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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: mahilove


r8 guess sweety kya kheti ho backgroung music yahe laga dete hun😆

actually not a bad idea...perfact fit hoga...
Edited by swetsurati - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Hey Mahi.😊 it was supercool yaar.👏 Jus read the CS n Part-1 buddy awesome update.😉 Loved it.😛
I like Manyata's dresses.😉 Part-1 was short but superb.👍🏼 Pls next time I want a long one haan.😊 Take ur time but gimme a long chappy. Promo was damn interesting. I'm really excited to see UV-M meeting.😊
Pls PM me when you update the next chappy.😊
Thanks. 😊 I mus say u did a great job. Keep it up.👍🏼
🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Wow nice promo dear manveer aik kamray may band hn or chabi kho jaye lol plzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Great Character Sketch

Cont Soon

thank u sure i will
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
CHAPTER 2They three reached there and and orderd there favourite meal and but manayata was waiting for he bro just then jay said:
hey sisi ordered karo bhai ajaey gey
then manayata ordered he favourite meal and some trio dances started and the unnati and uday and rahul came and they also ordered and sat down and watched the danced just then uday got an called and he excuse himself and then manayata saw him from behind she thought that its prem and she also ran outside and she saw him and just start to blabber that bro kahan they ap kitna dhundah ap to na bus apne boring meeting mey gaey huey they kaminey khaey key (WHEN SHE SAID THAT UDAY EARS GOT BURSTED BUT HE KEPT QUIET )(manayata use to say kamina to prem in anger)sHE START TO SHOUT ...OR HAN AB CHUP KYN BETHO HO BOLO BHE HUM KABSEY WAIT KAR RAHEY THEY ORR..just then uday turned around and manayata was shocked and cannot utter a word and uday was amazed,super shocked and he was scanning her from top to down he was thinking in his mind ohh god she is damnn hot aese peice hamey pheley kyn nahe bheje the suudenly he came out from his thought when he didnt saw her and was finding he but couldnt find and sadly went inside ...manyata was thinking the accident with that man and start to giggle and vijay said;
sis kya hua abhe toh itne gussey mei the or ab itne has rahe ho kahe pagal pan key side effects jai bhai say toh nhe a gey oh no ab hamey ap dono sey dor he rahey gey kahe hum na pagal ho jaey i tell u
M:she came out from her thoughts...shut up vb
just then food arrived and manyata was trying the phone of prem but it was switch off just the a red bouquet came in front of her and she understand who it was and she throw the bouquet and pem said
sorry pari i know i am late but diiner sey phely agaaya na so mujh sey naeaz to nhe ho na
manayata was still angry and shout:BHAI NO WAYS NO SORRY FOR U U UUU KUTEY (when she said that uday just reconized the voice and turned around and saw that the same gil is shouting at he brother again she was lost in her beauty world ...hum ap sey baat nahe karey gey .prem;ACHA MERI MAA SORRY TERE KASAM AENDA AESA PAKKA NHE KARUN GA BUS PLZ SORRY SORRY HE WAS UPTO KNEEL DOWN WHEN SHE GRAB HIM AND HUG HIM BHAI APKE JAAGA WAHNA NHE HEI...hum to bus aesey he guusa karahey they..just then vb inturupted
VB:pholo ko taroan ka meri bhena hei sare ummer terey sang rehna hei
J;wow vb wat a background song
VB;thank u thanku magar agara star plus ka draama khatam hogaya ho to kya ab hum bhojhan karey i am hungry or uper sey yeh khanna dhannda ho jaey ga so hrry up
M and prem started to laught at vb
M;okayyy
then they start to eat and uday was watching them and a small smile crept on her face just then rahul said
bro were are u lost lets eat the food is getting cold the uday started to eat and then when they were upto go he thought to saw her last time but couldnt find her he thought maybe she has gone
then at parking alot
M;ohh bhai apna phone bhool gae hun mei ate hun ap log chalo
P;oks jaldi ana pari
she went inside and just the uday was also saw her and told unnati and rahul that he has forgoted something (LOOkin g towrds manyata )toh tum log jau mei a jaun ga just the n he walk towards manayta and grab her hand and push in a dark store room and put his hand on her mouth so that she cant scream or shout they were so close tht not a single air can pass through the sweet fragrance of mnayata was making uday attract towards her then manyata realized there position and she pushe him and saw his face and she get to know that he was the same guy who she has met him in the parking area
M:tummm yhan ..ab mana key hum ney tumhey bhot kuch bol diya o galti sey kamina bhe bol diya feeling embarsse and she continued magar mei samjhe key tum merey bo ho o isliye meney tumhey wo sub boldiya magara iska matlab yeh thorte key tum mujhey khech key yahna lekey ao o han mei tumhey soy booo she was continously blabbbering and uday was lost in her and she immediately lock her lips by his after minutes he left her for oxygen because two hot people were making the atmosphere more hotter :P mnayata eyes were got widened and her mouth was half open
UV:tum chup rehte ho to ache lagte ho fm radio and smik mun to band karlo hottie pie ab aesey dekho ge to hum khae dubara tumhey kiss karney key bajaey move towards her ear and said ek raat ke liye s__na ka leey she rapidly closed her mouthh and before she could say something her phone rang and it was prem she recieve the call
p:pari where are u jaldi ao its late we have to go
M:ya okay bro mei a rahe hun
the manata move towards the door and when she reached the door she said steve hotel room 234 and turned back and winked him and went away from there because this was very coomon for her many oys has kissed her and she has handle this type of situation alot uday was numb of her attitude and then he smirk and he also went from there.
manayata was making her hair and a small smile crept on her face and she was blushing and same situation of uday ...uday said to himsel wat a girl man ...wat dude ur blushing stop blushing ur not a girl and u have kissed many girls so just chill relax he was making his heart calm but his heart was beating faster and faster and there manayta was thinking of him and slept and uday went to sleep but couldnt sleep the face of manayata was coming in front of his eyes he said to himself off ho yar fm radio ka naam bhe nhe poch pata nhe kya jadoo kardiya hei isney just sleep uv sleep sleep he was talking to himself that he didnt realized when he slept .
PRECAP
IS THE PROMO ON PG 3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

really nice and awesome...👍🏼

UV checking out M...ccooll😉 andM and Vijay bhai scene was too cute and funny😆

Update soon and pm me🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

really nice and awesome...👍🏼

UV checking out M...ccooll😉 andM and Vijay bhai scene was too cute and funny😆

Update soon and pm me🤗

thank u dear 😉and chapter 3 is ready i am gonna update after few minutes😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
nice update. waiting for ur update.
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome i loved it
the whole thing was super cool
i loved uday checking manyata out
loved the bonding of prem and manyata
loved all the dialogues
the whole thing was so nice
i loved manveer kiss
next update looks hot hot
please update soon
and please pm me if u can
loved how u showed manveer feelings that they both feel a kind of change
please please update soon
i loved this peice
love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome i loved it

the whole thing was super cool
i loved uday checking manyata out
loved the bonding of prem and manyata
loved all the dialogues
the whole thing was so nice
i loved manveer kiss
next update looks hot hot
please update soon
and please pm me if u can
loved how u showed manveer feelings that they both feel a kind of change
please please update soon
i loved this peice
love u

awww so sweet of u dear sure now next update will be for u 😆and thankxxx

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