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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

cant wait to read more

good excerpt

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@Tabsfully

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

just got the PM for this one...loving the idea...

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Yay! Another story! Bring it on! I can take whatever you dish out at me sad, happy, murderous...! 😃

Great excerpt Lol

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blackdice1001

@blackdice1001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Wow this is different. How do you come up with all of these new concepts? I loved the excerpt and the chapter. Wondering how the twelve year old became the seductress...knowing your writing i know this is going to be an awesome ff 😊

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arisai

@arisai

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sonia_92
I am trying to get a hang oof the story but ylike yypi said, its not as easy tto comprehend! I liked the first chapter, the rescue, the new life, the survival, I get it all, the fact that she stays in the shantivan orphanage till the age of ten but how exactly does she end up where she does aafter that? does the orphanage have anything to do with selling the girls? if you elaborate on that I'll be glad

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Sonia

Sorry if it wasn't clear in the chapter- one of the workers in the orphanage was selling girls to this underground human trafficking ring so the orphanage itself wasn't bad- but just had a bad person working there for them. It's a shame how one bad person can devalue an entire organisation...

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@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: arisai

I'M SORRY FORGIVE ME FIRST RES ON CHAPTER TWO? IT'S REALLY REALLY LATE IN KOREA RIGHT NOW.

YES FIRST RES CHAPTER 2 BUT AT MOMENT STUCK WEARING A SAREE

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arhifrvr

@arhifrvr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

hmmm... She's gone through quite a lot...

Nevertheless... Beautiful chapter... :D

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

From dirty corruption in politics to the pristine dark underworld and now women trafficking and if I may add bondage?

You are definitely venturing bolder grounds. I'm curious.

Oh,I said bondage because Khushi was asked to obey and never refuse or question. I took a guess from here. Is there going to be traces of Stockholm syndrome here?