Obsession 2,new story link-pg 73 - Page 18

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Best Storm...!!!

Best Putul's Birthday...!!!

Best Small Accident...!!!

First I thought what will happen with his accident on putul's birthday...I was scared how he will reach home as geet could go and find out due to putul...thnak god he is safe...

He realised the importance of geet & putul in his life...what if something happened with him...how they will live without him...very good geet...you made him realise how both are imp in his life...

He could not hold back his feelings for her...

Happy for their cute moment...

I am sad that they could not celebrate putul's birthday...

Best part in my POV is...

"Why were you so much worried about me???"he asked.

"Why do you always question my affection,maan???"She replied with another question.He caressed his fingers over the dry tear streaks on her cheeks.."Say it,geet.."he whispered touching his forehead to hers.."I don't want to run from this feeling anymore..I want to feel it..just say it once geet..."

"I don't know,what you want to hear,maan..My last answer had brought much distance between us"She said,clutching the back of couch with her one hand.Fear of loosing him was evident in her tone.

"Just say,what your heart feels...I just want to hear that geet"

She closed her eyes and a fresh wave of tears spilled out.Her heart was unable to bear more,as she found it bursting with emotions.Words were lost somewhere in thin air around and betweem them.Mere three words"I love you" felt superficial at that moment,still she tried to utter them but it resulted in an increase in trembling of her lips.

."Say it,please.."he almost pleaded this time..She knew,her tongue would not help her anymore,so she did that which could convey him,a tiniest part of the love which she had in her heart only and only for him.She brushed her lips on his"

Palin make him confess the way she confessed 😉😳

Originally posted by: gudmeet

thank you so much dear for such a mind blowing update

it was so emotional

maan and geet moments were truly blissful

the way maan only wanted to receive geet's love was too good

as if wants to feel the bliss totally each and every moment of it to compensate for all the moments when he was resisting geet's love

the way he kept his eyes closed was tooo good

and geet's condition stumbling in the darkness , her not being able to utter those three words everything was so very heart touching

what a wonderful piece of writing👏

though putul could not celebrate her birthday but she got the best birthday gift

her mum and dad together

next morning when she will open her eyes to step into her second yr she will begin her day with her mum and dad's love

will be nice to see maan's love for putul without any restriction now

once again👏

for such a brilliant update

Originally posted by: palindrome

Very deep and optimistic thought diva...So there is a quite sensitive side of diva is hidden beneath ispiderman ispidermaan and PT loving diva..Thanks to india forums for making me meet a person like you...😊

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

every time i think this is the best update but u prove me wrong and am happy that am wrong again... this was just the awesomesttt part...

You don't know what next minute is going to bring for you ... how true... every man is behind their future but what future beholds for us is a matter which no one knows... so better do things which is possible for us to do and in maans case its truly cherishing the gifts which god has bestowed on him, putul and geet ... and am happy that now he accepts it too...

"thanks For not stopping me from loving you..."... i just loved this line... a big hug for u 🤗

and last but not at all the least i just love how u describe putuls activities ... her bonding... her talk... her pink sandals with the whistling doubt... her every detail u describe i feel as if am watching her in real ...in this part where she abandoned her balloon and was going after what geet was having in her hand... its so true to a kids character... 👏

continue soon

Originally posted by: Diva7

yeah m lyk dat.😳...n this is my line i hav a copyright on this so dnt copy my line😆...i'll sue u😆

Originally posted by: palindrome

ohkk...I apologize..lemme change my line

Thanks to God and punarvivah for making me join IF so i could meet diva 7 here...😊

Originally posted by: Diva7

apology accepted😆

bt dnt say it again... kya??? main sorry ki baat kar rahi hu ...i dnt lyk it when my dear ones say sorry n all...mazak mein bhi nai...samjhi my dearest writer😊

Originally posted by: palindrome

I myself like such details in stories very much thats why i try to put as much as possible...😊I am glad that you liked it otherwise long ago someone had suggested me to add less details while writing...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

well i dont agree with that person then... these minute details put up in a helps the reader to travel to the writers imaginary world... i could very easily imagine and even sometimes visualize some scenes due such detailed narration... and i know how much hard work u may have put up to include those minute details... i appreciate ur hardwork and am looking forward to read more and more of them

Originally posted by: palindrome

samajh gayi my dearest reader...😊