it ON! 🤣

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