This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 26

Awww u feel for ashu here. The great doc is about to eat humble pie. And nids is not gone make things easy. Khushi u have to love the kiddo what elders could not do she did it. Hheehe rangu does deserve a reward tooo good.but you know what I would love u depicting ashu"s etat d"ame , his inner thoughts as he reflect on what he has heard.

I loved the progress of the story. smooth flow of the story as always Anuji.

Originally posted by: ttrocks

I knew u would want to be the first Ana... I had just logged in to forum when this Chap was up and even the title wasnt changed: it still showed Chap2 on page16; but I respected ur reservation... 😃 😃 😃 And preferred to wait for you... 😳 😃

Originally posted by: hilarious44

My like button wasnt working and then net got stuck😭...otherwise Ana u would have missed 1st spot this time...😆😆😆...

HAWWW...
i got rivals here😆😆😉😉😉
i need to be careful n more alert from next time...isnt it😛 :P🤣

As much as I want these two to be together I want ashu to have to work through her defences give her back that feeling of certainity b4 her fuLly acknowleging him. Sorry for typing mistakes am on phone

😡 Ashu ko baat pata chal gaya?? itni jaldi??😡 i wanted him to have a few more nightmares...😆

Ur khushi was so cute here. Nd she is ashu's replika!! Wow!
Ashu ko sab pata chal hi gaya at least... Ap thoda aur nehi likh sakte thein! Abto bus ashu ka ek hi kam-- nidhi ko manao! Bcs iss bar wo milenge this time forever! 😉

I luv this tiny khushi hehe
itz amazing truly amazing..!

What a beauty of an update just got time to read it , usually through the phone don't have time to open my pappy hence my typing goes a lil haywire , but I freak out on your writing your flow , emotions and command over the language is wonderful, loved this Ff with ashu coming back won't be easy but khushi is on his side, what a lovely child unlike the one we see on ktlk, please update sooner, we all wait anxiously great going

wow!just finished.long chapter and so beautifully written...I loved it.this Kushi of ours is very adorable. Now time to win Nidhi ..looks very tough to Ashu.so thanks for ur hard work in this festive season.