Ariya vaada raha FF ch 20 LAST CH PG 50 3/4 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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fizz.. jaan tumhari ff yahan bhi... pm bhi nahi kiya... achcha nibhaya aapne ye dosti... dost dost na raha...

hehehe.. ok anyways.. loved it.. please continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was really nice! plz continue.
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Ch 2

Suddenly Riya faints in his arms arjun places on the bed

Arjun: rathod we have call the doctor now

Doctor comes in all the men are outside the door

Shree: jo Riya kay saath hua is just horrible

Rathod: I know us rana ko nahi chorenge hum he will pay

Chotu : muhje tho riya ki fikar ho re hai

Arjun: dehko jo hua hau laken ab we have to make her stronger she has face her fears ..we all know ki after such an incident how a girl feels and what happens 'aur rana ko main handle karonga

Suddenly the doctor comes out

Dr. how is she patient ki family ho aap ?

Rathod: nahi family jaise boliye na kya hau riya theek hai kya?

Dr:. dehko I need talk to her family

Arjun: tell me I'm her husband

Dr: oh acha mr.raute aap ki wife has gone through a lot she is in complete shock and if she doesn't cry or show how she really feels if she just suffers her pain inside it will be very risky and she will be getting nightmares raath ko don't leave her alone she will be very jumpy and scared she needs time the physical scars will heal sooner then the emotional n metal scares she has.

Her state is very delicate she needs as much love and support she can get and try not talk about what happened until she does 'just care for her the nurse has changed her clothes she is resting

Arjun: ji doctor ill take of her more than my life thank you

They all go in the room she is asleep

Rathod: aaj raat we will all stay with her here shree tab thak rana a file do

Everyone in the room is trying act normal and study the next case file while arjun is sitting in the chair right next riya's bed in deep thought when suddenly

Riya begins to toss and turn then wake up screaming from her sleep

Riya: nahiii leave me don't touch get away ahhh

Arjun jumps up from his chair rathod sheer and chotu run towards the bed

Riya realizes that it's just here friends she calms down arjun hands her glass of water

Arjun hand accidently touches her hand she drops the glass

Riya just looks up at them doesn't speak

Rathod: riya please rest its fine don't worry sab theek hoga hum sab hai tumahre saath

Riya suddenly stands up and walks towards the bathroom and goes inside and locks it they run after her riya goes in shower with her clothes on and on's the cold water and just starts crying and drops to the floor she hugs her knees together and bends her head and cries her heart out

Shree: ri open the door please

Rathod: riya tum theek ho riya suno open this door we all are worried riya

Arjun: riya open this door right now samhje ya samhjao

Rathod: arjun abhi tho apna attitude band karo

CHOTU BREAK DOWN THE DOOR NOW

They all run in they see riya in the shower with her clothes on crying and washing her hands roughly

Suddenly arjun goes to go to her but is stopped by rathore

Rathod: rako she doesn't need to treated rudely at this time shree jao

Shree runs to riya

Riya screams

Riya: get away don't come near me go

Shree: ri it's me shree you'll get sick the water is so cold come out

Riya pushes shree away

Riya: nahi all you of out now I need to shower I feel disgusting I can still feel his touch his disgusting touch gahin aate hai muhje cries riya

She is scrubbing her hands clean with soap

Chotu: riya you'll hurt yourself stop

Rathore : riya please bas karo your hands are red

Riya: theek hai phir make his sickening touch go away please

Rathod, shree and chotu where crushed after hearing riya's words

She continues to wash her hands and face not stopping

Rathod calmly tries to talk to her: riya I promise it will go away please abhi tum he tries to console her

Arjun goes up to her

Arjun he gives her a towel while giving her the towel he injects the sleep meds in her so she can get some rest

Ahh but she suddenly faints arjun catches her but then is pushed away from rathod

Rathod: Chotu go get nurse tell to come in here and change riya's clothes then ill place her on the bed

Raute ek haad hote hai tum kaise

Arjun: rathod I had no choice she was go crazy dehka na she was hurting her self

Rathod: I know what you did was right par there is a way suddenly

Nurse brings riya she is very drowsy arjun picks her up in his arms she suddenly begins to kick him and screams

Get away don't touch me leave me yells riya

Arjun somehow manages to place her on the bed she doze off to sleep

Shree has tears in his eyes

Shree:I can bare this anymore just look at how ree is damn it

Rathod:Shree we have be strong to be there for riya

Edited by Fiza28 - 13 years ago
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Ch 3

2weeks later riya was acting normal getting on with life there were guards outside her house 24/7 for her protection

She got ready and headed to the ETF headquarters

Chotu: riya kaise hai yaar koi baat hui

Riya: hey guys aaj ka case kya hai

Rathod: riya tum yahan you're on leave you need rest

Riya :main theek hoon Sir I'd like to join my duty once again

Shree hands her a cup of coffee

Suddenly arjun comes behind her and grabs her hand she drops her coffee mug in fear and screams

Riya: AHHH

Arjun: tum theek nahi ho you need rest your are mentally and emotionally not stable you were Ra

*she slaps him*

Riya : Stop it Sir I'm sorry laken tum aise kasie kar sak the ho I hate you I said I'm fine as much as I want to forget what happened you won't let me na ' yes I know what happened I'm am very much aware what I went through but you(pointing a finger at him and looking at all the men) '..none of you men will understand what I'm going through none only I know what hell I'm in and why I want forget this I know that I can't change what happened but I want to forget this that's all is it too much to ask '.she has tears in her eyes and storms out of the room crying

Shree and chotu go after her

Shree :ri wait

Chotu: shree rako I'm also coming

Rathod: unemotional ka haad hota hai she just been through this and you Raute disgusting she was just getting better aur tum damn it

Arjun: let me do what I'm doing its only to help her rathod doctor said she has to cry she has to talk what happened she can't show her I'm brave front or she will get worse trust me

Rathod: no Raute what you did was wrong job hi ho ab let go talk to riya

Rathod and arjun come where riya shree and chotu are

Shree: sab theek hoga ri don't worry

Riya: bullshit shree bas stop I'm tired of hearing this from everyone here you all are wrong nothing is theek and won't be and I know that but still I want my normal life back is that too much to ask stop this sympathy stuff and treat me like you all use to please I beg of you all

Rathod: riya you are right we all are just worried for you bas but we will make sure things will be like they were before

Riya: thank you sir and I'm sorry for my temper

Rathod: no its ok Riya looking at arjun some of needed it

Riya: sir ajj ka case kya hai

Rathod: abhi thak no case riya so paper work

Shree: yaar ri yeh sab chor you know something chotu finally found out the girl's name at the department store

Riya: oh chotu really oh la la so what's her name ? bolo na

Chotu: Pinky he blushes

Riya: aye haye pinky and chotu that is just too cute

Shree: aur ri yeh hi nahi pata hai pinky na ek cook hai she works at the dhaba on mali street we should go there once

Riya: haan yaar that would be fun

Rathod: guys kuch kaam bhi kar lo sirf baatein nahi

Rathod: wiase not bad idea shree kyun nahi hum sab next week chotu ki birthday ki liye wahan pe jaye?

Riya: rocking idea sir I'm hungry ill get a snack

Arjun hands her a bagel

She looks at him she takes it without saying a word

Shree nudges chotu

Riya is eating the bagel while little cream cheese is on her lip

Shree: ri you have something on your lip

Arjun comes and wipes it eye lock

Riya moves away

A week later

Shree chotu rathod and arjun in car going pick up riya for the dinner

Shree: finally ri is back to normal she is fine now she laughs and like are old riya

Chotu: I know yaar who would know that 3 weeks ago what hell she went through

Rathod: that's are riya strong and brave let's just make sure we don't remind her of what ever happened

Arjun: you guys are blind she is still suffer but quietly kis ko bolti nahi

Rathod: we all know this Raute we just are trying respect her wishes bas

At her house riya comes out wearing red tight pants and shiny black long sleeve lace top and black heels

Guys are looking at her

Riya gets in the back with chotu and shree

Shree: super top lag re ho ri

Chotu: dahsu lag ra ho

Riya: thanks guys happy birthday chotu this for you

Hands him a gift open it at dinner

Chotu: thanks riya

Arjun keeps glancing at her from the mirror

Arjun thinks itna tight pants kyun pena tha he rolls his eyes

At the place

Riya: chotu yeh place hygienic tho hai na

Chotu: riya haan yaar

The waiter comes

Chotu orders paneer thikka, chaana butura,, malai kofta's,and sarsu ka saag maaki di roti aur

Rathod: chotu itna kahana already order kare bas if we want we always order again

Chotu opens the gift it's a picture of the whole ETF team

Arjun: wow acha gift hai main soch ra tha ki koi girly typical gift hoga

Riya looks at him and rolls her eyes

Suddenly the dhol starts riya shree start dancing Bhangra

Rathod: acha hai riya is smiling na kyun Raute

Arjun: haan Rathod after long time she is smiling

The food comes

Everyone Is eating

The waiter comes and asks what they want to drink

Rathod: salty laasi

Shree: meethi laasi

Chotu: lassi

Riya: mango lassi with a straw

And you sir asks the waiter kuch nahi pani

Riya: ek minute ek masala cutting chai unki liye

Arjun looks up and nods

Chotu :whispers do dil mil re hai magar chup ke chup ke

Shree: sab ko ho re hai khaber chup ke chup ke they both laugh

Riya is eating food when suddenly she chokes

And starts coughing

Arjun grabs water and gives to her he comes and sits near her trying calm her

Other then the ETF team a old couple is noticing this that is sitting near there table

Punjabi woman: aye haye dehko ji kitna soni Jodi hai

Sardar : haan ji kuri bhi pyaari hai

Punjabi lady: oye munde aap ki moti kitni pyaari haan ji

Sardar : aur bhabhi ji aap pati tho tumse kitna pyaar kar tha hai

Chotu shree and rathod are amused

Shree: oye arjun sir ka gussa ab shy rocket hoga

Chotu: haan yaar poor riya

Rathod: raute hai gussa tho always

Riya: ji yeh mera husband nahi hai aur main aap ki bhabhi nahi hoon

Sardar: oh ho acha samja boyfriend hai koi nahi kal husband hoga

Arjun: dehko yeh meri kuch nai lag thi hai Samje ya samjao

Riya: looks at him hurt

After dinner they go back to chotu's house to cut the cake

In the car

Riya: yaar chotu im sorry but pinky isn't a good cook I feel sick I think I have food poisoning

Rathod: kyun kya hau riya we are ate and we all are fine

Arjun: larki hai rathod delicate hai

Riya: nahi I bet it was hygienic this always happens when eat at places like that

The get to the place she runs inside and runs in the bathroom

She starts throwing up

She comes out

Shree: ri you ok?

Riya: yup I'll be fine this happens a lot if I eat outside food I'll be fine

They are cut the cake after a while they all go home

Next day at ETF

Riya walks in

Shree: ri how you today

Riya: im better I guess it was the food

Chotu: sorry ri

Riya: no chotu don't be

Rathod walks in ok guys so ek evidence mila hai the man who was painting the house used this paint laken something else was mixed in it ab you guys tell me iss paint bucket si yeh paint what's the difference rathod opens them

Riya: Sir the smell it is awful please closes it

Arjun: smell come on riya aisa kuch nahi hai they smell fine

Riya: nahi sir please its smells horrible

Suddenly riya feels dizzy

Chotu catches her and sits her down

Rathod: shree close the paint now

Arjun hands her water she drinks it

Arjun: ab kaise ho

Riya : theek hoon smell just got to me

She gets up when she feels dizzy again and faints

Arjun: shree call a doctor now

Doctor comes out

arjun: doctor how is Riya

Doctor: she is fine no need to worry Mr.Raute congratulations she is pregnant she is asleep she doesn't know yet so when she wakes up please give her the good news she leaves

Arjun: what iss ka matlab

Rathod: Rana jo kiya yeh uska bacha hai

Shree: oh no poor Ri how will she handle this

Chotu : who will tell her and how will we tell her that she is pregnant that too with rana's baby

Riya comes out she hears them

Riya: KYA preg '. Main ' Pregnant ' no ' no

Shree goes to her

Shree: ri please calm down

Riya: bullshit you all are lying

Riya: shree please tell me yeh jhoot hai yeh can't be happening nahi please she almost faints

Arjun: dehko riya please clam down sit here yeh hi sach hai

Riya: no you all are lying

Arjun: really lying ' takes her hand and places on her lower tummy

Her hand on her is on tummy

Arjun : abhi tum lag tha hai ki yeh jhoot hai riya nahi yeh karva sach hai

suddenly she moves her hands and has tears in her eyes'

she drops to the floor crying

Precap ch4

Few days later

Riya: sir I'd like to take 2days I need some space

Rathore: riya you can take as many days as needed

Riya: thank you sir she leaves

Arjun: shree uska cell tap karo who kis se baat kart hi kahan jaate I want everything

Shree: kya par kyun sir

Arjun: do what im telling you no questions samhje ya samjao?

Rathore: yeh kya hai Raute riya koi criminal nahi hai

Hour later

Shree: sir riya ka cell kis se baat kar re hai

Riya: haan doctor I'll be there in half hour thank you

Doctor: Riya this is very risky yeh abortion can be life-threatening your body is already very weak and mentally you're very stressed as your doctor im advising you not to do this

ETF Team: Abortion

Shree:arjun sir you were right

Riya: doctor yeh body meri hai yeh baby bhi mera hai whatever I want to do I will do main yeh abortion kar re hoon that is final she cuts the call

Arjun "yeh larki pagal hoge hai kya he runs out of the office

Shree: ri kaise yeh kar sak thi hai

Rathore: chotu get the car Raute gusse main hai aur riya hush main nahi hai jaldi karo we have stop them both

Edited by Fiza28 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow that was really good. Please continue soon and please pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! Riya pregnant:O OMG Continue very soon. Wanna read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh damn!
Ab meri pyaari si Mutton ke saath ye hi hona bakhi tha.
I completely respect her decision to abort the baby, though am against taking a life.
Uske saath jo hua woh kisi ke saath na ho.
Good job dhi!
Edited by FeistySoul - 13 years ago
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#28
yippee chapter 2 and 3 together! awesome! loved the chapters a lot! riya's emotions are well protrayed and also arjun trying his best to let the team know that he is onii trying to help riya! now riya is pregnant and she is trying to abort it! hope arjun can do something abt it! please update soon! can't wait to know what is going to happen... very much eager!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the 1st one was so touching it make me to cry ...i swear its true u written very well

the 2nd one was so cute and friendly but so unfortunate for Riya...poor girl

precap of part four is so much horrible ...

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ur os is so much beautifull i like it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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m just loving it
different story
cont soon

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