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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: AquaNymph
just love this FF..
you have good writing skills..
the teaser is quite revolutionary..
creep will always be a creep..
feeling bad for khushi
and arnav.. well cant say he deserves it or that he is a poor guy..
i love your anjali..
on the whole great work..

Hey... Thank you! I'm glad you liked my FF! I'll be looking forward for your opinions on the upcoming chapters as well...

And I loooveeeddd reading this comment! 😊

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#562

im here as well... and my poor poor refresh button...

its suffering saiiieee... coz i just wont stop hitting it to see whether u have updated or not...

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: Chicane
Am sure you'll get those 100 likes/comments!!!
Don't hold the chapter ransom girl!!! Nice teaser BTW! Poor Khushi... N NK knows??? Want to know more!!! Update! Update! Update!!!!!!! 😛

New Zealand is an awesome place! Excellent choice for Arnav!

Ahh - I wish your words come true hon! Trust me, I don't want to hold up the chapters on ransom - didn't feel good at all when I had to do it...

I looveee NZ! Its a beautiful beautiful place!

I'm happie you liked the teaser! *Hugs*

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Shruti Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
im here as well... and my poor poor refresh button...
its suffering saiiieee... coz i just wont stop hitting it to see whether u have updated or not...

tarsa tarsa ke update karegi as if taking some kinda revenge...

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: smile1412
I just came across this ff and just finished reading all the chapters!!!

Am absolutely in awe of your writing skills!!!!! It's brilliant to say the least!!!

I could not put my iPad down even for a second!!!!!

Arnav's and khushi's plight moved me to tears!! Can't really accept Arnav in this state!!!

I seriously hope you hv planned something nice for both of them... They shd team up to bring down Shyam!!

It sure will be treat to read the forthcoming chapters,,, the atmosphere in the forum is also generally depressing due to the current track!!! Though I feel it's going to get more interesting!!! None of us who watch ipkknd can be deemed as faint hearted as we have survived all that has happened so far. Nevertheless , it still makes ones heart flutter with anticipation that all should be well for our lovable couple arhi!!!

Pls update soon!!! Really look forward to read more!!!

Awwwiiieee - thank you sooo much for the compliment dear! Means a looott...!!!!!

I know, people are bashing the track left, right and center! I don't know why... #confused! But ArHi just keeps me going in the show and for this FF as well. And readers' comments like yours makes it all the more worthwhile...

It leaves me emotional after writing this for Arnav and Khushi - blame it on this story that just popped into my mind one fine day! I hope I make things better for them soon! 😛

I'd be glad to know your opinions on the upcoming chapters as well...

Thank you once again!

*Dances - my FF got a new reeeaadderrr!!! *Whhheee!!!

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Shruti Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#566

ho gaya na... kar li pareshan...

now u see.. kar update aur uske baad mere se comment kara liyo...

😡

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: Shruti21
ho gaya na... kar li pareshan...

now u see.. kar update aur uske baad mere se comment kara liyo...
😡

Ruuukkk na maate... Mekko reply toh karne de sabko... Sab tere jaise mere re gussa ho gaye to ke maine reply nahi kia unke comments ko???

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#568

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#569

Hi...

First of all a hugeee thank you to everyone who have liked and commented on the previous chapter. Your response is what keeps me going while writing this... Thank you once again!

Also, I'm very sorry, but I'm continuing with the minimum 100 likes limit for the next chapter. This FF comes with the price tag of the time I have to compromise with my family, my studies, my project work and most importantly my sleep. I hardly get time to write anything these days. I don't think its unfair on my part to ask just a like or a line of comment and considering the views after every chapter, I don't understand the reason behind lesser response to every chapter. I would appreciate your criticisms as well, if you don't like any part of my story. If there is anything you don't like in my story, I'd be glad to be aware about it.

Trust me, I don't want myself to lose my will to keep writing this story due to lack of comments.

So, a minimum of 100 likes it is... I hate to put this here, but apparently I don't see myself being left with any other option. If this doesn't work as well, I might consider terminating my work. I write these stories for me, agreed, but the dropping response to the chapters in highly discouraging and disheartening. Negative thoughts have already started coming into my mind with regards to the termination of my FFs, and honestly, I don't want to act on them.

I hope that I don't have to do it for the next chapter again. But I fail to recognize the correlation between the number of views and the actual likes and comments.

Thank you. Will be waiting...

Love,

Pearl

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

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Posted: 13 years ago

#570

RESVD

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and im dead...!!!

that was the effect of the emotions in this update ON ME...

and being in my office doesnt help either... coz im dabbing almost painfully at my eyes to stop the tears...

how could u do this to me saie... to khushi... to arnav... to Anjali... to everyone...

u shud have better left the past unexplained... coz it wrecked an emotional havoc on me...

still struggling with my tears...im not gonna spare u for doing this to me... my colleagues are lokking at me as though im crazy...hmpf...

i accept... ur lavanya... wow... to say all those things about the man she loves... she indeed has a strong heart...she left him for his happiness... and now that happiness was just a mirage... i know how she wud be feeling...

and khushi... she wrenched my heart out at her pain...

she not even knowing her feelings for Arnav yet, and suffering...my god... B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

anjali is the best here... being there for everyone wen she's undergoing much more pain at the loss of both the men she loves dearly... HATS OFF to ur anjali...

and i'll never forgive u for making my Arnav so vulnerable... he had tears in his eyes...

now i cant stop mine...and to hell with my colleagues... i dont care if they think im insane for burying my head in my handkie...

his pain is unbearable to myself... the words u have used there...his alienation...

OMG...him thinking he wont see any of them again...

Kia Ora Aotearoa...

these words doesnt seem welcoming to me anymore after reading his feelings...

i feel like giving him a hug right now...and i need one tooo...

he heard her... he felt her call for him, in his heart...though she's miles away...

and khushi's helplessness... it overwhelmed me...n i dont have any more words...

SPEECHLESS...WORDLESS... for the first time after reading just one of the chapters of the story...

this has never happened to me before...i mean, i have never been left speechless wen i wanna praise ur words to the extreme...

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT MY MARGARITAAA...<< wondering y im calling u Margarita... thats the Latin meaning for pearl... and this is how im gonna call u from now...>>

~~~ sam xoxo

p.s.

im gonna kill u for making me emotional today marg...

but sadly i love u too much to do that...so ur safe for now... make my guy cry one more time... i swear u'll face the consequences...

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago