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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#331

a beautiful update... loved the way you described arnav's being petrified of khushi's father... the kissing scene was equally adorable: intense but with respect for the lady ever-present and no boundaries being crossed

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#332

part 4

shyam needed to be tought a lesson for misbehaving. Loved how khushi took up his challenge and made the phone call to complain against shyam.

Its good that Dr. mishra came there just in time to help khushi. He would have no doubts because he saw shyam's dirty intentions by his own eyes.

Arnav was not going to let shyam walk out unharmed. And he wish he could do more then just give him a black eye.

Part 5

Arnav and khushi managed to have a good date despite the fact that arnav came late. And the poor guy had to be punished by making him watch PS I love you. But he did get his reward by recieving a perfect kiss.

please continue soon

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darkninja

@darkninja

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#333

i cant beleive he explained to what he was gonna it was soo cute seriously and the chapters name god i had the reaction to khushi's
"WHAT" LOL

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Mobile mein Jalebi waali picture, so , so adorable. I mean, what better way to while away your time in a boring Conference :p And yes, that catching her in the arms scene, hell you can visualize Arnav in it so, so well. Thank you Rae ;)

And Gerry IS adorable. have you read the book? Sigh :/ And Gerard Butler is well ...*blush*

I have this urge to say Aww to man, this Arnav is just so sweet. Never even pushing her for a kiss, scared of the dad, respect for his senior Doctor, I say, Prince Charming Rae!:)

You know what I realized right now (this will deviate from OFD)...you have this knack of bringing about these starkly different, yet lovable characters, be it Nisha, or Sharman, a hot senior for Arnav , or this one hell of a Doctor, they all are so addictive.

She tasted like jalebis was the first thing he noted but she also tasted like the first dew drops after a beautiful rain shower which would spread natural beauty all around -fresh and amazing and natural - no artificiality just like her own personality.< Such a beautiful line, I mean so simple and yet just practically conveying everything.

And yes, the kiss was perfect, and Raizada and Human Anatomy, good god. I love dthis chapter dammit, as always :DD

P.S. Ahem.

P.P.S Please?

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Firstly thanks for the pm.i was nt even in ur buddy list,bt u took the pain to send me a pm.thanks.
Now,about the update...i was,well perfect.i loved it.and the kiss was indeed the perfect first kiss ever written.i was blushng by the end!.
Loved the combination of Sexy Dr.Raizada and cute khushi.

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#336

wow...d most beautifull update...lovd it...thanks fr d pm

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#337

Aah the first kiss!! It was so beautifully portrayed here and was simply perfect. I especially loved arnav's dialogue just before the kiss, it was too cute and yet amazing, it really made me laugh.

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#338

you made me go awweeew rae, bootiful part and the best thing is they finally kissed without an interruption

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#339

I now know how the perfect kiss for Arnav and Khushi was shared and did I forget to mention the perfect second kiss? How can I?

It was just that perfect...loved him checking if the coast was clear, boys will be boys 😃

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#340

so he was at conference he was supposed to be focusing on but finding it difficult due to khushi aww bless but then in the end he managed
bless he was taking it slow with her thats sweet of him
and he is scared of her dad as he had been making livs difficult of boys before him in his daughter life
well dear why fear when there is love invloved
aww and the kissed woohoo
man good thing nobody interrupted them though that was lucky
cheers for pm