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Hey di... i m new on IF and 1 frist story i read was FOD n now i m in love with the story could not stop my self to comment on your last part .I read the whole story in one go n it's not that we don't trust u di but story n charecter the way u have wrote the story it has really become very very close to my heart specially Geet's charecter her innocence n it was just that after reading the last part what immediatly came to me was that geet went numb when maan the love of her life was being intimate her and i could actually imaagine her in that state u know the scene with prem n the whole thing so that was a immediate thing which came to me the that idiot is not suppose to get geet scared n i know it's just a fiction but u know somewhere I reacted emotionally that was the frist thing that came to my mind i just wrote it... sorry to hurt you if did it was just not intentional n last but not the least i m eagerly wating for the update please update soon... đ
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