Fading Autumn - UpD PG.30 Pt. 9 Epilogue - Page 12

aww that was nice. was the call from Bani?

it waz reallie discriptive..buh where does Bani come in??..anywayz..i reallie liked it...plz continue soon 👏 👏

sangitaji tusi great likhti ho ji ......... very good reading material and even better writing ......... after all it is about Jai Uncle and Bani Ben ......... how can u even think it could be boring 😊

Originally posted by: sabsj

sangitaji tusi great likhti ho ji ......... very good reading material and even better writing ......... after all it is about Jai Uncle and Bani Ben ......... how can u even think it could be boring 😊

Hey Sabsj, so we are back with Jai Uncle and Bani Ben 😆😆😆

What happened to Jai as Krishh and Bani as Storm? 😉

loved that short tour to munnar, sangita! thanks! and no it wasnt boring at all. looking fwd to reading the next part

sowmya

is Dora gonna get 'em together!! Btw Munnar sounds lovely...shd plan a vacation there....

I love the way you have researched abt the place.... 👏

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Hey Sabsj, so we are back with Jai Uncle and Bani Ben 😆😆😆

What happened to Jai as Krishh and Bani as Storm? 😉

arre the krishh ka costume is still not fitting jai, bahut skin tight hain, so we are back to ben and uncle till uncle looses some more of his baby fat. pia is driving jadoo nuts, he has sent a lot of sos to jai uncle, so uncle nowadays is on an apple diet ,,,,,,,,,,,,, ab jaldi hi jai banega krishh and then he will ask bani ben "kaho na pyaar hai"

Hi Sangs,

Back to land where Zee is available. It would be a nice twist n your fanfic if Bani/Pa Dixit is the one who causes the accident to the old man's son and dil. Maybe she would be a bit more forgiving then.

Rgds

Priyanka

You make me want to visit this Place.... its so beautifully described.... 👏
n what on earth makes u think that this could be boring... i loved it... 😳
great job.... 👏

Originally posted by: majumdar

Hi Sangs,

Back to land where Zee is available. It would be a nice twist n your fanfic if Bani/Pa Dixit is the one who causes the accident to the old man's son and dil. Maybe she would be a bit more forgiving then.

Rgds

Priyanka

Thats one helluva idea!!!👏