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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asha...


Bhangan u does rox...bt me no speaks americn...I had 2 google da ''chiclet''

Whattay symballism... 👏, tke a bow my frnd !! U vry cleva

Mnds in da gutter... u knwz y... LOLZ, u wrotez it !!

Y no PM frnd ;( , plz PM me

T4S


Haha, Bhangan...that was totally hilarious, was LMAO whilst reading it...who would've thought gum, flashbacks, sepia colour would symballically somehow lead to consummation!! This is what you call PHUNNNY !!



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Yaara frnd u no on ma buddy list.😭 How i PM den whn u no on ma list?? Plz tell me na?

Lyke I said in da pg 1 m accpt frndshp reqst now 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti



what exactly do you want to continue?

Arhi 69 or the FF?


ArHi 69 is not happening EVER she meant FF

I like how Meera's comments are two words. So concise and to the point 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
god you guys are funny.closing loop in terms of 69 position wow tiya tum aur tumhare symbolism hasa hasa ke marhi dalenge akdin
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh god bhangan ji...the ending is really rocking...🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Khol Na Halke Halke makes me LMAO every time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ah-mazing!!!
I fell off my bed reading this!!!
Just imagining khushi trying to decode and ASR trying open hus zip is enough for me to burst out laughing...who knows...next they try it...maybe Khushi will jump off the bed and bring out her notepad and say...arnavji, i cant do this..the numbers dont add up!!we need to wait for another week before the numbers are in sync!!

Great stuff!!!
Cnt w8 4 d nxt chptr...sry yaara i wntd to giv a lngr kommnt bt i dnt hav tym!! Nxt tym i will pakka giv a prpr kommnt...bt dnt lve us hngng 4 d nxt updt!!

^^^^^^if you could read that...i bow down to you!!seriously!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow. I read your update and for 2 minutes, I was blank. It had so many meanings etched all over it, just like the pimples etched over Arnavji's back.

I would like to take you back to my theory of "Choda Chaukaur Chaddiyan"
Now the "Choda" is here is in the picture but the "Chaukaur" is yet to cum. This is where another "Ch" strikes in with "Chiclet" which adds another loop to our equation.

But the loop closes by itself in the course by the DickCoder itself. Hear me out.
What happens when you remove the "a" from "Choda"? Exactly. Now that's what I call an amazing story line.

Now the "Chiclet" is the "gum" which rhymes with "cum". Gum is used for bad breath. Do you see the connection here now? The "Chiclet" is placed in the "Chaddi" of Arnavji- the loop is closed.

Chaukaur means Four. Khushi bought "four" chaddis for Arnavji after Rocky had stolen all the others. Interesting, isn't it?

Bhanguji, take a bow 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Aa Kushi Se Kudh-kushi Karle...


A/N-

1.Dear Yaaraz, please play the music to set the mood for the update. Music is very important to get the intense emotions expressed in this update. Also take a moment to digest the poem at the end to appreciate the struggle/conflict of emotions of the lead character.

2. If you want PM for updates, well prove to the Chamelis that you are worthy of a PM. Write a 500 word comment on the symballisms of this update.

3. Dont send me PMs asking me to reveal the future plot, its rude and I have no idea of the future plot myself.

4. To all those who read the update, commented and liked my update Cheeks cupping and forehead kissy-wissy to you.

5. My fellow chamelis- the slave drivers forced me into writing this update via emotional blackmail even when MB is very close to popping out. So I dare all of you to give me more like than the other Chamelis.


Moving on to the update

Precap- Khushi couldn't wait any longer and neither could ASR. She started staring at the c[l]ock. There were 6 minutes left till 9am. 6 & 9 if put together form 69. Everything just seemed right. They had indeed come full circle closing all the loop holes in their sex story and opening doors to other pastures. ASR had also finally gotten that zip opened. He then proceeded towards Khushi and said "Khushi I may come off as strong here and let me tell you this is not going to be easy, it's gonna be hard so take it as it comes." ...



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jG_7w2oSJpI[/YOUTUBE]


With his zip opened ASR decided to open the other zip that counts- Khushi's zip. After all thanks to the deep analysis in a certain fan forum, he had learnt that the true art of consummation lay in his ability to open Khushi's zip by 2 cms.

So with that in his mind, target in front of his smirking eyes, courage in his heart and patience (or lack of it) in his chotey which was throbbing for the much awaited Khushi, he approached Khushi like a lion would approach its prey, like a commuter would approach the Mumbai public train service, like Di would approach a Pooja ki Thalli, like Khushi would approach a plate of jalebis, as Payal would approach a bucket of clothes that need to be laundered.

Khushi was in a fix; yes she wanted this, wanted this very much. How long could she go without feeling Chotey's love? For how long has she been waiting to get undressed out of her rainbow velveteen outfits with fitted push-ups? They were getting as uncomfortable as Chote in his Jodhpurs.

But then something struck her... she realised that they could not go ahead with this anymore. Yes, she couldn't do it. Her face immediately reflected her confusion and indecision.

ASR saw the hesitation in Khushi's face. Although he was hoping to crumple the sheets on his bed, his own face crumpled as quickly as the black shoes he has been wearing for the last 14 months. A million emotions went through his heart and he screamed in agony and unfulfilled desires.

"Lagta hain humain,

Lagta hain humain,

Jab bhi hum paas aaye Khushi ke,

Humare dil tho toota hi hai,

Magar uske saath tooti hain,

Humare Chote ki sapne and aashayein."

Lagta nahi hai hume,

Humare naseeb main hai chote ki Khushi,

Lagta hai humain milegi sirf Khudh-Khushi, Khudh-Kushi, Khudh-Kushi (in echo)"

Alrighty, finally: The Chameli anthem.

ASR Rox (not in the bed though)

Sarun Papers (their love life is paper thin)

Arshi scissors. (for Barun's hair cut)

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ha Ha Ha! I laughed out at loud at how Di would approach a pooja thaali. Kya Basantiji...you're hiding your light under a bushel. You should be writing more! 😊

BTW, kindly edit to include Chameli anthem. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
TFS

RES

Dear i am only 10, reading this in my wshin mchine.

Luved it 2 da core.

it pinched ma heart.

the zipper dialect made me weak on my knees, n nw i hav 2 ask ma fmily 2 pull me out da washin mchine.

continu soun.

m w8tng eagrly

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