FF: Tantalising Touch {Part 20 Pg 84} 23/07 - Page 28

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia_92

fantastic update! I've been waiting for this chapter for so long! I'm definitely very upset about arnav's accident but if that gets khushi to stop her marriage with leecher Arjun then so be it!
oh i could kill arjun, hoe dare that kam**a talk rubbish about my arnav, how dare he lie about arnav's intentions!
thank goodness khushi ran away ffrom the Mandap!
wonderful update


Aw, thank you! Sorry for the long wait! 😳
I promise the next part will be up soon, thanks for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: indeedisa

Just found this story.
Love it sooo much. The way you have portrayed Khushi's conflict with Arnav's love is just so amazingly realistic. I just hate the fact that Arjun lied to her. Although, it's obvious that she cares way more about Arnav, (running out of her own wedding should be a good enough clue!). Arjun better get in trouble when everyone finds out.
I was thinking a nice slap!
Please update soon
Celiza xox


Aw, thank you so much!
Haha you'll see what happens very soon 😆

Originally posted by: VampireAleena

wow i just reall all 14 parts amazin loved it all the emotions you should be a writer first your vms and now your stories owowowowowow love them all


You're so sweet, thank you! I doubt I'm good enough to be a writer but thank you!

Originally posted by: Nici0306

wow... arjun manipulated khushi.. i know he doesn't know that khushi loves arnav and he is only thinking for khushi's good.. but then it was a worst he did.. by manipulating the truth...

arnav met with an accident.. i really feel.. that she should have understood what arnav felt without the sympathy for his accident..

loved the update.. it was intense.


He's willing to break all moral boundaries to secure Khushi. His intentions are good, but the way he's going about everything is flawed yet he cannot see that. Khushi did understand what Arnav felt, if not by anything else then by the letter. Yet she thought that for her own good it was better for her to marry Arjun. Running to the hospital is a knee-jerk reaction for her. She loves Arnav so much, and the mask slipped - it was an impulse to rush to his side when she discovered he was in pain. Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: maazia

Aww. That was sooo wonderful. I'm getting angry with Arjun, but i think he's doing it with Khushi's best interest and happiness in his heart; according to him. Little does he know that Khushi will never be happy with anyone besides Arnav... 😉


Thank you. Yeah, Arjun feels as if everything he's doing is what's best for Khushi. He doesn't have bad intentions, he just wants Khushi's happiness.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg this is SO SOO good Ghausia! 😭
Arnavji had an accident? Please tell me he'll be fine!
And FINALLY Payal knows about everything Khushi has done for her. Go Khushi!! Shut her mouth!

Girl your VMs are always amazing, but damn your writing is unique.
And this story of yours is may I call it EPIC.
Please write the next part fast. I'm DYING to know what will happen next!

PS: you're the only writer on IF who's work I'm reading regularly. Thought that would be the biggest compliments of them all, considering the amount of writers on IF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Anji is ungrateful bitch.. doesn't she still understand who is what.. and why is arnav in this condition in the first place.. he did not fight with khushi and drive.. he fought with her and drove..

anyway.. so well written.. the pain and anguish of Khushi beautifully described..
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think every single reader wants to give the whole lot of them a big hearty slap. 😡

So glad that his first word was her name.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahhh!!!!!!!!!!! I wish I could scream at the Raizada's!!! They don't know what Khushi has done!! And when they do they'll ask for forgiveness and I really hope Khushi doesn't forgive them!! Ahhh I hate them right now!!!! Thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: diva.deluxe

Omg this is SO SOO good Ghausia! 😭
Arnavji had an accident? Please tell me he'll be fine!
And FINALLY Payal knows about everything Khushi has done for her. Go Khushi!! Shut her mouth!

Girl your VMs are always amazing, but damn your writing is unique.
And this story of yours is may I call it EPIC.
Please write the next part fast. I'm DYING to know what will happen next!

PS: you're the only writer on IF who's work I'm reading regularly. Thought that would be the biggest compliments of them all, considering the amount of writers on IF.



Thank you so much! Yep, and I hope people realise that there are a couple of possibilities as to who it was...
That would ruin the story for you, wouldn't it? 😆
You'd need to define 'fine' before I can answer your question!
I was just so sick of Payal blaming everything on Khushi all the time. The Payal-Khushi face-off wasn't about to happen but I decided that it'd go well with the situation. I wanted to show Khushi's angry side!

Oh my gosh, that's the best comment I've ever received on this story! Thank you so much! 😳
I've done an awful job of updating so far but I'll try to update more! & I hope you enjoy what's to come in the story 😉
Thank you for the lovely comment hun!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nici0306

Anji is ungrateful bitch.. doesn't she still understand who is what.. and why is arnav in this condition in the first place.. he did not fight with khushi and drive.. he fought with her and drove..

anyway.. so well written.. the pain and anguish of Khushi beautifully described..


For Anjali, to extinguish her own guilt it's very easy for her finger to point and Khushi and to pin the blame on her. Plus, we mustn't forget that she's just thrown her husband out and now her brother's had an accident. Poor girl's in pieces. Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neverbefore

I think every single reader wants to give the whole lot of them a big hearty slap. 😡


So glad that his first word was her name.


By all means, go ahead 😉
What can I say? The man's madly in love toh pehla soch woh larki ke baare main hogi na?
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Posted: 13 years ago

I'll try! I'll make a conscious effort to get the next part out to you guys sooner. 😊

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