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Posted: 13 years ago
Just read this for the first time today and am very impressed. Tight story, well written, gripping

Please accept my buddy request.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. Chachaji seems like a gentleman. Anjali is definitely not a lady in your story. Is she at least a nice person?
Also since Arnav is in Cape Town, it would be interesting to see how you plan on making them meet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey ... have just started reading The Pursuit of Love ... just read chapter one ... am loving it ... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

So this is the house that Kalyaani built.

Just talking aloud to move forward a bit more clearly, that's all.

Ajit Raizada is married to sukanya who is a Reddy and Akash speaks Telugu and so does Khushi. How does Khushi know Telugu. Isn't she from Bangalore? Is there a Garima/Telugu connection that I missed somewhere.

So actually Khushi is not related to the Raizadas because she is related only to the husband of Ajit's sister or Ajit's friend who could also be Shashi/Garima's friend in their younger days.

Anjali Jha's facade has dropped a second time, this time picked up by Khushi.
Now it has all got to come together when the whole thing unravels bit by bit.

Nice. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
anji is scandalous man.. to do that in the traffic signal.. hehehehee..

beautiful written.. enjoyed the update.. i like ajit..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. That hug in the last part touched me. I cant believe Anjali's infidelity. After seeing the anjali in IPKKND, this is an extreme opposite of what we see on week days 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
So anjali's secret is coming in front of the guptas...wonder what twist that wud bring!!!
I know i know u have it all planned but can i be greedy and ask for glimpse of our dear dear ASR😉 just missing him
But loving khusi's strong stance to face everything

Keep writing

P.S. off to Raizada and Sons!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just finshed all the chapters ... captivating storyline ...
love the pace of the story ... unfolding slowly and steadily ...
So Khushi finally gets to meet her biological father ...
Anjali seems to be quite a s**t ... first Imran and now someone else in the car ... 😲
Love the father daughter relationship between Shashi and Khushi ...
but missing Arnav ... who seems rather busy with Lavanya ... 😆
waiting for more dear Kalyani ... you write really well ... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
when arshi meet to each other?
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved your story. Please PM for future updates?

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