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* i need a hug now*
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Sorry for editing out late Rae !!
I forgot and luckily my PM dabba reminded me !!
Gosh man !!
Havent I already told you, Sharman confuses me !! Well even Arnav does, but one big diff I found the way you write about both of them, is the way their heart/brain works !! While Arnav has many emotions they all come only one at a time, and Sharman !! Gosh, he has so many emotions and they all come out like music, one overlapping the other note !! the same way, I feel his emotions overlap the other !!
The beginning seemed to calm !! The calm you feel before a storm !! And by the end !! Gosh !! Sharman is left my mind like that !! I wanted to be happy , cry shout and do everything at the same time !! Thanks Rae, ek parda hatane ke liye !! The fact why they got divorced !! I'm wishing that by some means, someone other than him knows why he let Nisha go !! He loves her dude !1 SImple unconditionally, he love only and only Nisha !! He couldnt let her change cause of his family how much ever they wanted her to, and to make her he had to break it !! Gosh those parts were amazing !!
I told you right, the first part seems like he's a devotee, devouring her beauty !! And I just loved the way you described that part !! And by the end, I cant help but love Sharman !! And Nisha !! She's suffered so much !! I wanna hug them both !! And seriously, I love NiAr tooo now !!â¤ď¸
And as for the presence on Shyam lingering around in the RM !! That was amazing part tooo !! I loved the way you brought out everyone's emotions from Anjali's perspective !! The way Anjali thinks !! Yaa, even I got confused, but thanks for the clarification Rae !!
I just love this part !!
Thanks for the PMđ¤
PS: A request to silent readers, PL COMMENT !! You guys are not only eating Rae's but my brains tooo !! So comment !! Its feel so bad to see YTNOO only with a few pages of comments !! Gosh people, just a line or two isnt going to kill your time !! So pl !!
PPS: Hope you dont mind the above PS Rae !!
Edited by -Shobhu21- - 13 years ago
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