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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur



gussa mat ho .
yaha mujhe jada log jante nahi re .
m silent user na .

but HD forum pe bana tha bday thread .

i wonder tujhe PM nahi kia ?
i was thinking k fiza ne BDAY msg kyun nahi bheja!!!!!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3078363

ye raha bday thread k link :)
n its ok ...i know tune wish kardia .dilse 😃



nhi mjhy kisi ny brthday party mein nhi bolaya😭😭...
n today my net is hell...tumhara thread hi nhi khol raha heavy hai as... i will post a comment there
any ways
A very happy brthday n wish u all the best of fortune, happines.. n have a blissd life
🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Api ap busy ho???
aj update nhi milega kya?😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
UNRESD my post on page 44
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry jani i was in full plan to update today yet my sister came to stay so i couldn't.. but will try k kal ker pao
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

beautiful part fiza ..

it was very emotional .feeling bad for mayank ..
use khayal bhi nahi k idat k time pura ho gaya .
i hope ye janne k bad wo tut na jaye n uska determination of not leting any1 come between him n nupur bhi thik rahe .

nupur needs him ,his care ...

i wanna know the reason of this circumstances but pat hai 20 update tak ye susppance jhelna parega 😕





thanka alot dear
yeah apk kayal hai us ko sab bata hai...kafi kuch...
tht wont as he knows that damge has been done n now its time to make things alright..

kitni aqalmand ho tum...sachi mein yeah supsen nhi tuty ga itni jadli..sorry nah

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Posted: 13 years ago

Rpld to u all…pardon errors.. extremely tired..

Chapter:9

Past:

Samrat: dekho in sari cheeso k kayl rekhna… gujan.. gunjan mein tum se baat ker raha hoo…

He followed her eyes ..who were keenly observing mayank n nupur with a smile ..who were busy in a file with sum deigns

Gunjan: yeah dono kya ker rahy hain

Samrat: maaynk k new project hai us mein nupur us ki help ker rahi hai… actually mayank ny us ko assistant rekha hai ..woh bhi ghar mein kisi ko nhi pata hai… kyun k agar ami jaan k pata chal gaya k ahmed khandan ki eklatoi beti business mein kam ker rahi hai tu naak cut jay gi.. us k kya zaoorat hai kam ki… nupur hamesha se chahti thi k woh working woman bany..

Gunjan: tu mayank ny kisi na kisi tarha us k yeah khawab bhi pora kerdiya…. Amazing…

Samrat: han so tu hai… tum humari per dhyaan do gi…

Gunjan: agr in dono ko zindagi bhar k liyan sath bhand diya jay tu… she was watching them still with smile n dream filled eyes

Samrat: tu hum ek sth khabi nhi hosakty

Gunjan: kyun

Samrat: ek baar humari college mein ek larkay ny mayank se yeahi sawal kuch thora alag trikay se kiya.. aur myank ny us ki halat dabaha kerdi thi… tu ap harghis na sochy asa kuch bhi… abhi hum apni shadi per concentrate kerain…

Gunjan: Samrat mjhy ek baat samhj nhi ati itna brand tu mein zindagi mein nhi pehna…

Samrat: tu ab pehn lo.. ami ko tum 5-6 lakh ki chalti phirti asami nazar aao..

(u shud appear a commodity of 6-7lakhs )

Gunjan: kyun

Samrat: taky unko yaqeen hoajy k tum afford ker sakti hoo

Gunjna: woh tum mein kersakti hoon,… per itna dikhawa kyun….

Samrat: meri maa.. ek daafa kerlo… aur pls.. woh hay shy wali larki banjana thori dair k liyan pls..

Gunjan: u gross… ajeeb hi hai yeah sab…

…………….

It was the day of party and all of them were pretty busy

Nupur: ohh fuuu…. Kis per itna tashan marna hai bhai… taiyari tu dekho..lag tu asa raha hai k aj Gunjan k ghar waly tumhain dekhny arahy hain…

She was leaning to his room's door…all dressed up…

Mayank: he smiled corrected his hairs…. Shukriya.. apk moo se humari tareef.. uff apni khush bakhti per naaz horaha hai…

( my praise from ur mouth…gosh its such an lucky day for me)

Nupur: bus bus haan…

Mayank: wasy ap bhi kam nhi lag rahi hai….Adhiraj ko bhi kya secret invitation diya hai..han…

Nupur: Mayank… mood mat spoil keroo pls… tu janab yeah batao kasa lag raha hai…

Mayank: he sigh n looked at her…. acha aur kuch ajeeb bhi… pata nhi.. nupur tum janti ho yeah project buhat hi zayda kareeb hai mjh se… aur mein jo kuch ker sakta tha kiya… aj jab woh project approve hogaya hai tu acha lag raha hai….

Nupur: hmm lagna bhi chaiy… tum ny sach mein kafi mehanat ki hai…

Mayank: wasy akelay mein ny tu mehannat nhi ki hai… nupur layny do na mjhy tumhara naam plss… tumhara buhat bara hath hai adhay design tumharay hain.. asa kasay mein sab…

Nupur: mayank is baat se kya farak perta hai k mera naam aya k na aay.. tum present kero ya mein ek hi baat hai…

Mayank: farak parta hai nupur… kitna acha laagy ga jab sab tumhain tumahry kam k liyan shabashi day ga…

Nupur:; she smile… yeah mein ny shabshi k liyan nhi kiya… mjhy acha lagta hai islayn kiya… aur kahama kha mein ek aur mahazz(war) na uthao… aur wasy bhi mera boss mjhy se kafi impress hai.. she grinned referring to mayank..

Mayank: ohh really.. woh khadoos impress bhi hota hai…

Nupur: han han hojata hai kahabi khabi.. aray mayank… tumhari training US wali us k kuch pata chala…

Mayank: nopes.. wasy aj baba k phone aya tha tu woh kah rahy thy k..umeed tu hai k mjhy dakhila(enrollment) mil jay ga… mil jay bus… tu tum socha … kay hoga…

Nupur: mein batao kya hoga… ami ki fikar asmaan cho lay gi… mayank tu business lay ker urgaya…

They both laugh…

Ab chalo na mayank tumhary sasural waly tumhar bar-dekhaway( to see u) k liyan nhi arahy hain….

Mayank: mein ready tha madam... ap ko dekh ker scoha recheck kerlo..

Nupur: poray flirt ho tum….

Mayank: so tu hoon….chalo… aj mein tum ko 3 min mein venue pochao ga…

Nupur: deemgh karab hogaya hai tumahra… dekho ashista chalna…

Mayank: ya ya ya..

Nupur: mayank mein baat rahi tum car taaz nhi chalo gay..

………………..

Tai jaan: Samrat sehab zara mayank k sath rahiy..aur sekiy us se … woh kisis din sab se aagy nikal jay ga aur ap yahin moo dekhty rah jay gay… woh zayda tar business walo ko jaanta hai tu zara jaan pechny barhy… ap ko tu bekababr rahy hain..aur zindagi bahar us k mohtaaj rahna..

(Samrat be with mayank else he will take away the business from u and u will such kept looking like this.. and will always be on mayank's help)

Samrat: ji….

Teri tu

Mayank: kya hua hai.. he smiled nodding at someone's hi…

Samrat: saaly tu itna kaam kyun kerta hai… ap meri maa meri pechy phir par gai hai

He chuckled

Mayank: tu sahi tu kah rahi hai… aja sab se milwata hoon tujhy.. thora tu interest la.. kal ko shadi keray ga tu biwi ko bhi pocket money se khely ga kiya… us k ghar waly pcohy gay..miya Samrat ap kya kertay hain tu kay jawab day ga….

Samrat: chal bhi chal.. aur kya kya kerna apray ga is muhabbat mein hay….

Gunjan and her family arrived ..she was so dam nervous to face her would be mother in law knowing all about her.. nupur looked at the entrance and saw her..she went to her…. To her luck her mom n dad were also there…so it was the best time to introduce gunjan n her family…

Nupur: hi gunjan.. asalmu alkium uncle aunty

GM: walikum asalm beta tu ap nupur hai buht suna hai ap k bray mein… khush rahy…

Nupur: anty yeah humari ami aur baba hai… ami yeah gunjan k parents hain…

Gunjan: addab… she scans gunjan from top to bottom and in min got tht she belongs to a pretty high class.. and has that taste to..gunjan was feeling more n more uncomfortable..

Tai jaan: khsuh rahi beta.. I must say .. apk taste buhat acha hai..

Mayank n Samrat who were standing a bit away very pretty happy mayank patted his own shoulder

Samrat; wah meray sahir tera idea tu set gay..

Mayank: mera idea kabhi fail nhi hota.. ja ja maqy per choka maar…

Samrat: okay..saur ji here I cum…

Taya jaan: mjhy lagta hai hum pehly bhi mil chukay hain..

GF: ji haan bulkil… ap ko shayd yaad nhi apki pehchly factory k liyan machinery hum se hi apny import kerai thi…

Taya jaan: OMG … yeah tu kitna haseen itnfiaaq hai.. Afaq sehba ap ko mein kasa bhool sakta hoon.. apki wajah se tu huamr kitna bara nuksan hony se bacha tha

GF: aray asi bhi kya baat hai… ek hi kahndan( referring to business world) k hain hum… apas mein ek dosray k kam nhi aay gay tu kasay chaly ga…

Tai jaan: tu gunjan beta ap kiya ker rhai hai

Gunjan: ji hum nupur k sath hi hain… unhi ki class mein…

Samrat: ami apko mrs waris talsh ker rahi thi… addab…

GF: khush rahiy beta…

Tai jaan: yeah mera beta hai Samrat… aj kal business yeahi dekh rha hai…

Gunjan: really.. she whispered under her breath n nupur to hided her smile…

GF: buhat hi achi baat hai… acha lagta hai k jab aj kal k nojawan(youth).. apny mustaqabil( future) k baray mein itny serious hoon

Gunjan: ami hum log..

Tia jaan: han han beta jay ap log party enjoy kerain.. nupur kayal rekhy ga in ko..yeah humari bht khass mehman hain

Nupur: aaiy.. bhabi.. she whispered the last word …

Gunjna: chal bhi is se pehly k samart ki itni tareffay sun ker hum hasi na control ker saky

Mayank: good evening bhabi jaan.. kasi hain app

Gunjan: good evening bhai sehab.. aj tu bht light maar rahy hoo kya baat hai…

Mayank: soch raha hoo do teen larkiyan mein bhi set kerlo…

Nupur: tum se pechly 26 saalo mein ek larki set nhi hooi

Mayank: larki ek hi set kertay hain madam…tu tai jaan ny kuch kaha tu nhi

Nupur: kaha na..meham k buhat achy se kayal rekhna… aj akl humara business Samrat sambhal raha hai..aur yeah bht khass hain

Mayank: wah wah.. tu baat sahi jaga jarahi hai… good good…afaaq sehba.. mein ny tu un ko card dayna hi bhool gaya tha… mar gay…

Gunjan: mein ny bacha liya..

Mayank: kyun

Gunjan: yeah meray father hain

Mayank: tum afaq sehba ki beti hoo… ap tu shadi mubark hoo… hum atay hain..baqi k mamalat( matters) set kerty hain..

Addab sir..

GF: hoo.. mayank ahmed… kasay hain ap young man… im very impressed with ur work…itni perfection se tu quote kerty ho k mana kerny ka tu sawal hi nhi utha tha

Mayank: thanku sir… ap yaha aay thanku…

Tia jaan was not to much impressed with the fact that mayank was at the spot light and samart wasn't..plus gunjan's family shouldn't be to much into mayank no way… th moment she saw gunjan and her family the first thought came in her mind was samart n gunjan's marriage.. knowing gunjan is a huge person and her father's business name will help them a lot.. but the way mayank took the lame light and knowing shilpa these days is in full mood of his marriage.. she wasn't liking it at all

Mayank: pls be comfortable… excuse me..

GF: sure beta… bhi apky tu dono betay hi kamal hai

Tai jaan: mayank mera beta nhi hai

Taya jaan: han per hai woh betay se bhi bahr ker… woh meray choty bhi k beta hai jo US mein business sambhalta hai…

GF: ohh yeah tu bht achi baat hai…………..

……………

Tai jaan: ladies n getleman on this asupious occasion , I have a huge announcemtn to make, my son Mayank Salman Ahmed has successfully launch the diseginer accersories collection of Ahmed's Fashion house abroad in london and Paris and now it will be introdued in NY, and that is for short time available her to… I will like him to pls present his work…

Mayank cleared his throat and went up to the stage..and bow down to taya who spread his hand on his head with a proud smile…

Mayank: thank u so much… its all because of the support and guidelines I got from Mr faraz Ahmed (taya jaan) tht I am being able to take this venture abroad/. Before I present this to u all, I will thank my parents and my friends Samrat n Nupur who has an equal part in this project…

Nupur glared and than smile and shocked her head, and he smirk and proceed to his designs

Gunjan n samart finally find a bit time to spend with each other while mayank was tired handling everything and came and set beside Nupur who was watching samart n gunjan with so much dreamy eyes…

Mayank: kay dekh rahi hoo…

Nupur: ktiny achy lag rahy hain na yeah dono… bhai ki life finally set hojay gi… kam se kam unko kisis asay insaan k sath zindagi nhi guzarni paray gi jo un ko pasand na hoo…ya jis se unki zabardsti baat na tah ki hoo

Mayank: tumahry sath bhi zabradsti nhi hogi… is baaat ki itni se bhi fikar maat kerna samjhi..dekhna tumhari life mein is se bhi best hoga…she smiled … aur yeah drink meri hooi…

Nupur: yeah mein ny pee lit hi

Mayank: tu…

Nupur: thak gay hoo nah…subha se kam ker rahy hoo

Mayank: mein sach mein aj buhat thak gaya hoon… dil ker raha hai yeahi soo jao… ab tu sir bhi dard ker raha hai.. he closed his eyes and moved his head back n than came back..

Wasy indono se kahao itni bhi sath sath na dekhy k tai jaan ko sahk hojay…

Nupur: han yeah bhi hai…

Mrs waris: aray ms ahmed party tu bary shandar rekhi hai apny…

Tia jaan: shukriya ms waris…

Mrs waris: wasy hum ny tu socha tha aj humain ek aur announcement milay gi…mayank project announcement k sath…

Tai jaan: kasi announcement

Mrs waris: yeahi k aplog apany ab business ko ek kerdain ga… I mean dekhy na bhi kal jab Samrat aur maaynk yeah sambhaly gay tu bacho mein kuch tu andh band hoi hi sakti hai… aur jis tarha se mayank aur nupur hamesha sath htoay hain…kuch zayda hi…I mean shopping per, colloge mein aur har jaga hi.. humain tu lag k shares ko ek sath kerna company ko kaha se kaha lay jay ga… tu yeahi silver jubilee gift best hota .. hain na….wasy bacho ko business hand over kerny k baad shares k kiya hoag

Tia jaan was stoped in her tracks with words that wer echoing in her mind..she never thought this way.. she looked at mayank nupur who were smiling on sumthing chatting along …

Mrs waris: array mein tu asai hi kha rahi thi..zehan mein k baat thi… kha di..apko tu pata hai mein saaf saaf baat kerti hoo… wasy mjhy nupur buhat pasand hai.. aur mein apny betay adhiraj k liyan chati ho… tu us se pehly socha k yeah ap se confirm kerlo...sochiya ga…

Tai jaan came back to her senses and was chatting with Mrs waris…

Tai jaan: mein zara ap se milti hoon thori dair mei..

Nupur: mayank yeah adhiraj yaah kya ker rah hai tum ny is ko kyun bolaya hai..tumhari tuu….

Mayank: mein ny nhi tia jaan ny bolaya hai..unki favorite mrs waris k beta hai…

Nupur: no wonder.. jab maa asi hai tu beta bhi asa hi hoga…

Shilpa: kyun bhi kya karabi hai us mein..shilpa who just arrived back to both of them over hearing sum talks sat beside them

Mayank: karabi… list hai pori… per nupur k liya sab maaf

Nupur: maaynk.. tang maat kero phir mjhy ghoor raha hai yeah.. mjhy acha nhi lagta ….

Maaynk: acha nah relax.. tum idahr bhait jao…mein taya jan ko dekhlo zara..

Shilpa: ap janti hai is ko

Nupru: ji choti ami..unversity mein hai humari… buth bora larka hai.. har roz ek nai larki k sth dekhta hai…aur humain bhi pershan kerta hai… ek din tu hum ny us ko car mein.. I mean…

Shilpa: KYA..

Nupur: ji woh us tarha ki haraktein bhi kerta hai…

Shilpa: ya khuda… she was hell worried…

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Present:

He moved out the doctors cabin along with him, he was discussing all that they will be doing and how to handle it… but as he cum near her room he found tai jaan standing infornt of her room…. She looked side ways n was shocked to see him standing here

Tai jaan: tum tumahri himat kasay hoi.yaha any ki… haan… dekh tu lya hai us ko is halat tak pcoha diya hai

Mayank: meri himat ko tu ap lalkariya(warn) ga bhi maat…. Aur us ki yeah halat mein ny nhi apny ki hai…. Aur ab ap mjhy us k ass pass na dekehy…

Tia jaan: kyun na dekho.. kyun na dekho mein us k asss pass.. tum hoty kaun ho asa kuch kahany walay… yaad rekho mayank tumhara ap us se koi rishta nhi…us ki iddat kahtam hochuki hai

Mayank: meray us se kisi rishtay ko ap nhi toor sakti …. Woh meri hi hai… ap kuch nhi kerskti

Tai jaan: woh tumahri thi…. Tum bhool gay ho tu mein tum ko yaad dila doon.. tu us per apny sary haq kho chukay ho.. tumhain tu hum sab ny khud moqa diya tha.. per ab tumharay pass asa koi haq nhi hai samjhy tum..

Mayank: humain kitny mawaqy milay thy hum bulkay ap khud bht achy se janti hai… bhool gai hain tu sab mein yaad dilaoo… ab k ap mera kuch nhi baghir sakti.. mein yahin raho ga… jo kerna hai kerlo… jaoo………

Tai jaan: tum fikar maat kero… hum apk woh haal kerain ga na jo tum ny socha bhi nhi hoga… ab yeah baat qanoon haal keray ga..

He laughed

Mayank: woh bhi ker k dekh lain…jay jay.. mjhy qanoon k istamal na sikhay….

She was fuming with anger and has no choice to left the place, mayank has always been such very very correct in saying wht so ever it is.. he always stood for her, always.. yet today wht she saw in his eyes actually made her keep quite.. she couldn't say anything ..but she knew she will even not loss everything now at this level…she will use her ways….as today things are pretty much with her…

Opening the door of her room, he came near her and looked at her again…but before he can enter Dr.Nadir stopped him…

Dr. Nadir: mayank jitna hosaky bulkily wasy hi rahny ki khosih kero jasay tum thay.. hum janty yeah itna assan nhi ha jitni asani se hum kha rahy hain.. maagr yeah ek baat usko bar bar yeah ehsas dilay gi k sab thik hai ..kyun k tum thik hoo… aur yeahi yaqeen us ko yaqeen dily ga..

He nooded in yes…and closed his eyes and plastered a smile to enter her room

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written...
happy for SaJan as sab accha ho raha hain unke sath...
bt MN ka kya???
m sooo confused!!!!
ab toh lag raha hain ke MN ki hi talaq huyi hain par kyunnn
ufff!!!!!! n jo bhi ho i jst hateee dat woman mujhe sakt nafrat i.e PURE HATRED hain basss
aur kuch nhi...Arhhh
ghatiya aurat...
loved it lodss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i Just wonder why nupur's mother is always jealous of mayank
and strict towards nupur

does she not have right to watch dreams
fulfill them...

your update was amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing part. I love mayank's character
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part api...
Loved everything in this update...
And u know mujhe yeh tai jaannn bilkul humsafar mein asher ki maa ki tarha lagti hai...baatein bhi vaise karti hai...'hum tumhari vo haal karenge jo tumne kabhi socha bhi nahi hoga' types..lol..u know now im imagining that woman in place of taijan..lol lol
Loved this update...
Cont soon dii..

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