first fanfic eva(ak) THE END pg 54 - Page 9

i simply love ur ff..its so diff...angad and kripa frnds....thats a nice track....it wud be fun to see them falling in love... 👏 👏 👏

just three comments?.....will continue only after the comments fills this page and goes to teh next one...

LUV LUV LUV d last part!! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!
plz plz plz continu..
hope i fil up d page 😆
plz continu
plz continu
plz continu
sooooooooooooooooooooooon!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx
(i kep readin d previus parts 😆 )
im adictd 2 dis ff 😆

after packing angad's bag...ripa goes to evry one to check on them.....they all leave in the bus rocky hired.(without in forming anyone😆).....there is even a driver for the bus.....they all play antakshari the whle way to chadni chowk😆.....they finally reached there......it was a small house so there weren't enough room.....they were staying like this.....

mishti-kripa
aaliyah-priya
rocky-angad
raj-josh

sahil wasn't there...he had some important meeting so couldn't come......they all freshen up and went to bed next morning every one werein the dining table...having breeakfast.....

p: yaar din bhar to shopping karenge...but raat ko ?
a: dont worry sweet heart.....paas hi mein ek disco thek hai...waha chalenge.....
p: oooohhh....wow..disco thek......great idea...
k: bakwaas idea....tum sab jaana i am not coming....
p: tumhe kissine aane ke liye bhi nahi kaha.....
a: hey comeon kripa dont spoil the fun....
k: no angad i am not coming....
ro: hey krips comeon yaar...(whispers something)....
k: ok...just for you.....(mumbled)...and your stupid plan....
ro: that's like a good girl.....
k: ya ya ...whateve...abhi shopping chale...
all: chalo......

they went to various places and bought stuff.....kripa was looking at some girls who were wearing the lehenga with so many heavy jeweleries......angad was beside her...

a: kya dekh rahe ho?
k: in ladkiyo ko.....how can they were such.... uncomfortable dresses....you know what....i feel mujhe lagta hai ki yeh sab kaidi(prisoners) hai...
a: kaidi(prisoners)?
k: ya....achha dress ka baat chhodo.....gale par yeh phasi ka phanda.....hato mein hatkadiya(hand cuffs)....aur pero mein janjeerein(chains)...
a: ya woh to hai...unhe bhi na aise dress pehenne chahiye..(showing to a mini skirt with haulter top.....
k: eeewwww.....aisi dresses se to wohi wale achhe hai.....
a: tumhe fashion ke baremein kuch nahi pata......you know what you are not a girl.....i mean you are but....behavior aur dresses and etc se aisa nahi lagta...
k: mujhe lagna bhi nahi hai.....i dont want you to run behind me like the others girls....
a: ha....you are jealous ke woh sab mujhpe marti hai...aur mein bhi unke saath ek waqt gujaar leta hu.....aur tumhe ghaas bhi nahi dalta.....tum un ladkiyo jaise to kabhi nahi hosakti ho na...
k: mein koi....jaanwar nahi hu...jo tum mujhpar ghaas daloge ok....tumne mujhe challenge kiya hai..na mr.angad khanna....ab mein dikhati hu kripa sharma ka jaadu......see you tonight at the disco...angad....

kripa leaves....

a: oooohhh.....mein dar gaya.....(laughs)

angad also leaves......rocy was watching all this......

ro: bechara angad...isse pata nahi hai ki kripa sharma kaun hai.....ab to yeh gaya......(laughs....)isse bata du?....na...khud pata karne de.....

josh comes from behind....

j: kisse kya khud pata karne de...?
ro: aaj shaam ko disco mein pataa chalega....sabko...
j: bata na rocky ....
ro: nope......my lips are sealed...

after shopping...they went back to their houses.....angad was searching kripa every where..... but she was nowhere to be seen......as he was searching...rocky came upto him...

ro: woh nahi ayegi....
a: kya matlab....?
ro: matlab yeh ke...kripa...hume seedhe discomein milegi.
a: ok....

they all leave for the disco.....angad was still searching her....rocky notice this.....

ro: kya baat hai angad...itni bechenis kyu intezaar kar rahe ho she'll be here any minute.....
a: mein kisika intezaar nahi kar raha hu....
ro: achha.....well waha dekho phi batana.....

he lifts his hed and looks ahead....he sees a gorgeus girl entering the disco.....she came straight to angad...it was kripa......she was wearing this:-



k: so mr angad khanna...apne mujhse kya kaha tha....oh ha.....mein doosri ladkiyose jealous hu....aur mujhe fashionka koi andaaj hi nahi hai.....kuch aisa hi kaha tha na?
a(mouth and eyes wide open):.........

everyone else comes to her......raj,josh are really shocke to see kripa like this....

m: kya hua......?
ali: kripa di hamare spencer college ki....miss spencer reh chuki hai...aur bachpanse unhone bahat sare competitions bhi jeeta hai......
ro: right and i was mr.spencer......
p: ya isiliye mein kehti hu ki spencer college ke judges mein koi taste hi nahi tha....ek langoor aur bandaria ko mr and miss spencer banadiya....hhmmmm 😡

priya leaves.......rocky looks at her and then looks at kripa with so much of anger.....kripa makes a cute face and then rocky smile...she smiles too.....

ro: so kripa...wanna dance...?
k: sure....why not.....

they went to dance.........angad still wasn't out of his thought......he was lost in another woorld....after sometime....rocky went and angad asked kripa for dance....now they both were dancing.......both were looking in each others eyes...rocky was looking everything very closely......

the stuff in italic is kripa's thought....

no wonder ki itni saari ladkiya angadke peeche hai....in aakho ko koi kaise mana kar sakta hai.....how can some1 resist those eyes...aur yeh smile....uski ek muskurahat ke liye koi kuch bhi kar sakta hai......wait a min what am i thinking.....do i love him?....duh-uh...tu tabse usse pyaar karti hai jabse tum dono mile the.....par kya woh bhi mujhse....kripa forget it ....he is your best frien...usse apni jindagi eene de aur tu apni jidagi khud ji.....

she came to the real world and then....closed her eyes and shook her head......

a: kya hua?
k: kuch nahi....

angad went to get a drink when someone was mis behaving with kripa......angad came back....and saw this ...he dint want to create a scene so he just brought kripa back without saying anything......kripa was really mad...

a: kya hua....ek to usse bachaya uparse naaraz wah.....
k: bachaya nahi tumne...usse mein beg kiya hai mujhe chhodne ke liye...are yeh gubbare(balloons) jaise muscles kis kaam ke...?mar nahi sakte the usse?
a: arre yaar sab ladkiya chahti hai ki ham mard ladayi jhagdose door rahe aur you are telling me ki usse maaro...
k: ha hum aisa chahte hai par jab tum ladke yeh fight karte ho na to hume bahat hi achha lagta hai ki kamse kam tumhe hamari parwa to hai...ki tum usse mar rahe ho...par tum to....ugh 😡 mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni.....

kripa leaves with a speechless angad behind.....

nice parts n i couldn't c wat kripa wuz wearin -the pic of teh dress wuzn't comin up so can u post the pic again
thanx
continue soon

the pic of th dress is....



can you see it now?

sorry......but cant do anything...well i can se it....

cnt see da pix. 😭 😭 😭 cont soon its ws gr8

hi
just read ur ff its awesome
pls cont soon 😃