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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank u Dear...🤗
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Originally posted by: Maria.

res,,, SWeety i'll edit soon..🤗



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😆Love u lodsss SIS.. 🤗🤗🤗
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apne abhi tak nhi parha hain na?? 😔 i know mera un-ress karna baki hain bt apka yeh le kar 2ress hain jo blank hain...😔😔

😆 love u lodsss DI...🤗🤗🤗
next time asa nhi chalega...😛 ohk ji...😳😆
Btw!!! where is my "Mirror" update???? 😳
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Assalamuwalikum...😳

Thank u sooo much my SISters n APIs...🤗for reading n commenting on the previous part...😳m glad that u all liked it...😳

Thank u sooo much for Hitting The LIKE Tab and for all Ur Appreciations..
M here on my learning process of writing though i know m nt that good..😳
But THANK U sooo much for all the appreciations...😳
Replied to u all...😳
LOVE u ALL...🤗🤗🤗

so here i present the 5th part of my SS...😳

Too Good to be True...

Scroll Down...n DO READ n Criticize n Comment plzzz😳
Don't Forget to Hit the "LIKE" Tab...😳


😳 Anila(ANI)

Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Well...m back With an update...n this is Dedicated to my Two Awesome😎 DIs!!!!!! 🤗🤗
My one DI...😎who doesn't read my updates and My another Di...😎 who sometimes read sometimes Skip bt still comments...😆
Yes!!! My Jaya DI n my Anji DI who are The Angels of my life who came only to make me Smile...😃😆 yes!!! that is what they both have to do most of time when we talk...🤣 bt i know still They ❤️ me bt For Sure I ❤️ my DIs more!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
love u lodsss Jaya DI...🤗 n Anji DI...🤗



Part *5*~It Hurts :'(~

"Nupur go and get ready, we are going to Disco" said an excited Pia entering in her room.

"Disco but why?" diverting her attention from the novel she was reading she looked at Pia n asked.

"Because I got my first modeling assignment!!" adjusting herself beside her best friend Pia told now focusing on what Nupur was reading.

"What! Wow!!!!!! Congrats princess.." getting the news she replied hugging her best friend tightly.

"Thank u sooo much sweetheart now go n get ready all are coming for a treat n we are gonna party tonight!"hugging her back she said leaving her now.

"Ermmm..Pia u know I don't like to go to party." Tucking a strand behind her ears Nupur said with a bit oh hesitation not to make her best friend's mood spoiled.

"Exactly Pia! How can u forget such an important thing that a boring person like her don't go to disco cause ppl go there to enjoy drink, party and dance unlike her." Mayank said with a frustration look entering in their conversation.

"Right! What will I do there Pia? I will be just standing there in a corner n all." Showing no interest to start an argument with him she replied.

"Ohh! Come on Nupur m not gonna listen to u this time..yaar this is my very first assignment n my best friend won't be there how can that be!!! No u have to come for our friendship's sake ok!" pia said making a cute puppy face which she knew her best friend can't ignore.

"But Pia..." Nupur still try to hesitate but then gave up to her command.

"Not a word Nupur u are coming. Now go and get ready!" Pia said and made her stand up n went towards her wardrobe n then left her room along with Mayank to get ready.

"Ok." Knowing nothing can save her this time she picked a black spaghetti dress n went to get dressed.

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"Hi Nupur tum yeha akheli kya kar rahi hoon lets dance na n u haven't taken any glass yet let me get u a drink." Seeing her standing alone in a corner Raj, Pia's friend from the same university where Nupur studies said standing beside her.

"No Raj its ok I d-o-n.." being bored from the past 30mins when after coming here n meeting with all Pia's friends she answered but before she could finish a voice she was trying to avoid interrupted.

"She doesn't drink or dance u know ppl who doesn't know how to enjoy their life usually do, she is one of them" Mayank answered standing beside them n placing some order for drinks but his main purpose was to answer this nerd whom he loathed n somewhere now hating n want him to get away from anywhere near her.

"Is it so Nupur??" asked a confused Raj who wasn't getting anything apart from the hint that Mayank doesn't like him near this beautiful lady whom he had layed his eyes from very long n was looking for a chance to start a convo.

"Of course not! U ignore him, lets have a drink" Nupur snorted with a fake smile on her n face n shooting Mayank a glare.

"Ya soft drink." Taking his ordered glasses, Mayank snapped moving towards their friends where they were hanging out.

"Well here is ur soft drink" Raj said placing glasses infront of her.

"No will have tequila shots tonight." Moving the glass away she said lazily.

"U sure!" narrowing his eyes he said.

"Of course! 5shots plz" ignoring his quite a shock look she ordered.

"Nupur its too much" he said as he is sure Mayank was right she doesn't drink.

"No problem u are there to hold me right?" gulping one drink she said with utter sweetness n a gorgeous smile which is enough to make anyone forget anything.

"Of course." Returning her a smile he too engrossed in his drink.

"Let's dance" gulping all her drink one by one Nupur said dragging Raj by his coller into the dance floor where high music was playing and everyone was dancing like maniac.

Yaaron mujh muaf karo, Main nashe me hoon
Badi haseen hai zulfon ki shyaam pee lije, Hamaare haath se do-chaar jaam pee lije
Pilaaye jab koi mashooq apne haathon se, Sharaab phir nahi rehti haraam pee lije

Entering into the dance floor Nupur started dancing with Raj n placed his hands on her waist n making him come closer to himself she looked at Mayank who was standing facing her near his table with stiffness showing great anger on his face.

Sippin sippin sippin sippin Sippin yaaro lal pari,

Aaj to jee lo aaj to jee lo Kal ki hai kisko padi...
Kismat meri jagado, Music thoda badha do
Ik patiyala aur pilado, Is party mein aag lagado

Ignoring his warning which she can clearly read it from his face she took another drink n gulping she danced trying to forget everything n everyone around her.


Yes-yes i want it more, Aaj na chalega zor
Khulegi daaru machega shor, Aajao saare on the floor
Bas isi baat pe botal kholo, Kiye jo saare paap woh dholo
Aao mere saath me holo, Put your hand's up zor se bolo


Mayank staring Nupur with great anger oozing from his eyes which can burn anyone right now n at this moment it can only be that jerk Raj who was now trying to get more closer to Nupur who is almost had lost her senses.


Seena jalta hai, Peena padta hai
Dard ghat.Ta hai, Jaam chadhta hai
Meri aankhon me mehboob mera
Sharaab likhta hai, sharaab padhta hai
Tabhi toh, Main sharabi,Main sharabi.


Feeling the grip around her waist turning more tight she raise her eyes towards Raj who was coming more closer but instead of trying to get out of her hold she totally ignored it.

Sharaab peena agar basahoor hota hai
Sharaab peena bada bekasoor hota hai
Sharaab peene ka ye fayda niraala hai
Aam sa chehra bhi jannat ki hoor hota hai


Seeing her ignoring n letting that jerk to do whatever he wanted was enough to make Mayank come towards them who was coming holding his anger in his grip tightly.

So lemme get you boots on fire, U wanna set this floor on fire
I am noticire, Come on baby let's go higher
Kudi kanwaari ho gayi jhalli, Nachi jaandi kalli kalli
Aao mere saath me holo, Put your hand's up zor se bolo

Giving a tight punch to the jerk Raj who had now falled on the floor, Mayank dragged Nupur out of the disco..while the music was still playing...


Main sharabi, main sharabi
Main sharabi, main sharabi
Main sharabi, main sharabi

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"Arhh..who the hell is this?!? leave me!..choro mujhe Mayank!"she said still humming, Main sharabi main sharabiii kitna maja a raha tha andar leave me na." she complained more like a baby making her hands come out of his grip.

"Just shut up n get in the car." Opening the car door he pushed her into the passanger seat n now was driving his car back home still fuming in anger.

"Arey tum itna gusse mein kyun ho? Hmm? What did I did now..let me go na plzzz" she said not being in her senses n not getting the reason of his anger added more, "Kya hua? I was enjoying it right! where we are going?? I don't wanna go anywhere I wanna party more stop the car..stop na M-a-y-a-n-k!!!"

"Just shut up alright!" he warned giving her another glare.

"No I won't! Stop the car or else I will jump. Stop.. Stop! S-t-o-p!!!!!!" she replied being more stubborn now trying to unlock the car door.

"What the hell u r doing Nupur wait kaha ja rahi ho tum? I said stop! What's wrong with u han! What are u actually doing?" he stopped the car hurriedly as Nupur had already opened the door n now was walking towards the sea in shaky steps.

"What! Ab kya kiya maine ke tum itna gussa kar rahe ho? I was just enjoying na! then?" she said now turning her back towards the sea n quietly moving backwards.

"Enjoy! Huh! U don't even know what u were doing. Now stop creating any scene n chalo yeha se." coming running towards her Mayank gripped her hands.

"Kyun? Main enjoy nhi kar sakti kya? Ohh han as I m an arrogant girl who need no one n doesn't even know how to behave or talk with ppl, who doesn't know how to enjoy life have no right to do it right?" she snorted pulling her hands out of his grip.

"Nupur!" not getting what she said Mayank stopped on his track n turned towards her.

"What! This is what u think right? This is what everyone think n this is truth! Of course this is the Truth! Sab yehi toh kehte hain.. sab! Huh! Meri mom bhi yehi kehti hain.. Par Mujhe koi farak hi nhi parta..it never matterd! phir jab tum bolte hoon toh kyun farak parta hain?" She said looking straight into his eyes. "Jab tum bhi wahi sochte ho jo dusre sochte hain mere bare mein toh mujhe bura kyun lagta hain? U are also one of Everyone then why it hurts?? Why damn it! she said gripping his coller in her hands with eyes dwelled up in tears like clouds.

"Nupur.." holding her hands in a soft hold he looked into her complaining eyes who were now showering tears.

"Main toh asi hi hoon hamesha se asi hi..It never mattered to me what ppl said or think about me but wahi sab jab tum kehte ho toh itna bura kyun lagta hain??? Why I wish that u never thought about me like everyone else. Why!!??" leaving him she said now sitting on the sands with lowered eyes still tears coming out of her dove shaped beautiful eyes.

"U know Mayank my mom dad had love marriage. My dad used to love mom very much..n they were happy then when I born they became more happy but after that love vanished!! Uh-hh! not vanished it started showering upon other women.. u know, mere mom ko dhoka dene lagey n most interesting thing she knew about it all. Then one day he left! Betraying my mom leaving both of us to live on our own..After that mom became busy to come out of her grief n making her life back on track so that we can live, I can get everything n we don't need to rely on anyone else. But that grief never went away from her heart n me being the child of that Disgusting Man was always there in her heart. It was never like she didn't care for me or loved me. She was just fed up! I used to live all alone away from anyone not because I loved to be alone but because no one needs me...no one loves me!! It didn't matter to anyone whether I live or die. Its just no one really bothers! Like no one ever did!u know why I don't live with my mom n don't want to even as me n mom always fightno matter what! Pata hain woh kya kehti ke main unn jaisi, apne dad jaisi hoon jisko kisi ki parwa nhi. A girl who is very arrogant who doesn't care about anyone n doeast even know how to get mixed with ppl n one day who will have to pay for it..kyun! mujhe uss admi ki beti hone ka saza kyun miley galti usne ki hain maine thori ki, ke main uski saza bhuktu...ismein meri kya galti??" She looked at Mayank who had now tears in his eyes n was puzzled on what to answer her n how can all these she can bear that too on her own not letting anyone see it..

"Kyun main ase akeli rahu? Kyun???!!! I don't want to live like this! I don't want this life. I feel suffocated in it! main saas nhi le pati it feels like there is a void in my heart and it hurts! It hurts a lot!" looking with her piercing eyes which were pouring tear drops endlessly Nupur hugged him. "Mujhe ase nhi rehna Mayank main ase nhi rehna chahti..i don't want to die every single moment! Mayank! Mera dam ghut raha hain.. I m dying...every moment with every breathe..mujhe yeha se bachalo.. mujhe yeha nhi rehna Mayank plzz mujhe yeha se bachalo.. bachalo mujhe.." getting someone to hold her after ages she tightened her hold around him almost feeling her own heartbeats against his heart she sobbed more n more

"Nupur.. Nupur!" after some time what felt eternity for him to see her sobbing like this he pulled her away from him n cupped her face n saw her giggling with puffy eyes still pouring some more tears.

"Hehehe...ha ha ha..mujhe char gayi hain na? hehe mujhe char gayi hain." Laughing like maniac she said not at all in her senses.

"Nupur come on get up." Making her stand on her feet they reached their car n then on their way with Nupur drifted into deep slumber her face showing an unexplainable peace after letting go all that she was holding in her heart from sooo long n Mayank who was now determind to give her everything that she wished n deserve from life n with an additional promise to love her till eternity Yes! What he felt for her is nothing But LOVE!!!! N now he knew about it...


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Ermm...i know many would have been bored till now n started cursing me... bt blv me i tried to make it short bt wasn't being able n also now sure what i wrote n what it turned so plzzz Bear it with Patience!! 😔 n plzzz do press the LIKE Tab!!!😳

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❤️Anila(ANI😳)
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was superb update sweety*hugs*
really beautifully portrayed Nupur's emotions and well written
loved it
please continue soon
love y loadsss*hugs*
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update, bt very painful. Feel bad for nupur, she is suffring from childhood...poor she, no one loved her; it nice tht finally mayank realized his love for her. Continue soon, thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update sweetie pie...
it was sooo daammm good
nupur ke emotions tmne kitni achhe tarike se portray kiye hain..
n yes mayank loves her
mujhe laga hi tha...
loved it
awesome...
n next update jaldi plsss
eagerly waiting 4 it
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very nice part anu...
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Posted: 13 years ago
It is nice update.
Bt wil give detail comment after reading it again.
Tb tk k liye res😉

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