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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i vl update 2day only..thanks for d comment...:)
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Originally posted by: hangok

im sorry but i canr understand hindi ...it would be nice from you if you write it in english pleaseee :-(



oh sry dear..now on wards i vl use less hondi n if i use also i vl write d english translation along wid..
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Originally posted by: jannat89

interesting dear... cont soon



thank u..i will update soon..:)
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Originally posted by: Samnafa19

very nice.pls continue soon



thank u..update 2day only :)
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thanks for liking my story n commenting frnd..updating d next part..enjoy :)

Part 3:

Virat enters d room..he badly wanted to b wid manvi alone..not bcoz itz his 1st nyt bt bcoz he knew dat manvi z upset..she was just pretending to b happy for his sake...he sits next to her n opens her veil..he was ryt...manvi eyes r wet n closed tytly..

Virat : cups her face n says 'look at me partner'

Manvi hugs him tightly..

Virat: u can share wid me manvi..i knw u were just pretending dat ur happy bt i knew u were not..share wid me manvi..

Manvi:no use virat..i know ur response..

Virat: wat do u mean??goes away lil so dat he can c her face..

Manvi sits infront of him holding his hand: virat i knw u vl say dat watevr happened today was nt bcoz of me..u vl say di left d house 2day for my happiness just like she aborted her child to save me..bt virat d main reason for di to leave d house was she was feeling guilty for upsetting every1 by aborting her baby..n y she sacrificed her baby??to save me ryt?? Den ultimately i am d bloody reason for whatever happened in my di's life 2day..she z feeling or will feel guilty life long for smthng she has done to save me..knwing dis how can i b happy virat??2day she thot she doesnt deserve this familys luv jijus luv for somethng she has sacrificed for me..bt she deserves everything..she z feeling guilty in her life bcoz of me virat..i am d reason for her guilt..me unse kabhi najre milakar baat nai kar sakti virat..

Virat: i can understand manvi..bt v cant help..jo hogaya so hogaya..v cant really go back n change..bt i hav thot of smthng..i am nt sure wethr itz ryt or wrong bt dat z d only idea coming to my mind as a solution..

Manvi.: watz dat virat??

Virat explains her d plan..n waits to c her reaction..manvi thinks for few secs n smiles widely n says

Manvi: wah virat...perfect idea..isme kisi ki loss nai hai..koi hurt nai hoga..evry1 vl b happy wethr our plan fails or succeed..i am in partner saying dis she hugs him..

Virat.: hugs her back n says so can v start our plan from 2day..u knw 2day is a best opportunity to start our plan..

Manvi: u dnt hav to ask..i am all urs from 2day..n she free herself from virat n says 'bt b4 dat i want to say something abt our personal life virat..something imp'

Virat: go ahead..

Manvi: virat maine hammesha se mere lie ek struggler husband chaha hai apne lie.. N me chahti hoon hum dono mil kar kuch achieve kare life me.. Chahe uske lie jitna b waqt lage.. 1 saal, 2 saal, 5 saal ya 10 saal..chalega..tab tak hum har kushi, har gum n har mushikile sath milkar face kar karenge.. n me chachti hoon hum apne jimmedaria apne jarooratein kudh sambhale..family k earnings pe nahi balki khud ki earnings pe..i knw tum rich family se ho..n shayad gharwale b na kush ho bt me strictly ye chahti hu virat..me tumhare sath dungi..bolo manjoor hai??

Virat : smiles n says done..

Manvi: wid naughty smile sochlo..bcoz it includes our honeymoon also..

Virat: laughs n takes her infront of mirror n says u knw vry well muje kaise track pe lana hai..bt (hugs her from back n puts his face on her shoulder) wen virat is here nt to fear..

Manvi: thank u..

Virat: sirf thank u???

Manvi kisses on his cheek n looks at mirror n says happy??

Virat : itni jaldi happy kaise mrs virat vadera?? Abhi puri raat baaki hai.. Slowly he opens d pins attached to veil n removes d veil..
Manvi feels shy bt controls thinking dat she vl give virat what he deserves..they r still standing infront of mirror..looking at each other in mirror..virat kisses on her cheek..manvi shuts her eyes bt she has a shy smile on her face..
Virat: dnt give me dat killing smile..i wont b able to control my self..
Manvi: who z telling u to control urself 2day..??
Virat.: aisi bat hai.!?now he removes her earings n necklace n kisses on her ear..goes down to neck n kiss der..
Manvi:(still closing her eyes n smiling) hmm..remember wat i told u 1ce?? If i survive d cancer, i will give u all d happiness u deserve..
Virat: looks at her on d mirror picks her up in his arms n lay her on d bed..bt suddenly sm noughty idea stuck him..n smiles thinkng abt it..

To b continued..

I know i wrote inbtwn in hindi bt i was nt able write those parts in english as i wanted to express so had to write in hindi..sorrryy..bare wid me plz..




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Posted: 13 years ago
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virat can only convince her
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue soon
What is the naughty idea?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what is the naughty idea hmm?😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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whyy sou have to stop here :-(
what is there plan ??
and virat he is sooo unbelievable,
im sure where you used hindi was great i mean when you say you cant described it in english that means it is great...thanks for pm

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