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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

Well well naughty naina...this wasvdefinitely vety naughty...n very hot!!! Loved it!

Esp loved their conversation n that they talk abt everything!

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Oh Naina; what you doing to me, gal! I'm just loving the way your story is going. And I absolutely adore you for having them talk to each other about EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!! (So unlike the reel thing!)

I love the fact that your Arnav is SOOO gentle and considerate of her feelings and does all he can to make her feel at ease in whatever situation. He controlled his own desires but helped her to overcome hers. (Again sooo unlike the reel thing where he is only concerned about his own feelings and gives a shit about hers! BTW I have stopped watching the show, so I'm imploring you to not stop your story!) OK, there's not enough I can say about your Arnav. You already know, I'm in adoration with him. The question to ask is what about her Jalebi Junction? She has been wanting this dream for a long time. What will she do? I hope he lets her make the decision (which again! would be sooo unlike the reel thing where he dominates and controls her!)

Thank-you so much for letting me read your work, Naina. Thanks for the PM.😃 Waiting for the next update. With my heart on my sleeve!

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berdine

@berdine

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Just started to read.

Your work is marvelous

Reading ch 6 now,

Donno how I missed it

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

awesome updatesss...

arnav and khush are becoming naughty ha 😆☺️

thnx 4 pm😃

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

welcome back!...first of all i am super glad to know that your interview went well..hope the employer realizes that you are the best candidate for the job..now coming back to this chapter, well, all that i did while going through it was blush profusely!..guess that explains it all...i guess a few people might have trouble digesting the fact that they shared an intimate moment before walking\g down the alter, but personally i have never had any such issues...the physical aspect is an important part of any relationship..& arnav, what do i say about him..he's a dream man..period..khushi is one lucky girl...do such men really exist in the 'real' world?.. i don't know, since i have never come across any, but given the eternal dreamer & hopeless romantic that i am, i hope to find him one day!...anyway do update soon..i have missed this FF & you a lot over the last couple of days...hence i'll be looking forward to a quick & longer update..also thanks for the pm..

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daffodils06

@daffodils06

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

glad to hear that the interview went well..

coming to the chapter that was...wat shud i say...naughty..but then i like naughty..

the thoughts that khushi had during the last part of the chapter..well only khushi can complain lik that to devi mayya..

as usual waitin for more..

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yadiyada

@yadiyada

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Oh Naina meri Naina

Kya tujko hai kahna

Keep on writing meri behna

Ab iss ff ke bin nahi rehna!!!!!

Great update and glad to hear your interview went well. If this chapter was a stress buster dare we wonder what comes when you are chilled out!!!

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-Ronnie-

@-Ronnie-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

amazing!!!!!!!!!!!! loved the update!

he wasn't as cute as arnav, matlab thoda cute toh tha right?? 😉😆😆

my best wishes are with you! you will definitely get what you deserve!!!!😊

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#619

Okay so actually i found this story about 2 weeks back and have been obsessed with it ever since.

WHY did it take me SO long to find this amazing piece of fiction i'll never know.

What do i love about it? Well pretty much everything.

To star off your narrative style is absolutely addictive. I absolutely loved all the internal monologues that A & K have with themselves.

Arnav and his devil+angel,Khuhsi's conscience - , i could totally picture that. And it is the fun element to this story. As an author you definitely made a distinct impression on me and as writer it's always important to have your own 'voice' and you nailed it!

It kept me coming back for more!

Plot development - Honestly it's been perfectly paced.

You began with A and K who were at odds with each other and developed it into a beautiful love story. The development of trust and honesty, two very important things, was very well showcased while you developed your plot.

Another thing that sets apart this story, is how you describe A & K's relationship as being a mutual learning process. You had this concrete idea and have stuck with it from it beginning, never losing sight that this is 'Master Class'. (Fab title by the way)

Your characterization of A and K is very...how do i put it... real. That is to say it's very easy to relate to your characters. Their emotions, their insecurities, their love - is all very relatable and entirely swoon worthy.

Speaking of swoon worthy - OMG I AM SO IN LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE ROMANCE IT MAKES ME BLUSH AND SIGH AND AZCXBVSDHKLdsjjdbfd

*ahem*

I mean you write romance really well.

And i'm more or less in love with this story.

Thank you for sharing this with me!