Tasawwur - A Unique MaYur Saga -Completed 10/12 - Page 31

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Reserved!
Edited.

And he gives in and goes to talk to her.
Gosh, I love Nupur.. 😆 What would this FF be without her..
Now she's flirting.. how adorable. I guess if they were ever to be in such a situation she would go on her knees and propose.. Mayank ki bass k baat nahin hain.. :)

Okay nice transition..from a light hearted start, to a bit more deep other half.
Kaafi gehri baat ki hain.. I gueess Nupur is much more than what you see on the surface.. she seems like a happy-go-lucky kind of girl.. but she has her depth side..

And then back to being lighthearted..
lol potential candidates.. lagta hain Nupur ka standard bohat uncha hain.. 😆
Murree shaadi k baad settle hojaye yah phir honeymoon... ;) It would be a very romantic place to stay.
Laptop-light dinner? 😆
I love Nupur's one-liners..
Nupur and possesive.. now that was a surprise..

The songs were nice.. I heard half of them though...
Time After Time - was okayish.. The lyrics were really nice, didn't like her voice much.. But nice.
A Thousand Miles - I loved it.. Its beautiful, loved the lyrics.. and she has a beautiful voice.
Memories - Soothing song..
U Me aur Hum - Heard it before.. beautiful one.
Pehli baar Muhabbat ki hain - Its really nice.. Brings back MN memories <3
MZZB - No words.

The last one might sad sad and inapropriate for the occasion... but he said it all
M: kisiki mayoosi kisiki zindagi..:)
I also feel SeZ title song is very nice...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3coqN35ONIs

Beautiful chapter.. Humorous start, emotional middle, and a beautiful ending. 😳 it truly had everything.. I laughed, thought, and smiled in the end.
And you weren't wrong.. it was truly BEAUTIFUL! :)

Amazinggg chapter, I truly enjoyed reading a chapter after a long time. 😊
And a perfect ending to the 2nd quarter.

.(not so)SilentPrincess ;)

Originally posted by: Maria.

Reserved ...:)

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janab jab ap ki tehreer ki baat ati hai toh hamain apne alfaz ka khazana bohat kam lagne lagta hai isi liye bohat bar woh keh nahi pate jo kehna chahte hain:)

ek writer ki zubaan se aisi baatein shobha nahi deti 😊 agar aap jaise shaks ko bhi lafzon ki kami honay lage to hum jaiso ka kya hoga...

Chap 19.

pyaar main takrar aur rodhna mana toh amain bohat acha lagta hai,Mayank aur Nupur bhi isi rah pe chal nikle hain,Pata nahi kab apni feeling ko samjhain ge?

Mayank Nupur se baat kiye bina reh nahi sakta,us ke khayal main khoya rehta hai,us ke liye possesive hai,us ki care kerta hai phir bhi kehta hai ke aisi koi baat nahi..Samrat ki baaton pe kan dhare ga toh apne dil ki baat samajhne main asani ho gi..

pata nahi woh feelings accept kerne se kyun ghabrata hai?kya hai us ke mazi main jo use zindagi main agay bardhne nahi deta?

umeed hai sab sawalon ke jawab mil jayen ge...

bande ka shaksiyet hi kuch aisi hai. Mind you he is very practical and is already very much assured within himself that its not 'love'. Therefore, any other explanation that comes his way will not be welcome by him as it counter argues against his own beliefs.

Chapter 20..

Akhir kar Mayank ne apni har maan li,wah Hamari Nupur ki toh baat hi kuch aur hai,toh Nupur ka jadoo janab pe chal raha hai magar accept nahi ker rahe.

V-day ko friendship day bana dala chalo in ke relationship main kuch toh taraki hue.

ap k agli tehreer ka intezaar rahe ga...jadi update kijiye ga😳

Nupur is his lone friend...someone who makes him feel alive and influences his thoughts irrespective of who he is and the kind of personality he possesses. And there is no doubt within himself that he loves and cares for her and she is one of the most precious possessions he holds but he is not willing to think of it any further. tarakkee!!! lol...well Mayank is quite strategic and diplomatic is his thoughts. He didn't wanna throw his towels in by admitting that V-Day exists but because it means so much for Nupur, he didn't wanna just ignore it and hurt her feelings. So by declaring it as Friendship day, he gets both the worlds 😊

Originally posted by: -Anila-

MashALLAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i think this would be the best to describe this update...

YA ALLAH!!!!!!!!! ab kya bataye DI ke humey yeh update kitnaaa accha laga...Sigh!

i sooo damn loved it...

loved it to d coreee...

Thank you 😳 I am really glad that you also felt that way. I will let you in on a secret...I kinda never like my own writings. Whenever I write, I try my best not to read it again unless I am proof reading, that too a while after me writing the chapter and pretty much each time I feel that it could have been written better. But this time I felt good 😊

Dil toh kar raha tha ke ussi waqt comment kardu bt then sare song acche se sunna baki tha so sare download karwa liye jo the woh bhi...😆

i loved dos song yaar...hayeee

apne kaha tha confession not sure...

par humey toh laga ke yeha baton hi baton aur gaano hi gaano mein Izhaar-e-Mohabbat ho gaya...😍😍😍 nhi!😉

humey toh laga asa...😳😍😳

wow!!!!!!!!!!wow!!!!!!wow!!!!!! aur kya kahein...

aap log ek confession k liye itna beqarar ho rahe ho k kuch bhi koi kar le woh confession me hi khatam hota hai. abhi tak aisa kuch nahi hua hai madam! woh dono abhi tak dost hi hai..per dosti shayed ab apna hudh ko chooN raha hai..ab kuch na kuch to hona hi hai

so Mayank ji ne wahi kiya jiska humey puri umeed thi hain na..😉

akhir unke Nupur ko manofy kar hi liya...wah wah!

thats why i love him sooo much...

ladke jyada tar ase nhi hotey ke khud se initiate karein i mean yeh janab bhi bass ladai solve karne mein hi initiate karte hain warna aur baton ke liye toh hamari ek hi Umeed hain woh hain Nupur...😳

lol...by the way ladai bhi Mayank hi karta hai so I think the onus is on him to rectify his errors. Actually he is not used to having someone around who questions his lifestyle and his actions. Suddenly when Nupur kinda challenges his beliefs and habits he gets on the edge thinking she is barging in on his life. But after the initial reaction wears off, he realises that she wasn't wrong. Then again, because its Nupur and he is getting used to by having her around, he tends to seek for excuses to forgive her actions. Did it make sense 😕?

hayeee...Nupur ne toh fliting karte karte apne dil ki sari batein keh dali n i know Mr.Sharma ko sab acche se samjh aya n unhone isko majak majak mein avoid bhi kar diya...

hayeee... Arrange marriage nhi humey puri umeed hain Love marriage ki agar shadi huyi yoh...Sigh! InshALLAH...😳

OMG!!!!!!!!!! srsly!!!!!! Mayank ji toh bade Romantic nikle...hayeee😍😍😍

loved him sooo much...awww

oye..brake lagah! shaadi tak baat chali gayi!! itni jaldi kya hai bhai. aise umeedein lagake rakkhogi to baad me humain hi sunna parega. Nice n easy sweetheart...kahani ko aage to barhne do..and haan kharoos waqay me romantic nikla 😲 it was difficult to make someone like him transition into doing these things..but when I read the part I thought the same as well..saruu to kuch aur hi nikla 😆

n Love Nupur alwaysss for her Straight-forwardness n gr8 remarks lolzzz 🤣

hayeee...Twilight!!!!!! meri FAV movie kyun nhi dekhna diya apne unko...😔 chalo koi nhi issi bahane unhone songs toh suney...aur song ke bahane ek dusre ke samne apne Dil ka haal bhi rakh diya...hayeee 😍

i sooo want Mayank to accept Her Love plzzz

plzzz DI kya iss kahani ka anzaam woh nhi ho sakta jo hum dil se chahte hain inn dono ke liye...😔 plzzz

main plzzz nhi chahti ke iss kahani ka anzaam bhi Kuch Ankahee Jazbaat ki tarha hoon...😔

sigh! you have actually put this in my mind now. Whenever I think of the ending, I say to myself..make sure its not like KAJ. I'll see what I can do. and true, Nupur's remarks as Laiba said, what would this FF be without her? Ans is: boring to the end of life 😆

n now about those songs...SIGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ab kya kahein...i agree with Laiba SIS...😳

Time After Time -The lyrics were really nice but don't like the way she sang it but loved the lyrics say alot...
A Thousand Miles - I always loved this song... Its beautiful...lyrics are awesome.
Memories - Again awesome song n lyrics..
U Me aur Hum - Heard it only after u mentioning it..😳.. beautiful one so deep lyrics...spcly! Ek duje par apna Haq toh ho par Kabza na hoon...Sigh! speechless!
Pehli baar Muhabbat ki hain - Its one of my fav song...Only can imagine the REAL MN n nothing else! sry can't help 😍

Meri Zaat Zara e Benishan - Sigh!!!!!! m speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! after hearing this song i felt sooo bad for Mayank!!!!!Sigh! srsly!!!!

Glad you liked them 😊 I don't think everyone heard them either except you and Laiba. So..thanks for listening and dbl thanks for actually sharing your views on them.

N: kabhi kabhi Allah aisi khushiyan me naseeb kar dete hai khaas ker tab jab unki umeed nahi hoti
M: umeed ka daaman kabhi na chhoriyega. zindagi hai..na jaane kab dhokha de jaaye...SIGH!!!! DAmn True!!

Hats off to u DI...⭐️

Beautifully written...

loved it sooo much...

love u lodsss DI...🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Escapist

Seriously comment karne ka mann nai horaha..why ?? Coz itna beautiful chapter hai words hi kaam padenge express karne ko :]

And pata hai isse kuch yaad aaya..ofcrse it not Friendship day or V-day its a B-day..kya aapko bhi kcuh yaad aaya ?? uffo mei bhi na aapko kaise yaad ayega aap woh insaan ho hi nai..wo toh koi aur hai...gosh m gettn too personal with my comments n remembering my frnd... lost it completely... :-]

Aur bus aur kuch nai kahungi.. you surely know my comment now don't you..confused bandi and one thing I can tell you..m smiling after reading this chapter and even while commenting !!

Be back soon...

Cheers,

F

Originally posted by: Ashi-ArTi

That was Superb update

loved the way Mayank arranged VD Party for her,it shows he cares for her or maybe Love..

loed it

continue soon

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

khabi khabi khuda waqi asi khushiyan dayta hai jin ki umeed bhi nhi hoti aur sach hai un ko pakr k rekhna chaiy..zindagi hai na jany kab dhoka day jay

beautiful 😊..
n sorry hum janty hian humary comments short hoty jarahy hain