...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya ! [2] {New upd. 13 July 2013} - Page 53

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Posted: 13 years ago
ur update...😳
keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
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NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM
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Posted: 13 years ago
this has to be ur best update till date!!!!!! i seriously had tears brimming in my eyes!!!!!!! finally the mystery is revealed! i really used to g8 frustrated with der toks and especially as v cudnt g8 the heads or tails of it! but u just blew r heads off!!!!!!!! superb update!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolioqueen

Huge update! Nice to read. Thnx 4 the pm



Thanks a lot Aishi 😳for tolerate our huge updates...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

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i had completely forgot that i had res here due to workload and sanz birthday's sory for that
coming to update
emotional update
loved the samrat-tinku conversation they make a amazing pair of jeeja-saala
sad to know about tinku 😭 is it true that it is inspired from a real-life incident? if yes then the family must be really brave
tinku and gunjan part made me cry 😭
samrat-gunjan parts were as usual amazing
S3J you guys are amzing writers hats off 👏👏



Its Ok Priyanka...we all were busy in that Thread...what a awesome experience...😳.

Thanks for your compliment...Yes ! This story main concept is based on real life incident. They were Brave or not... I can't say...but,they were helpless surely... We can't fight wid destiny. 😭. We are glad that you liked Sam-Tinku part. Gunjan knows her lil bro. n his innocence... but,same time she understand SHERGILL's family anger too. She wanted to maintain silent...but,after Samrat allegation... she could not able to control herself... n finall truth out... 😭

Sorry for very late feed-back.😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hello Joseph and S3'...Finally Finally Im back with my detailed feed back...Extremely Sorry for too much late comments..i hope u all didn't forget me'😳

All Parts were Just Superb'...Very Veryyy long that took enough time to complete me all those previous updates..'..😊

First of all starting with Part 14'...'..Loved the whole track where Gunjan was being kidnapped by Samrat for almost 2 hours I think'...😆

Their whole conversation in car with respective pictures was really really nice'...Specially that Bhondu dissscussion'...😃

Sajan cute nok jhonk in car was very interesting'...very very nicely written..👏

Then Hospital scene was my favorite 'Gunjan's strange behavior after listening hospital name again raised my curiosity too much...Why is she so scared from hospital and its name'...'since the starting I thought there is a serious kind of problem with Gunjan'...and Samrat was also surprised to see that'then Doctor Mitra came and she became so nervous to see him'I thought may b doctor would give some hint...but nooo

While Taking injection when she clutched his hand tightly was the bestest scene of this part'..and obviously Samrat was on cloud 9..😳

After this chaat and paani puri discussion came'...it was also very nice'.Poor Gunjan..didnt know abt his fully pre-planned date with her'... realize his tricks'...oh my most fav line was..when she said men abhi breakfast kia he..n he said wo to mene b kia he..and then that Bhukaad line was sooo gud'...Kahin tum mujhe indirectly bhukadd to nai keh rahi'.Samrat's thinking secession regarding his future life with gunjan was still going on'...n Im always like..hez so confidence abt their marriage inspite of so much obstacle between them'...(ryt now his dad and yamini)

Shopping scene was also very gud'and then the restaurant scene'.😳

The wasy he was scolding counter boy..i thought this hotel is also a part of Shergill's hotel'...Samrat was totally behaving like a boss..thats why I thought'...definitely our delicate and soft hearted Gunjan felt bad after seeing this'...and in her so calm style when she made him realized his mistake regarding his rude behavior with poor people. It was Amazingly written'...and the way he was listening her so carefully and got convinced by her words that he did wrong was sooo sweet na...in between some bits of their convo were sooo mind blowing...like gunjan said...Agr kabhi mujhse aesi mistake hui to ap kya karo ge'and his reply and all'...some points were really so meaningfull'.. ...'and when he told his past incidents to her Specially 2 lakh ki Aalu chat'..😆.😆

I was so laughing while reading that part'...😃

he cares for her alottt .Sajan became very gud friends in so much short period of time'And at the last when he finally said Sorry to that man..it clearly showed that Gunjan is a Perfect match for him...'.Wohi seedha kar skti he Sam ko'and Finally Sam's first unofficial date completed'.😳

This whole part was veryy nice'👏



Welcome back RiJA n Thanx for your as usual detailed feedback on each update.😊.Loved to read your view about all story move...😳

The first unofficial SaJan 'Date'.😛 SAMRAT will leave no stone unturned to spend some time with GUNJAN, and so, buying some stuff for the 'Havan' is just a perfect excuse. Similarly, Sammy boy will make the most of every opportunity and so, when he knows that GUNJAN is petrified of hospitals ( though not the reason, as yet), he is sure to make the most of it. And he did promise TiNKU that he would get
GUNJAN treated for her wound. Just that, it all fell in place for him. 😉

GUNJAN is so innocent that she is unable to see through SAMRAT's plans. She had no idea whatsoever about his plan to turn this simple marketing trip to an unofficial date. So very naively, she informs him about having taken her breakfast and not being hungry.

SAMRAT has made up his mind to get married to
GUNJAN. As of now, he has no idea of the storm brewing at home. So his building of castles in the air is continuing.

It always has been GUNJAN's character to be the soft-spoken, soft-hearted girl, one who soothes frayed nerves with just her presence, her smile, words toh bahot aage ki baat hain. And as in the show, we have tried to maintain this essence of GUNJAN's character in both our FF's.

Where will this newly found friendship take them?? Soon, this will be revealed too.


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: unknowngirl

Hey Joseph & S3🤗 Really awesome update..The twist was really shocking!!It was very heart breaking revelation..😲🥺 Never expected such a twist..Like the way u always made us feel that Gunjan was the one had sickness..😛 Tinku was naughty but such a lively sweet boy..Feel really sad for him..😭But the maturity & the strength he showed was amazing!!😊 The incident & the situation which bought the truth out was really apt..It made the seriousness of situation & truth more intense,,You all are doing a amazing job writing it👏..Its sad to hear that it was taken from a real incident...Really can't imagine the pain & trauma the family & him went through😔..Hope they got the strength to pull through it..Do continue soon..Thanks for the pm.😊



Thanks a lot Di for your nice n detail reply.😳...n extremely sorry for my very late feed-back.😳.

Yaa finally,truth revealed.I know... readers were confused about sickness part... they were not sure about it. The character of Tinku is very important cameo of this story... Story can't move widout his presence... He knows the reality... truth about his disease but,he is happy in his life... want to spend his last moment of life as a normal kid... n this the main spark of his character.

We are glad that you liked the incident n hospital parts description. Scene would be continue in next update...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HSFA

MY S3J. Last two parts are so heart wrenching.😭

I almost had tears. Poor Tinku. But u people potrayed him as a matured young boy who wants to live his last days happily and to the fullest. Gunjan really loves her darling little brother so much. I am in love with this brother sister duo so much.❤️
Also loved Sam's concern for his newphew. I hope he clears everything with Gunjan. Poor Rohan. Hope to see him better in the next update.
Emotional kar diya Yaar...😭
Its so beautifully written that anyone can feel those emtions.👏
Tinku's character was so lively and refreshing. I hope it was never a cameo. I will really miss him.
Thanks a lot for the p.m. 🤗
Do Continue sooon.
Will be waiting...



Thanks Fatima for your detailed view about Part-19. Feeling glad that you liked this Bro.-sis bonding. Yes...Tinku is full of life... No demands... No complain...type person. He is happy wid his destiny... but,yaa... her Di's marriage is last wish for him...

We'll continue hospital scene in next part... Next part is last part of MUSSORIEE . Now, Its DELHI turn... Some very exciting moments wid ARNAV is waiting there... We'll be try to post soon.😳Extremely sorry for very late reply.😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Now time for the part 15'😊

It was again another mind blowing part...Finally they reached at home with Pooja samaan'...Ishita is the world best bahabhi'...she loves her devar so much..loved her character ...the was shez helping Samrat to make gunjan his wife and tried to escape Sajan from Yamini...it seems so nice and sweet'...May everyone get a bhabhi like her'...😳

Devar bhabhi share such a strong bonding'Trio convo in porch was nicely written'Sam Dad is totally Dumb like Yamini...'who can not differentiate among people and their behavior'Like Yamini...'Samrat tried so much to maintain distance from her and ignore her but shez very dumb to understand his behavior just like Samrat's dad...'who can not see that what is wrong and right for his Son'...Thanxfully Samrat has Ishita'...who always save him from her'.Ishita and Samrat both are too much'

Sajan's mandir scene was TOOO GUDDD..my most fav scene of this part...❤️.The way she was doing all preprations for pooja and he was staring at her..it seemed shez indeed a Bahu of this house'...no doubt why Pandit jii thought like this'.sindoor scene was awesome'.Fabulos and fantastic scene it was''👏

You know guys when she was cleaning his hand with her duppata I remembered the same scene of MBYPH'..but there it was in too much intense and angry situation..here the situation was so light and soft romantic'.❤️

Sajan in Samrat room'...it was also a one of my fav scene'...'Guys seriousely I wondered..only in 2 days they spend so much time together'.and they talked so frankly with each other'...sirf 2 din me Samrat ko Chashmish itni achi lag gai poori life plan ki hui he us k sath'...even now Gunjan has also started some feelings for him'...Strange na.'.u have written each and every part in so much detailed that while reading it doesn't feel like they had met only before 2 days...it seems like they know each other for veery long...about 2-3 months...😳

So many times Samrat gave her hints about his future planning with her..😃..Gunjan should might be get any idea about his feelings but shez too innocent to understand'when he asked her that Particular Question'Specially 4 options were Fantastic'and then he created a long story'.whatever the story was but I was dying to hear her answer at last'..but I knew we don't get this answer so early'.on Rohan's entry..Samrat's this line was sooo hilarious ..i enjoyed this part veryyy much😳

"Dude ! Saari duniya ki problem handle kar sakte ho...meri start hone waali 'Love-Story' ki yeh 2 'Chingu-Mingu' ki problem handle nahin kar sakte...??"

God..Gunjan jitni bachon k sath sweet he..Sam utna hi'.:"Rude" he'pehle Tinku ab Rohan bhi...'but Poor Rohan'hez not at all like Tinku...'.Tinku is a father of Samrat'...Bt poor Raohan'Samrat can easily threaten him...Kiss part was so funny..Possessive Samrat...'.Rohan is only a kid'...now doesn't he kiss Gunjan?😉

U know guys since the time when Gunjan said that ap mujhe thoda time den me apko bad me answer karon gi'since then I was waiting for a scene when she calmly think over this matter..but unfortunately it didn't happen'

Samrat bought Ps3 for Tinku too.its glad to read but I knew he will not accept this..as they are very self respected people..

But after listening Samrat lots of fake tantrums and fake excuses they finally accepted to take it'...'I knew this Samrat would have bought a handicam for Gunjan..but she will never ever accept this soexpensive gift from him'and she did so'...

Luckily this time Samrat understood her condition and was able to discover one more speciality of her nature..that shez absolutely different from his all ex-girlfriends..😳

This whole part was very veryyy nice...'.Awesomely written'.Thumbs up to you guys for writing such a beautiful story'...'



Thanx RiJA 4 sharing your view about Part-15.

SAMRAT's family bonding is clearly seen in these small incidences. ISHiTA cares a lot for her brother-in-law and understands the turmoil that he is facing. And she knows that only she and her husband will be able to help him out.

Some people do not want to see the reality and continue to behave as they want, so oblivious to their surroundings they are... YAMiNi... a perfect example. And then, there are some who cannot see beyond their ego. SAMRAT's Dad is one of such.

GUNJAN never discriminates between her family and the SHERGILL's. She works with as much dedication here too. And this is what is attracting SAMRAT to her, her simplicity, no attitude nature, something he has not seen.

Yes, MBYPH has a totally different SAMRAT... an angry, egoistic person. Here, Sammy is just like he was in the show... a bit naughty, very adorable.

That is GUNJAN... someone who can win over anyone's heart with her simple, soft nature. For SAMRAT, it is something very new. Her soft-spoken nature attracted him to her. her innocence floored him totally. And then, when he decided that this is the girl he wants in his life, this is the girl he needs in his life, he took the initiative to make her feel comfortable in his presence. And SAMRAT has been the charmer always. So was not difficult for him.

The main part of the SaJan love story was its haddi's. how can any SaJan story be complete without them. ROHAN is not at all like TiNKU. He gets intimidated by SAMRAT very easily. And jealous toh... we wanted to see a jealous SAMRAT anyway.

SAMRAT is a nice person. And he knows, as a kid, if ROHAN wants anything, TiNKU, a kid ROHAN's age would too. And he too did not discriminate while making the purchases. But then, the way GUNJAN and TiNKU have been brought up, it was keeping in sync with their characters that they refuse the gifts. GUNJAN could stay by her decision, but then, Tinku is a kid, though he behaves maturely. And GUNJAN understands her brother. So, she permits TiNKU to accept the gift.

It is SAMRAT's realization that GUNJAN is not like any of his earlier GF's is what is pushing him closer to GUNJAN.


Thanx again for your compliment.😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolioqueen

Nice updates. Cute conversation. Thanks 4 ur pm.



Thanks Aishi for your sweet words.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Archismita

read it again today... feeling kind of speechless, lyk the last tym.. i could actually imagine Sanaya n Mohit acting those parts and saying those words... continue soon😊



Thanks a lot Archi for your compliment.😳 We also want to see them in these types of characters.😛 Some very interesting twists is coming back to back...wid ARNAV grand entry 😳 working on Next part , will be post soon.

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