NEW FF: LEGAL SINS - Pcp Pt 5 - Page 131

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HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

OMG CNT WAIT :O LOL this is awesome

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abhi_arshilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Very interesting prologue. Loved it. Is it means that they r marrying without seeing each other? Just like in old jamana's! Wow! I'm so excited! And i'm really so sorry for not reading ur previous pm's. I was so busy in my personal life that i hadn't got enough time to spend online. But thank u so much for pming me all the time. And please pm me this story also. Once again thanks a lot for all the pm's. Please do cont soon.

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy
great start. loved the prologue. continue soon.
Madhu this is a little off the coast what you generally write. I like you wrenched knot and entangled love along with ugly truth.

I am sure i am going to love this too.

wow,one great writer copmlementing another great writer...

my both favorite writers on IF are here... I SO LOVE THIS...

😃😃😃

Love u both:

Appy_Indy And Madhu123...😳

both are great for me...😃

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.Melody.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Wow. . .nice prolouge. . .i liked d connection of khushi n asr through priti n aman. . .i mean it wil b more intrstin n also khushi wil b havn her bst frnd wit her 2 share her joys n sorrow. . .lukin fwd for d 6mnt marriage. .u knw wt u surprisd me wit d pm on SATURDAY..i am sooo HAPPY. . Tnx fr d pm!

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LuckYMAma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Intrstng prolg...plz do pm me 4 ur nxt updt...nd thanx 4 pm...

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

WOW!!! You are AMAZING!!! Again a new story with a very new concept. Khusi will be ASR's wife for 6 months. They will marry each other for 6 months. The legal marriage will be for 6 months. So,I wish may this FF "LEGAL SINS" would run for 6 months or more. All the best. Love you,Take care -SHUCHI

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kajal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

amazing superb loved it grt story

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

omg...this sounds so interesting...

bt however interesting it sounds bt this one can nt take my baby's place...:(

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tachyon

@tachyon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

hey!!!!! nice start

continue soon and thanx for the PM

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Nice prolouge. 👏 Liked the new character Preeti. And Khusi is sacrificing her life for her father's sake. Poor Khusi. May Arnav love her very much in the near future. May she be happy with Arnav forever. Waiting eagerly for the precap. Do continue soon. Thanks a lot for the PM. Love you,Take care. -SHUCHI