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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all, congo shongo for the new work. I was about to irritate you for the new work as your all previous work are now finished, khali kaise baithne deti, huh? NO 'thanks' for yet another beautiful work. What a perfect story on a perfect festive. Isi pal ka wait tha kya? Happy navratri to you all too.

The words and scenes you choose, damn amazing. Not just in this one but in all. Yet another light hearted social-cum-touchy story. Maan ke bina adhuri si hai but will wait for his entry. The way you described her happiness, thought, devotion and care ... She is indeed our beauty. Sad to hear about the accident and its aftermath but glad to see another true meaning of life by you. You always choose a unexpected thing as your centre of the story and make it worth to read and love. Obession and Color, were the best example of it. How can i stop loving you? I really don't have any word to describe it. I am sure by now even google must have launched a seprate page with heading 'Sara can not express her feelings through words' coz most of the IFians know how true it is. Anyways, excellent. Read 4 times in a row. Waiting to see how people describe the 'expected non-real' beauty and how THEY create a new meaning of it.

Do cont soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was short. Better increase the length from next time *here i go with my dhamki*...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely story
continue soon
its painfull

do pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new story.


Ohh ... Painful ...poor Geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for new story
and i must say.. the start is just wonderful..
could not stop my self from rading it again.. to undrstand how geet was helping the toddler and in return fod punished her by snatching her own beauty...
her dream to be Sita.. will it everr fullfil
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow congrats for the new story! Looking forward for regular updates! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnks soo much dear for writing a new story!!it was soo much exciting to see a new msg frm u which confirmed bout ur new story.lovely strt.can't wait for the next part with maan's entry.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Updated comment in Page 2 :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...now she wont be able to play role of sita...n everyone will make fun of her... Waiting for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow what a lovely story and with so much depth...
sometime we have to exagerate the circumastance in a story to build drama but actually this is probably a story of every average and below average looking girl as society views them. This is probably story of every girl who gains weight due to harmonal changes. Story of every girl who has cleft, squint or other physical issues.
How easily society obejectifies and punishes us for what is not in our control...
I am so looking forward to it and I am sure your style and senstivity will bring a new dimesnsion to it. I am so eagerly waiting for this.
It also reminded me of a movie and a song -
Satyam Shivam Sundaram...

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