Ariya vaada raha FF ch 20 LAST CH PG 50 3/4 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

will b on next pg ch 13 b

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my my what a chapter di... lovely... awesome fantastic... no words only...
Love Asr... and Riya's bond just cant wait for more... 🤗😉
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Ch 13 b

After 2 hours riya walks in wearing this

and her hair open sided to the right side in the front looking beautiful holding su

Everyone is shocked when she walking in

Arjun is speechless at least she is dressed decent thought arjun

Riya goes to them and hands rathore su and her things

Kya ri dhasu lag re ho says chotu

Haan ri super top says shree

Sir please you handel her or shree ya chotu but arjun ko nahin handel kare do please says riya

Don't worry riya go and enjoy and please call me bhai after office hours says rathore

Riya is waiting for asr when he walks in riya turns around and walks over to ASR and arjun clentches his fist while shree sips outs his coffee and rathore eyes pop along with chotu

The back of her dressed looked like this

ASR hands her thes

ASR their beautiful lilles and roses my favorite thank you she hugs him arjun is about to break the galss of his cutting chai when ASR hand touches her bare back .

Wow riya you look beautiful ready says asr

Yeah im ready let me just put these pretty flowers in a vase and place them in my office just a second she walks over

ASR notices her dress he has a damn that's hot look arjun hates the way he is looking at Riya

She gets a vase and places the flowers in them

Arjun goes near her

And pulls her in a corner

What the hell are you wearing yells arjun

leave me arjun what ever I wear I wear mera body hai you have no right to ask me this samhje yells riya and pulls her arm away

Walks back and kisses su meri princess be a good girl and bhai don't wait up ill be late mera pass key hai .(she looks at arjun )

grabs her clutch shall we says riya

yes of course bye guys says

ASR puts his arm around her waist and they walk out of the office.

Arjun throws his chai glass on the floor

How dare her wear such a thing yells arjun

I agree riya ka dress was a little too much says rathore

A little Rathore A little damn yells arjun

Haan yaar chotu dress lag rat ha ri sab ko kathal kar ka irrada tha(wanted kill ever with her dress) says shree arjun stairs and him he leaves

Riya calls rathore after 2 hours

He is feeding su some baby food he puts it on speaker

Bhai su kaise hai just wanted to check up on her sab theek ahi na

Haan riya im was just feeding her theek hai baat kar lo speaker pe ho tum

Oh meri baby kasie ho mamu ko thang nahi kare ho na

I love you baby says riya

Rathore talks you enjoy riya don't worry says rathore

He put scell down with out ending it to wipe su's face

They hear music in back ground

It's the song saibo from shor in the city

May I have this dance with the lovely lady says asr

Why of course you may

Maan yeh saheb ji
Jan hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahane

Naina Nawabi ji
Dekhe hai Sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe Ishare

Maaan yeh saheb ji
Haan Karta Bahane
Naina Nawabi ji
NA samjhe ishare
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Dheere Dhere Naino Ko Dhere dhere
Jiya Ko Dheere Dhere Bhayo re Saibo

Dheere dheere baiga dheere dhere Apna sa dheere dheere
LAage se Saibo

Arjuns eyes are closed and fuming with thought of asr touch her bare back

While dancing

Riya yaad hai ki college main we use come here all

the time on our dates says asr

I know asr kitne ache din the who na

Haan those were the days riya you locked up in my arms and we were laughing with all are friends here na , I missed that par itne din ki baad we gotten to relive those moments aaj im very happy said asr

They guys look up at each other

Haan asr pata nahi aaj it feels like a fairytail says riya

It must be my this (he kisses her but on the check ) winks asr

Asr tum bhi na says riya

Arrey ek kiss tho hai itna blushe kyun kare ho says asr

Asr lets go look at the stars says riya

That I can already see in your eyes says asr

Arjun gets up and end the call

Case pe kaam kar the hai says arjun

After a while shree is on the laptop on facebook

Yaar chotu lag tha hai ri is having fun says shree

Haan who tho call se laga says chotu

Anhi yaar who tho hai par Her status on facebook yaar

Can you feel the magic in the air it must been the way you kissed me

Updated 10 mins ago

ARJUN IS FUMMING

She comes back home and notices rathore a sleep on the sofa with book in his lap

She puts the book on table and goes up checks on su and gets ready for bed

Ri you seem tired neend nahi mila kya asks shree

Haan ri this your 3rd cup of coffee already and its just 10 am says chotu

Haan thoda tired hoon but im fine says riya

Riya kal what time did you come home I waited till 2am but I gusse I dozed off on the sofa says rathore

3:30 am actually itne din ki baad we met na baaton baaton main where the time went I didn't realize says riya

Arjun is hearing this

Kaam sa kaam su ke bare soch na tha itne late ghar koi aata hai kya says arjun

I think of su im her mother iss liye I made sure I feed her when she woke at 4 am and I sang to her till she slept which was 5 am

so I know what my duties are don't interfere with a mother again samhje ya samjao suddenly asr comes

in

asr tum yahaan? Says riya

haan actually you droped your earring yesterday I gusse so wanted

give it back to you says asr .

Precap :

Shree, chotu Arjun were over for their weekly guys night at Rathores watching the cricket match and playing poker . riya was in her room bariding her hair in front of the mirror when she saw a shadow at her window and then some one jumped in Riya screamed ahhh ASR ran over to her covered her mouth and winked at he removed his hand

Tum yahaan kyun aaye and that too chor ki jaisa huh? Says riya

Tum surprise kar na tha just like old days kyun waise I missed you says smiles asr

You haven't changed at all

suddenly the guys run up the stairs

riya can hear the she opens her closet and asr hides there

the team knock

Riya kya hua says rathore

Ri says shree

She opens the door

Kya hua ri asks chotu

Kuch nahi woh spider says riya im fine really you guys go back and enjoy your match says riya

Suddenly cell phone begans to ring riyas is shocked

Yeh kis ka phone hai says arjun

Mera phone aur kis ka yeh kaise question hai ill pick up later says riya

Really tumahre he goes to her cell yeh tho dead hai.

Rathore other tehn us koi aur bhi hai yahan says arjun

I have 2 cells what is it to you huh says riya ab jao

he then goes to the closet and opens it and finds

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Posted: 13 years ago
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whoa my sweetheart.. two chapters in a row
nice treat to your readers huh 😉
omg.. the way ASR greeted Riya made me feel bad for Arjun.. 😒
couldn't stand Riya being so intimate with ASR and poor arjun left alone..
Riya bass bhi karo yaar😛.. boht torture kar liya bichaare ko 😔

n that dress.. uff😉... that was too muchh😆... i can see arjun getting red and yellow with anger..😃
i can understand his place too but it was his mistake to call su - a galti🤢
so i must say that he should go through all this pain and torture..😊

and hahah the last part was so funny.🤣 that picture made me laugh so bad 🤣
dont know what will be arjun's reaction to see a paraya mard in his riya's closet
and on top of it , what will ASR do to Arjun when he will get to know about the truth

great updates👍🏼.. mindblowing updates HJ 🤗
they were perfect..⭐️
i just want ASR to know the truth asap so that he will punish arjun for hurting riya 😉
maybe? 😆
update soon my jaan 🤗

p.s. I love you more than Shru loves you 😉❤️
Edited by _mahi_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg the next chap was blasting... rocking totally awesome di.. no words... love love loved it.. please please update right now...if u can I cant wait for more...!!!
Like seriously bahot hi chote chap's the dono bhi... I don't have words to express how awesome I'm feeling reading both the chap's!!!😃
I love youuu 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...arjun jealous...luv it...but just hope a new love story doesnt begin😛...hope arjun jaldi se confesses his feelings!
update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely i loved the way Arjun was jealous, and haye ASR will always remain ASR.😳
N the dress was awesome, and love the ASR in closet..
Poor Arjun, when will he realise that he loves Riya and try to win her back...
Please continue😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vry nyc part dear..
aww Arjun is jelous nw..
Stupid Arjun . pehele dhyan nahi diya , aur ab chali gyi to uske peeche pada hai.
bechara Rathod babysitting karna pada usee...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey.. thanks for the PM..

Wowwiee.. ASR!! Loved him!! full-on tashan!

A jealous Arjun!! 😉😉 But I hope there's more to the jealousy..

Haww!! ASR in Riya'a wardrobe??!! Arjun ne dekh liya toh? I'm sure being the jerk he is, Riya ko ulta bol dega and then they'll fight! Bring it on!!

Can't wait to read more of this.. Please update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is getting more interesting

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