guys please give feedback to this

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi guys I am so obsessed with kasam se and Ram kapoor that now my dear hubby had started to think there is sumthin else goin on. I had to tell him ofcourse and his reply was "god I had to compete with ur amitji n now this ram kapoor" so I am putting down some situations that I have imagined. Hope u guys like it. (this is b4 they consummate their marriage, imagination yaar)

Jai and aditya are sittin n drikin and jai is broodin (as always)

Aditya: jai wots wrong wid u, main kab se bole ja raha hoon aur tum…..?

Jai: yaar aditya mere ko khud nahin pata mere ko kya ho raha hai.

Aditya: but I know tughe pyaar ho gaya hai mere yaar

Jai-don't be silly.

Aditya- acha tu bol abhi kya tu Bani ke bare mein nahin soch raha tha

Jai (with a smile) yaan yaar tughse juth nahin bolunga aaj kal bani mughe achi lagti hai pata nahin kab se yeh sab shuru hua but now I respect her. She understands me.

Aditya- nahin jai I think she loves u but she wont say it, I think u both sud talk but shuruat tumehin karni padegi.

Jai- (very exited) yaar do u really think so?

Aditya- yaan jai and I think u sud do it today itself, aaj bani bahot kush hai jab se tune use sabke samne who necklace pehnaya hai.

Jai gets up all smiles and hugs aditya and says thanks yaar and leaves.

He opens the door of his bedroom and sees bani lookin at the necklace in the mirror, their eyes meet jai comes in and stands in the middle of the room very awkwardly with both hands in his pockets. Bani comes and stands in front of him.

Bani- kya hua Mr Walia aap pareshaan hai?

Jai laughs and scratches his head

Jai-nahin bani main pareshan nahin maein to aaj bahot kush huin.

Bani (without thinking) main bhi

Jai – kyon

Bani- aaj apne mughe yeh necklace pehnaya is liye, thanks

Jai is very surprised he did not expect bani to say that( he stands there for 10 sec with his mouth open) they both are lookin at each other then bani feels shy and lowers her eyes.

Jai then holds her and she looks up he says bani today I want to talk wid u and I am goin to be very frank and I want the same from u. aaj hum dono ek dusre se kuch nahin chupayenge. He takes her towards the bed and they both sit down on the edge of the bed.

Jai- bani I know i have been very unkind to u bcoz of the circumstances we got married in

Bani- mr walia (jai puts his hand on her mouth n stops her)

Jai- nahin bani mughe bolne do please, ab aisa nahin hai ab mein tumhen pasand karne laga hoon jab tum mere paas nahin hoti to meri nazaren tumhe doondhti hai. Main tumhare bina adhura mehsoos karta hoon ( Bani is shoked) haan bani yeh saach hai now I want this marriage to work.

Bani again stats to say sumthin but he again stops her

Jai- meri puri baat sun lo, bani I want this marriage to work but I will also not force u to it bcoz if u don't love me then I am ready to give u a divorce, after all you have full right to walk out of this marriage as it was not ur choice, it was forced on u. main tumhare yaadon ke sahare jee loonga, agar tum kush hogi to main bhi bahot kush rahoonga, ab mughe sirf tumhari kushi chahiyen.

They both are lookin at each other jai is waitin for bani to say sumthin but she does not jai gets nervous and gets up apne balo mein haath pherta hai frustrated (unusual for him but see the situation he has poured his heart out and bani is not sayin anything)

Jai pacin the floor- bani kuch to bolo

Bani- I love you ( very softly)

Jai stops turns towards her she is also standing now comes closer to her

Jai- kya bola tumne ( surprised, shocked does not believe if he heard right)

Bani- wot u heard

Jai- bani please I don't know wot I heard

Bani- Mr walia mughe nahin pata kab se magar main ab aap se bahot pyaar karti hoon, aur main bhi is shadi ko puri tarah nibhana chati hoon.

Jai is so happy he bursts into a laugh and hugs her

Jai- bani bani bani I am so happy I love u.

He takes her face in his hands and looks deeply in her eyes they keep lookin at each other (god knows for how long) jai is bringin his face close to her (he is goin to kiss her) when there is a loud knock at the door jai looks irritated says wot the hell bani laughs shyly (knock continues)jai moves towards the door

Jai- I hav not finished wid you

Bani ( smiling very shyly)- neither hav I

Jai stops in his footsteps shoked he starts movin towards her but the knock continues he goes and opens the door and it is Anu.

Jai- (irritated, just imagine wot he has left) Kya hai ( he actually shouts)

Anu is scared she feels he is in a very bad mood

Anu- mami se kaam tha

Guys I have to leave it here as hav to rush somewhere pls tell me if I sud continue.

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rush2 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
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too good pls pls tell us wot happens next cant imagine bani sayin that 😉 my god jai sud hav had a heart attack
helloeveryone thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#3
goood part specially the door knock sequence
god knows kab jai bani bina disturabance ke baat kar payaenge. 😆
rush2 thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#4
take care of ur hubby too dont wanna upset him
memz21 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
that was excellent plzzzzz cont sooooon

Asap Please cant wait

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
lolllllllllll 'i've not finished with u yet' killer line. wiked plz do carry on
Auditi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
its awesome..... tooo good..... 👏

plz plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon 😊
Tomiko thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8

😆awesome hun!,................would love for you to continue!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
..lol..aww..poor jai...
but i just love wht uve written...plzzzzzzzzzz...post the next one sooooooooooooon....
sanam84 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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haila ye gada murda kisne ukhad diya, this is one of my first few post, i have finished this FF also it was Bani getting bold.

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