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nada_a

@nada_a

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#601

that was awesome...loved it😆

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ipkkndbestshow

@ipkkndbestshow

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#602

Hey!! Thnk u so much fr such quick update :-)..It was an awesome update.Dont know y were u scared of putting this up ;-)..Their first kiss :-*.. She wont go..thats fr sure!! He didnt stop her coz he loves her ... Plz make them admit thier love :-)
Love u!! Hugs nd kisses :-*!! Update a.f.a.p. :-D

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#603

What makes you think this part wasn't funny??! It may not have been a riot of laughter all the way through, but that had to change at some point didn't it? Their relationship has to get serious and I just loved the way you did that in this chapter. Both wanting the same thing but neither wanting to be the one to say it as they're still not sure enough of the other. It was a little bit heartbreaking.

The humour was there but toned down, which I loved too as it kept the essence of this story without overpowering what is a subtle change in their relationship.

I also loved the slow build of their physical chemistry...a searing kiss but, again, not overpowering...yet!! 😃

So with three 'loved's in this comment alone, I think I can safely say I sort of liked this chapter 😉 😃

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fungirl13

@fungirl13

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#604

as usual waiting for the next update... you rock :)

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saucechips

@saucechips

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

Thanks. Thanks. Thanks everyone. Some of you put it better than I could ever have. Oh, it feels very weird having people go all emotional suddenly on UE..

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Nira khan

@nirbasito

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Posted: 13 years ago

#606

tanx 4 such a great update dear... 🤗

it was fantastic..awesome...too good 👍🏼

Edited by nirbasito - 13 years ago

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saucechips

@saucechips

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: hatathbristi
Fantabulous update..Serious, intense and at the same time Both the characters are true to themselves..their characteristics ..

And the great realization struck the GREATER😉 Arnav ... a man in Love. Truly.. madly and eternally...

Now waiting when Khushi understand that and what would be her reactions...
But you dear always kept us in cliffhanger...😡...Bachheki jaan loge kiya..

@purple- This is one thing which is going beyond me in the responses. Cliff-hanger for me, no doubt..But pray, how come for all of you?😆

Edited by saucechips - 13 years ago

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Shaheen

@shane1

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Love your FF very nice concept indeed. Hope they confessed soon

Thanks for the pm, you are a great writer

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rrd29

@rrd29

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#609

wonderful update...please dont leave us on this cliffhanger...plz update soon..
and PM me

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#610

Sory cnt able to like it am using moble. . . Awesome update. . Arnav is sad but coz of her dreams he dint say anythng. . And even kush expectd he would say smethng. . I loved tht pasta and jam joke :-D . . . Thnx 4 pm:-)

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