Dekh Ke Chalo| Part 22 | Link for #2 PG 122

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priyakm

@priyakm

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#541

Yes this is a long time coming, yes I hope you'll have a big goofy grin on your face when you realize that I'M BACK ON IF TEMPORARILY.I thoroughly enjoy where your chapters are going. The last three have been like one better than the other. Only advice is to connect each chapter a bit, they flow but I feel like maybe you could do something small, like post the last few lines of the previous chapter, put an asterisk, and then start your new chapter. That could just be me though because you don't really need it, I just think it might add to the MAHAness of this FF.

Keep up the good work.

Love ya, Muah :*

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#542

Awesome update...do dil mil rahe he magar chupke chupke...Thanks for the PM

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norolim

@norolim

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: priyakm
Yes this is a long time coming, yes I hope you'll have a big goofy grin on your face when you realize that I'M BACK ON IF TEMPORARILY.I thoroughly enjoy where your chapters are going. The last three have been like one better than the other. Only advice is to connect each chapter a bit, they flow but I feel like maybe you could do something small, like post the last few lines of the previous chapter, put an asterisk, and then start your new chapter. That could just be me though because you don't really need it, I just think it might add to the MAHAness of this FF.
Keep up the good work.

Love ya, Muah :*

I do that you turd -.- The lines in Italics are the ones from the last chapter -.- Where are you? And thank you :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#544

it is decent very much the brillaince we are used to from you of course
awww he was so angry that he didnt know about the whole di being pregnant bless
and she impulsively tries to make things okay in her own way and she did to that
till he realised what he was doing and put the mask back on
well this goes and shows that there is hope for him yet
maybe anjis little plan might just work for both their betterment
they both need each other to complete the other
and only they can do so man only they
cheers for pm

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priyakm

@priyakm

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows

I do that you turd -.- The lines in Italics are the ones from the last chapter -.- Where are you? And thank you :)

Obviously my brain is only half-present... there is a reason I didn't go to school today >.<

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#546

Nice updates. Beautiful. Thnks for the pm.

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#547

Brilliant. Do continue. I'm liking this track...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#548

you surprised me with this chapter. last couple of updates the sexual abuse angle was missing particularly after the end of the woman who abused him. i thought he had managed to move on. but such things never really go away. they rear their head at the most weird moments. i feel for him

glad they were able to share a laugh at least.