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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

unres

wow

ilove this

u describe it very beautiful

nd love is beautiful felling

nd everyone love some one its true

difference is that some accept this nd some become confused ...

nd give name to there confusion we r just friend ...

but ja i love this .

nd i know u have a great ideat in u'r mind so pen it down na

m waiting for it ok

nd its megical

u rock it

kya baat kya baat kya baat

m second who commenting

thats great because m a late comer

meow m missing u please if u read this then reply me means pm me

love u girl for this beautiful os ...

i don't know u but i hope that i got chance to know u

have a musical dancing day ...

Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago

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arushi

@arushiii

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
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Unres

Awesome Update..
Good to see Kria opening to him..
And loved the way rey dealed the things so well..
Numbers exchange..wow!!
Bracelet scene was superb too..
Cafe meeting holding hands I could imagine😉 while reading.
Rey picking her after her work and all the meets were amazing.
Cafe scenes were out of the world.
Totally a faddu update and a good ending.
Yes!! Life is a surprise and I agree wid d fact.
Im waiting for ur next OS.

THANK U DARL.. M GLAD U LYKD THE OS.. NW I CN POST MY NXT OS WITHOUT ANY NERVOUSNESS.😃.

N THE NXT OS WILL B ON KRIYA'S POV ..I GUESS😳😳

Edited by arushiii - 13 years ago

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

lovely...specially the bracelet part...K to KR.. woww

thanks for the pm

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: arushiii

TY dear ... i'l post nxt prt witin few mins..

ya i read it nd me commenting it already

u r superb

love u for this beautiful os next ka me waiting 😉

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

amazing OS girl...
luved how rey n kriya came together...

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

it is awesome
loved it
loved the bracelet moment "KR"
was really cute
loved it

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

hey, it's really good n plzz pm me 😃

wanna know the rest

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

awesome update...

loved how everything saped up...

the little talks.. the small gestures...

everything tha was sweet...

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

I don't believe that it was ur first ever time...u described everything so beautifully...
Caf meets...
KR bracelet now that was super ausum...😳
Drives...n he picking her up from work n dropping her home...
The never wanted to end wala hug...😳
gosh girl u rock seriously n please pakka se do write the next OS u'r wanting to will be waiting sooo desperately for it n hey thanx for the pm...n update soon n do PM me 😊

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: arushiii
thank you @sachi n angel...

m realy vry happy dat u lykd it..

m on cloud 9 readng ol ur lovly comments.. as dis is my first tym i hve wrte smethng... i hve thought of writtn dis since vry long ..bt nvr wrte as i ws highly nervous
n scard hw wil it wrk out...

bt nw m happy..

No thnx u deserve it n u surely shud write more often...