NBT serial story - pt 7 updtd .pg 22 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great updates Sita...👏
Love the way you are taking this track forward...
Can only Sigh and Wish...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sitamma1

it is not love ..neelu..it is infatuation..towards a person who was ready to get married to her to save her father's life..and admiration..of his nice qualities.

Ah Sita! I understand now. You mean like hero worship right?

Mohan became a hero for Raddi and a Zero for Megha in one night Channel/CV please rot wherever the hell you are!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NeelimaSJ

Ah Sita! I understand now. You mean like hero worship right?

Mohan became a hero for Raddi and a Zero for Megha in one night Channel/CV please rot wherever the hell you are!
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but with this track...mohan wont...no,i wont tell you yet..and break the suspense...

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Posted: 13 years ago
I am speechless.👍🏼 Totally lost in the story. So much involved in this story... I can't do anything, but wait for the next part...😍 Sorry, I am being little restless for the next part...😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Sita, Nicely wriiten..frankly speaking i cant bear ridhima for a long time.. hi..hi. May be because am so desperate to get rid of her. anyways am looking forward to the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kunchii

Hi Sita, Nicely wriiten..frankly speaking i cant bear ridhima for a long time.. hi..hi. May be because am so desperate to get rid of her. anyways am looking forward to the next.


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frankly speaking I am loving riddima being here now..because I see so many possiblites to develop that character alone...to add spice and suspense to the show..but without compromising the other characters...with others ..we expect certain things and we dont expect certain things..But with ridddima suffering from MDP...no such expectations is possible...and it is not right that we keep expectations also..There are so many MDP's roaming around among us...that is why we find it so difficult to understand many things many people do in different situations...
And we dont like riddi..so we want to get rid of her..but are things as easy as that always? are we able to get rid of things or issues just bec we hate them..no!!!!! well, I am glad with riddi here for me to play with...
Edited by sitamma1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Sita, this was a nice updated part 6, Riddhima made much sense where you have shown her empathizing with and understanding Mohan's love for Megha.

But how has she developed Hero-worship for Mohan?? Because he married her for the sake of her dying father's wish? Is that why she developed Hero Worship for him?

I can't understand what kind of a love/worship Riddhima has for Mohan?

But overall, a very sensible conversation between Megha and Riddhima, at the temple.
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUPERB! NOTHING ELSE TO BE TOLD!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice! Wish my OS could have treated Ridz with some sensitivity, but I'm not convinced she's positive in the serial, hence the route I took. Love your story, and keep eagerly waiting for the next installment. Very well written.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jonaki

Very nice! Wish my OS could have treated Ridz with some sensitivity, but I'm not convinced she's positive in the serial, hence the route I took. Love your story, and keep eagerly waiting for the next installment. Very well written.

Jonaki...your OS is excellent..I loved it...It is just that i do not want to make her into a complete negative character...And this is a parallel story i am writing since they introduced the riddi track.I have used the characters of NBT at that time and am moving forward with it in my own way...I started off bec I wanted to cheer up everyone here..but then I am forced to continue because of the response i get and bec my PM in box is flooded with requests for the same...
From what they showed in that hospital scene where ridd was threatening her mother she will slash her wrists...I strongly felt she is suffering from maniac depressive psychosis..to know more about it pl browse the web...and I decided to use her from that angle rather than the typical negative angle..
.she will trouble us surely..trouble is just around the corner..she is in the hypomaniac state now..in such state...one will be too good..feel positive about everything and everyone,will be magnanimous and sacrificing to a fault...has lots of delusions about self ...but once they go into the depressive state..all this will change in a jiffy...I want to show typically how a person with manic depressive illness responds to situations during different states as well...frankly speaking I am loving riddima being here now..because I see so many possiblites to develop that character alone...to add spice and suspense to the show..but without compromising the other characters...With others we expect certain things and we dont expect certain things..But with ridddima suffering from MDP...no such expectations is possible...and it is not right that we keep expectations also..There are so many MDP's roaming around among us...that is why we find it so difficult to understand many things many people do in different situations...
And in any show there should be drama and suspense also...so here also i am using that..because mera SS ko bhi TRP chahiye.!!!!...and i want to add the correct element of drama,suspense,kushi,rhona,romance,comedy ..In the 1st 2 updates i have tried to show kushi,comedy,and romance..and later they will come back again...and I want to show how all these can be achieved logically without butchering the characters ..that is all.!!

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