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Posted: 13 years ago
its just awesome..
i really loved the maneet conversatin a llottt
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Posted: 13 years ago
breathe taking epi yaar,,👏👏👏 simple and powerfull words...i dont mind reading another update.👏👏surprise with geets bold questions..😆Maan is such a sweet person pls cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love each n every line of ur writring...🤗
it hs undefined depth within it...👏
i compltely agreed with geet abt verbal assualt or disgusting stares...
n maan's view over lust👍🏼
being a girl, its quite difficult for us to understand boys perspective over love...
at d end, loved a update... amazing👏
u knw sumtimes i think of writing... bt having such talented ppl her, it seems so stupid😆
bt anyway... continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part & nice start of friendship between duo..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: moni6262

i love each n every line of ur writring...🤗

it hs undefined depth within it...👏
i compltely agreed with geet abt verbal assualt or disgusting stares...
n maan's view over lust👍🏼
being a girl, its quite difficult for us to understand boys perspective over love...
at d end, loved a update... amazing👏
u knw sumtimes i think of writing... bt having such talented ppl her, it seems so stupid😆
bt anyway... continue soon😊

Please don't stop yourself for such a stupid reason..Let others see how much talented you are with your words and imaginations...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Diva7

Badhaiyaan ji aaj toh nishana lag hi gaya😆...




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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read the last two updates...
i truly admire the way you write the plot... Its beautiful...
I just loved the crushed paper content of part 8... it was just the outburst of maan after witnessing Sameera's actions... The husband just loves her unconditionally inspite of her mistakes, however the son busted out her true self.. I completely loved this one...
but sad that Geet did not read this one... She would have known about what he thinks of true beauty if she had read it...
And its so true that Love makes u weak and at the same time it give strength to overcome difficulties too...

And part 9... it was just brilliant... The discussion was fab... the out pour of the emotions of Geet, and the way Maan trying to bring out his POV to make her understand things was awesome...
Actually the way you are trying to bring out the depths of different characters of ramayan is commendable... Its hell true that Surpanaka's lust for ram was the sole reason for even Ravan to abduct Sita...

Lovely updates and looking forward for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear

your every word is super

loved it dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
difference between love and lust awsem



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

me first

@ divz ... dekha dear... meraa nishaane ka kamaal

@palin
though their friendship have just started i like the ease between the two... i loved the reason maan gave for not reacting to the prevert that day!!! gossip with regard to that will just make the situation worse and we all know who will most people around us blame too in such cases!

well thanx for putting the asterisk and note line to the credit going too...😉{my pleasure..😆}

geet riding the bike was a real surprise! aur won bhi apne hot boss ko peeche bitakhe!😆

just a question to palin dear... do u think so philosophically with regard to all the things going around us! {I myself don't know how these thoughts come to my mind..Honestly telling i don't know how to ride a scooty even but i love to make my heroines do what i can't,,but to make my writing realistic i have to google search about bike riding and there was information about bike's accelerator..When i read it,first thought that came to my mind was wow..one should have such control over life too..thats it..😊}i mean geets comparison of bikes accelerator to life just made me think so! but i really like the reason though... and her macho reason too was just awesome wow... {😳😆}i really didnt expect such a bold reply from her! maan bechara... i can imagine how shocked he may be!!!!

u know i was just remembering "rancho of 3 idiots" today after reading ur update... he too used to give every one DEMO for explaining ... just like maan too here used the demo of havan kund and street fire for explaining lust and love!!!!!😉{This thing was troubling my mind a long ago finally i got a chance to use this hawan kund analogy in one of my story..}but again a bow to u for such a comparison!

i really loved maans view with regard to the common conception that man is the only one who lusts!!

so in short!!! just loved the update...{Thanks..😛}

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