FF:Tujhse Naraz Nahin Zindagi NOTE+UPDATE pg89 11/11/13 NO PMS - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update and PM!
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Amazing update. Loving how you write. Great job

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interesting! please update soon! it's getting interesting and i can't wait to read more!
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**Part Ten-C**

Yashpal was caught, and was hand cluffed on the Police jeep rail. Even though it had been an hour since encounter, he still protested for his freedom. Riya had been worried sick for Ankur who was slowly gaining consciousness, SHUT UP she yelled desperately at YASHPAL with tears running down her cheeks.

"My son's unconscious here damn it" she continued. YASHPAL spat on the ground tera baita?

Look Mr, I don't see why I need to give you explainations; but if this makes you happy then alright. He's not my son but mai usse apna manti hu she replied to YASHPAL.

Massii massiii Ankur mumbled, as he moved his hand gradually, Riya picked his hand with hers. She rubbed his hand gently comforting him, Ankur lips curved up in a smile. Silent tears escaped his closed eyes as he struggled to lift his eye lids. Riya moved her hand gently over his head, "Take it slow Ank, please" she pleaded. Ankur took his time as Riya had suggested him. Arjun watched and heard Riya's conversation, he watched her actions from a distance. Rathore examined the ground where the officers were digging, he came back and placed his hand on Arjun's shoulder settling next to him. Shree walked over to Riya and comforted her, she hugged him as she weeped for Ankur.

As Chotu loved dogs he was feeding the POLICE special trained Labrodors happily. Ankur slowly woke up and sat upright with the help of Riya. The first thing he did was hug her tightly; it meant something for both of them, a statement of unknown LOVE. Unknown friendship, unknown relation, Shree watched them very closely with a smile creeping up on his face. They broke their hug, and smiled at each other. Masssiii "Mom dad ko inform mat karna please, bas tane hi marege" and you know I can't hear anyone say anything against you right.

Riya smiled with fresh batch of hot happy tears running down her cheeks Ankur wiped it, he smiled as he said "No more tears baby" Both of them bursted out their laughter, which was soon ruined.

Yashpal yelled, "I'll kill you Ankur mai tujhe nahi chodunga", he moved his handcluffs in frustration. Ankur got really scared by Yashpal's words he tightened his grip on Riya's hand. Arjun noticed the fear that had accumulated inside Ankur he stormed towards Yashpal and Sticky taped his mouth. ENOUGH OF YOU'RE YELLING, yelled Arjun frustratedly. Riya inwardly smiled at his antics in a jesture of thank you, Arjun noticed it and he did the same in reply. "Sir we found to a couple senior citizen dead inside." Rathore went to check the room they had missed, he glanced at Arjun one last time before he went to examine the dead bodies.

Arjun walked over to Ankur, can you please tell me kya hua tha? Why does he want to kill you? Ankur didn't reply for few mintues he was frozen. Riya held his hand onto hers and said, "Don't worry baacha I'm there for you. Bata do abh'" Wohh.. mai.. mai.. Ankur struggled with words. Riya rested her hand on his shoulder, he looked up at her with moist eyes Riya blinked her eyes and asked him to take deep breaths. Dn't worry about this she ended, Arjun arched his eyebrows in Are-You-Serious look; Riya nodded. She firstly took a deep breath looked here and there, as she was about to start the the special squad head interrupted, "Sir in the front yard we have found a bottle it's hard to recognise what it is." Arjun checked the bottles, ye toh angutha hai voh bhi do? He questioned himself (two BIG TOES preserved).

Sir we have another bottle found it looks similar, Arjun clenched his teeth as he realized they were indeed the BIG Toes of the victims. Initially he had thought it might have been a coincidence but later with Riya's autopsy reports it was confirmed they were chopped off with a similar knife.

But why?

Look Arjun before you ask Ankur, stress him out I'll tell you what happened. Ankur is a rich spoilt brat, actually he used to be one until we met she said it with a small smile. Riya took a deep breath and continued, alright let's talk about Yashpal. The four guys who were the victims and now Ankur are connected even if they didn't know each other they had been involved in a crime. Not a crime but an accident which involved YASHPAL's son Jeetu.

No, STOP IT'. Yelled Yashpal accident nahi murder tha voh mere baite ka'STOP YOU' he yelled as he bit wetted the sticky tape which had opened up quite a bit letting him speak/yell.

Please let me speak will you, Riya glared angrily at YASHPAL. He went silent, okay.. All four had a mutual friend Ishan Jha, the very first victim. All these guys were a spoilt brat and that was the first day they were introduced by Ishan. On their way back from Gujurat road trip, they had met in an accident; the drunken four ran over Jeetu accidently. It was his face that had been damaged; initially these boys didn't help him or his son.

Ankur had gone forward to help but Yashpal refused, Yashpal himself carried his son to the hospital his only son, Jeetu was sinking in fast.

The doctors had asked permission to cut off his BIG TOE for some reason, Yashpal foolishly agreed hoping that would save his son. The doctors were no good, they couldn't save Jeetu, Yashpal had mental break down since then.

Yashpal interrupted, apne ek laute baite ko khone ka dard tumhe kya pata hoga. Mera baita meri jaan tha, ye bacchon ko nahi inke maa baap ko saza dena hoga. Maine jaan much kar inpe koi case nahi thoka he exclaimed. Pehle maine uss Ishan ko mara badle ke aag mai jisne mere baite ko druggie kaha, usse madat karne ke bajaye usne usse pita. Nashe mai dhud the ye sab. Arjun questioned agar sirf Ishan ko marna tha toh baki sab ko kyu mara?
Yashpal answered, "Kyunki mujhe maza aa raha tha, mere baite ke aatma ko shaanti mil rahi thi" "Ek nayi company mil rahi thi, voh Anghute bilkul Jeetu ke kate hue anghute ki tarah hi kaate maine taki Jeetu ko bura na lage"

Aur abhi mujhe voh busurgo ne kaha agar mai unke saath nahi gaya toh they would hurt my Nikz, the sentence had shocked Riya she didn't reply for few mintues. Shree tapped her shoulders, Riya didn't respond but Ankur hugged her one last time assuring her, "I would never let anything happen to my Nikz" Riya smiled confusedly while she hugged Ankur back trying not to react.

Ankur was in tears with all the mess, he stumbled as he walked towards Yashpal "Uncle ji, mai apse kis muh se maafi mangu, mujhe nahi pata. Lekin mai keh deta hu kaash mujhe aap jaisa pyaar karne vale Paapa milte"
"Jeetu bahut hi nazeeb vala hai" saying that Ankur walked off limping in pain. Arjun, Rathore and Shree were stunned by a teenage boy's words, he had learned his leason but his teacher is the great one who brought him back to track said Arjun. Riya felt proud of herself, still she had a slight disbelief she almost ran behind Ankur trying to stop him when Rathore held her hand. She hugged Rathore, "This was an emotional ride bhai" she said smiling with her signature dimples adding her happy tears as spice. "Pagal" Rathore said as he hugged her back.

Arjun stood there in a state of shock as he watched Yashpal being taken away in the Police Jeep and Ankur walking away. Arjun wondered about Ankur's relation with Riya. Riya samaj mai ata hai lekin what was that, I had seen that day? Thought Arjun as his thoughts took him back to yesterday Ankur's house.

*FLASHBACK

The team was stunned the way Ankur talked to Riya, he called her Massi but she didn't look like a Massi instead he approached her like a friend. A true friend, a trustworthy friend thought Arjun as he walked around the house checking out few pictures on the way. There weren't many still few said it all. A family picture, where Ankur was all alone and his parents were together. Arjun walked over to the picture frame that was upside down. The house looked fantastic how someone can misplace this, when everything else is perfect Arjun said out loud. Arjun picked the picture up to find Riya, Ankur and Nikz all in one picture. Arjun was happy to see Nikz picture but Riya knows Nikz "wow" he muttered in excitement. He questioned Rathore if he knew who the little one in the picture was, Rathore's eyes were stunned he immediately nodded negatively disappointing Arjun. However, Rathore's expressions were noticed by Arjun, "Kuch toh definitely choot raha hai" he muttered under his breath.

After a while the team were bored, Arjun was frustrated as they had been waiting for an hour now. What the hell are they doing he exclaimed, an impatient Arjun stormed into Ankur's room without knocking. The sight had stunned him more. The pictures on the wall said a different story, a unpredicatable story. Nikz and Ankur together in most of the pictures, actually half of one wall was a collage just Nikz and Ankur at the bottom signed by Riya. He stared intently at the pictures, and as he as about to touch it Ankur called out "Sir, please I request you not to touch it" They're priceless for me. Who is the little one he questioned? Riya gulped down her saliva, Ankur glanced over Arjun's shoulders towards Riya, "Sir, she is my little sister" he answered proudly. He continued, voh abhi school gayi hai, she's my life I don't know why but I just love my sister. Anything else Sir? He asked.

Riya sighed in relief and asked if they could go, she had all the information they needed for the time being, Arjun couldn't take his eyes of the beautiful Collage, even Rathore couldn't as he had walked in just behind Arjun.

Rathore tapped Arjun's shoulder and he was out of his trance, Arjun smiled involuntarily and walked off as the sun started setting.

Riya watched him as it seemed to her, that he was merging with the setting sun, the song played in her mind

"Jeene ke liye socha hi nahi

Dard sambhalne honge

Ohhh Tujhse Narazz Nahin Zindagi

Hairaan hoon mai

Hairaan hoon mai."

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Edited by funkylicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all my lovely readers for the comments and support... It's the End of this case but not the END of my FF have to long way to go I feel... Hope you like it.. do hit like and please do comment😃 and keep encouraging me to keep going on with this. Once again I want to thank my non-IF friend Nanya for helping me out with the CASE outline!!!🤗😳
And yes Pm's later dearies..😉

NOTE:

Please bare with me for the next 3 weeks I don't know if I would be able to update any of my work in that time frame. I'll try my best to update. But I have my Final exams starting from 12th Nov..
I'll surely update as soon as I can...
I'll try to update sometime next week if I can... *but there's no gurantee*😆 will be back well after 18th Nov...
I love you all...🤗 Takecare😊
-Shru
Edited by funkylicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey it was awsome update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update ...
All the emotions were portrayed amazingly ...
So finally the case is solved ... N really like ankur n his maturity ...
Awww riya is so sweet ...
N luv the curiosity in Arjun it is also making me curious ...
N yeah all the very best for your exams ... Do well :)
N looking forward to the next update ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update 😃
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and good luck 4 ur exams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👍🏼😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...wating for next one...

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