virman n virika FF .HHL. Note PG 60 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

superb update pm me when you update next thanks


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Originally posted by: jesmin.farjana

love it dear...interesting👍🏼
cont soon & thnx 4 d pm 🤗

PS:Sorry 4 d late reply 😒


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N ITS OK I CAN UNDERSTAND THAT U WOULD BE BUSY IN SOME WORK SO THATS WAY U REPLAY LATE 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb plzz pm me when you updatee the next part.
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Hey!! 😛Everyone..
H0w r u 0ll?? hOpe verY well 😊
And Thanksz 1nes agaIn 4 the c0mmentss__😃
ok now i am bck with next chaptEr
Happy Reading😊

Chapter-3

Viren - tina what happen tum mujse baat kyun nhai kar rahi he asked

Tina - oh i see ab tume yeh bi nahi pata ki mai tumse baat kyun nahi kar rahi

Viren - tina please saaf saaf kaho

Tina - ok th muje yeh batao ke tume kya zarorat thi woh fight karne ki

Viren - what do u mean tina ke maine woh fight kyun ki yaar woh log us bechari inncent larki ko tang karrahe the maine bass uski help ki thats it

Tina - ahaan bechari innocent larki viren please stop it

Viren - tina wht is wrong with u

Tina - viren nothing is wrong with me mai yeh janna chahti hn ki what is wrong with u

Viren - matlab

Tina - matlab yeh ke jese tum us larki se apni nazreen hataa kyun nahi paara rahe thee u just keep staring at her

Viren - what tina have u gone nuts aisa kuch bi nahi hai

Tina - oh reaaly acha toh yeh batao ke phir tumne usse kyun kaha ke tume usse uske ghar chor ge

Viren - woh isi liye kyu ke wh bhot dari hui thi

Tina - acha yeh bi maan lia par yeh batao ke jane se phele tumne uska naam kyun puchaa

Viren - god tina stop it please maine uska naam aise hi pucha is mein itana gussa hone ki kya baat hai

Tina - baat hai viren i am ur girlfriend aur muje acha nahi lagta jab tum kisi or ki taraf dekte ho

Viren - aree yaar mai kisi r ki taraf kyun dekh jaab meri girlfriend hi itani beautiful hai

Tina smiled and said

Tina - oh realy

Viren - realy he smiled back

Tina - i love you

Viren - i love you 2

Viren - acha tell me will u like to go party

Tina - ofcurse i will love

Viren - ok woh kya haina virat aur uske frds ne club mein party rakhi hai aur uno ne hame bi invite kiya hai

Tina - chalo chalte hai isi bahane saab se mil bi le gee

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it was evening now

manvi came back home and pantars came running to her and hugged her she also hugged them

Sameer - di ap kaha thi apko pata hai hum apke bina kitana bore ho rahe the

Manvi - aree sorry woh muje uch kam pargaya tha

Raju - koi baat nahi di hum ab khel lege

Manvi - woh tho ham khele ge gi par yeh batao ke ayush theek hainaa

Simran - haan di wh bilkul theek hai aur soo raha hai

Manvi - ok aur jeevika di

Aryan - woh kitchen mein hai khana bana rahi hai

Manvi - acha tum log room mein chalo mai di se milkar atii hon

Pantars together - theek hai di

manvi went to kitchen and saw her di and she said

Manvi - di she said loudly

Jeevika - aree manu tu a gayi kaha ti tu haah

Manvi - di woh bas aise hi baar gayi thi she said bcoz she cant tell the truth to her di that what happened bcz if she will tell she will be very angry at her

Jeevika - acha chal theek hai jaa tu khel apne pantars ke saath

Manvi - nahi di ap bi aao naa

Jeevika mai bi atti hoon thori deer mein

Manvi - ok di she was about to walk but she stopped di mai naa ayush ke liye dood le ja thi abi utne hi wala hogaa

Jeevika - haan manu le jaa wese jab tu chali gayi thi na woh ek baar utaa tha aur jab tu usse kahi nazar nahi ayi toh ronee laga tuje bht miss kar raha tha

Manvi - kyaa baat kar rahi ho di woh zada royaa th nahi naa uski tabiyaat toh theek hainaa

Jeevika - manu tu tension maat le woh theek hai par bhot mushkil se soya phir bass tu hi usse samal sakti haai

Manvi - woh t0 hai dekhna di jab wh bada hojaye gaa naa tab mai usse apni tara banau gi karate sikhau gi dance sikhau gi aur she was cut of by jeevika

Jeevika - bas kaar usse bara toh hojane dee

and bhot sister laugh

Manvi - dii mai toh apse puchna bhol hi gayi apki job ka kya hua

Jeevika - manu unno ne kaha hai ke mai monday se job start kar sakti thi hon abi 2 din hai aaj friday hai

Manvi - yeeh toh bht acha hai

Jeevika - acha abi bht bateen ho gayi jake ayush ko dek

Manvi - haan di mai chali hoon

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now it was 8 pm

manvi made pantars sleep in their room and she was sitting in the hall with ayush on her lap and she was playing with him and jeevika was watching tv

suddenly bell rang

Manvi - aree lagtaa hai rangeela a gaya

she went and opened the door and she was right he was rangeela

Rangeela - manvi kese hi re tuu and he hugged her

Manvi - mai ek daam jakass tu bata she said and they broke the hug

Rangeela - mai bi bilkul fit aur yeh kon hai tere haath mein

Manvi - aree yahi tho hai ayush

Rangeela - aree yeh ayush hai jiske bare mein tune bataya thaa

Manvi - haan yeh wahi hai and she kissed ayush on his cheek and ayush smiled cutely

Manvi - aree ab andar nahii ayee gaa kyaa

Rangeela - aa raha ho naa gussa kyun karti hai

rangeela entered the house and meet jeevika then after manu's bak bak rangeela went to room 4 rest but jeevika manu and ayush were still awake

Manvi - kyaa hua di apko nend nahi a rahi kya

Jeevika - nahi manu

Manvi - aesa hai toh hum kahi baar chale

Jeevika - manu iss waqt

Manvi - haaan di kya hota hai chalte hainaa ap mai aur ayush

Jeevika - paar

Manvi - par war kuch nahi hum ja rahe hai

Jeevika - aur tere pantars

Manvi - di woh log gore bech kaar soo rahe hai aur agar woh utt bi gaye toh rangeela hai naa unka khayal rakne ke liye

Jeevika - theek hai agar tu itana kah rahi hai th chalte hai

Manvi - yeaaah

suddenly jeevika's phone rang she picked up tha phone after talking

Manvi - di kis kaa phone tha

Jeevika - manu karan kaa woh kahraha tha ki usse mujse kuch baat karni hai hamare kaam ke bare mein wh kya haina woh mera patner hai fashin desing ke job mein woh kahraha tha ke sir ne hame kuch kaam diya hai uske baree mein usse baat karni hai aur muje abi jana hoga wh kisi club mein hai

Manvi - acha toh theek haina chaltee hai wese bi hum baar toh jaa hi rahe hai

Jeevika - haan manu tu theek kah rahi hai

they get ready and came ut of the huse manu was wearing her patiala green and pinksuit she was looking beautiful and she also wear nose pin with that she looks more beautiful
and jeevika she was wearing her red and blue chridaar and she was also looking beautiful
they sat on the taxi and after a while they reach the rock club they came out of the taxi and manvi said

Manvi - di ap jao mai thri deer baad ati hon

Jeevika - par tu abi kyun nahi a rahi

Manvi - dii apko tho pata haina ke muje aesi jagaye bilkul pasand nahi hai yaha sharab [ alcohol ] aur pata nahi kya kya hotaa hai plzz di ap jao

Jeevika - ok manu par pata nahi kitani deer lagjaye

Manu - koi baat nahi dii mai konsa yaha bore ho gii ayush haina mere saath ap jao

Jeevika - ok manu apna khayal rakhna

Manvi - apbi

jeevika went inside and saw karan sitting on the corner on the sofa she went to him and sat next to him and they start talking [guyzz i know most of u were gussing that this the virat's party and u guyzz r right ]

viren was walking to tina when he saw jeevika he was shocked to see her there to himself

Viren - aree yaar jeevika yaha kyaa kar rahi hai aur yeh karan kee saath itane haas kar kyun baat kar rahi hai

then someone touch his shoulder and he turned to see tina
tina take him and made him sit but viren was still looking at jeevika to himself

Viren - mujee kya hogaya hai mai kyun jeevika ko kisi ke saath dekhar gussa ho raha hoo pata nahi muje kya hogaya hai he said angrly

then he said to tina that he is going to washroom but he went to jeevika and said

Viren - hey jeevika tum yaha he said pretending that he had seen her now

Jeevika - stand up and said ji ap yaha

Viren - yaa yeh party mere chote bhai ne di hai toh ana toh partaa hi naa he said and smiled

jeevika also smiled and said

Viren - tum haste hue bhot khoobsurat lagti ho he said lost in her

Jeevika - ji and she blushed

Viren - he cameback to his sense and said mai puch raha tha ki tum yaha kese

Jeevika - woh mai karan se milne ayi thi

Viren - karan se kyun

Karan - aree yar jeevika aur mai ek saath fashion desing mein patner hai aur hame saath ek project milaa hai bass ussi ke bare mein baat karne ke liyee waha bulaya haii

Viren - oh i see can i join u guyzz

Jeevika - ji bilkul

then he sat karan and jeevika start talking about work and viren just keep staring at her

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on the other side of the party

virat was enjoying with his frds dancing and all but he didn't drink till now bcoz 4 him 10pm is very much ealier he will drink at 2am it was his timtable

maya - chalo na virat room mein chale hai kuch privacy ke liye she said and drag virat in the coner

Virat - aree yaar itani bi kya jaldi hai abi toh puri raat baki hai he said and smirk

maya - virat jab se tum us figh wali larki se mile ho tume ho kya gaya hai

Virat smiled remembring about manu

Virat - nothing maya muje kuch nahi hau he said still smiling

maya - oh really jab se tum ussse milee ho akele mein hi smile karte rahte hoo aur kah rahi ho kuch nahi hua

Virat - maya pleasee give me some space yeh meri life hai mai jisseke bare mein shauu sochu gaa its non of ur bussiness saying this he walk from there

while walking virat to himself pata nahi kon thi woh naam to nahi pata uskaa par jo bi kaho ek daam kamal thi bilkul sherni type kisi se nahi darti aur sabse bari baat woh virat singh vadera se impress nahi hui uski jaga koi or hoti toh kahti aww so hot so sexy but woh madam bilkul different thi he smiled again pagal

saying this virat went from there and went to window he was looking out and suddenly he saw a girl he coudn't see her face bcoz she was showing her back but he could see that she was holding a baby in her hand suddenly the girl turned and virat her face he was shocked to see the same girl and he said

Virat - aree yeh toh wahi hai and he smiled widely oh god i cant belive ke ke yeh wahi hai maine toh socha hi nahi tha ki mai isse phir milugaa par yeh muje milgayi yes saying this he walk out of the club and saw the baby was sitting above the car and she was talking to baby virat sand there and was listening to her

Manvi - acha ayushu darling batao tume kuch khana hai

ayush said no by moving his head

Manvi - oh toh kuch khana nahi hai hmm kahi tume neend toh nahi ayi naa

ayush said no again

Manvi - acha batao mai tumhare liyee kya karu

he didn't answer

Manvi - acha mai tume option deti hoon tume ghar le ke jau

no respons

Manvi - ok yeh nahi tume kuch khelnaa hai

no respons

Manvi - yeh bi nahi toh tume kya karna hai haah na khelnaa hai naa sona hai naa ghar jana hai naa kuch kahna bi nahi hai haah

virat smiled looking at manu to himself

Virat - hayee kitane cute hai yeh pagal

Manvi - acha mai phir try karti ho ok tume kahi gana toh nahi sunaa

in this he moved his head in yes

Manvi - oh toh tume gana sunaa hai thek hai sunati

Virat - toh ab madam gana gayee gi kya baat hai ab hum bi toh sunne

manvi take ayush in her arms and start the song

Mosaam ne kaha phoolo se

Phoolo ne kaha khushboo se

Khushboo ne kaha bavroo se

Bavroo ne kaha shabnam se

Rehjaye gi yeh nishaniya rahe naa rahe hum

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

and she start rooling with ayush in her arms she was smiling widely and ayush also

virat was just staring at her and smiling

Virat - ayee hayee soneyo

laa laa la la
laa laa la la laa

laa laa la la
laa laa la la laa

Rehjaye gi yeh nishaniya rahe naa rahe hum

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

she starting dancing rooling here and there smiling

and virat's was just staring

manvi made ayush sit on the beach and she bend down

Tamanna jaga ke tune hame jina sikhaya

Tamanna jaga ke tune hame jina sikhaya she pointed to ayush

Tanha thi har lamha mai tune armaano ko jagaya she put her hand in front of ayush and ayush hold her hand in his small and soft hands she lifted him in air and then caugh him in her arms and start walking

Yeh silsile yeh dastaan kabi hoge naa khatam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

she then saw a man who was having baloons in his hands she went to him and took some ballons for ayush she give money to man and he went and she give ballons to ayush and ayush kissed her check and she also kissed him on check

virat was still there and was watching her with crossed arms and wide smile on his face

Virat - koi itana cute itana pyara itana massom kese ho saktaa hai

Ik nazar kya mili badle hai sare nazaree

Ik nazar kya mili badle hai sare nazaree

Do kadam kya chale milgaye hum ko sahare

Yeh arzoo yeh justajo kahi ho na mere baram

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

Rehjaye gi yeh nishaniya rahe naa rahe hum

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

aa jile ik pal mei soo janam

she finish the song and ayush clap for her and she smiled

virat also clapped her but she didn't heard it

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What will happen next?

will virat will come in front of manvi?

will tina came to know that jeevika is in the party?

does vadera boyz have feeling 4 manu and jeevika or they r just trying to flurt with them?

If you want to know then keep reading Humse hai life

so guyzz comment plzz look i update it so soon so pleasee now its your turn guyzz comment i am waiting 😊


Edited by manuvirat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww...so cute update...superb
luvd it.cont asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello ive never read this ff but im going to start so can u henceforth pm me plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MTBT_12071316

Aww...so cute update...superb
luvd it.cont asap



hy thanks 4 loving it 😊
i will cont soon😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aasma1

hello ive never read this ff but im going to start so can u henceforth pm me plz



yeah sure why not i will pm u whenever i update😊

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Originally posted by: manuvirat



yeah sure why not i will pm u whenever i update😊



thankyou but before hand I wanna let u know that this summer I am going to be working really long shifys so I might not be a frequient commenting but I will defo try... so just pm me and I will read the ipdate and try to get back to u

I hope u understand bbz xxx
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continue soon ... it was awsum ... thz for the pm

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