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reflorated thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dont leave her Sharman, please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm speechless. I've never read anything so beautiful yet sad in my entire life!

I have a perosnal problem with people who fail to be a husband in order to be a son. Even though I respect his decision and he was indeed thinking whats best for her I fail to understand his emotions. Who is he to decide whats good for her? Why does everybody keeps making decisions for Nisha? She is not weak. She is a woman who has built her own life, lived on her terms. Not because she was egoistic but because she HAD to. There was no one else to guide her so she found her own way.

Sharman was the one person for whom she let that wall against her heart, break! She was left vulnerable by him. Again I fail to understand his decision to stick with his parents. He could have thought of something. If Nisha is willing to let him into his life completely why cant Sharman do the same. I know it was the situation that led him to let her go but what about her? What about the things she has been going through?

Yes, he thought she is strong enough to make a fresh start but he failed to understand the damage he had done.

I am not judging him but just voicing my concerns. I wont jump to conclusions here I will wait. I'll try my best to understand him.

The part about Anjali made me cry like a baby! Yes I cried. Anjali has been living in a world of lies. And now the harsh reality has hit her. Its not easy for any person to get over it and move on.

You explanation wasnt necessary at all. The way you've written the chapter is outstanding and the pain you've depicted in it is quite self explanatory. You are an amazing write! I feel like repeating myself over and over again how wonderfully you write. Fabulous! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved this update
It was full of emotions from Nisha and Sharman to Anjali
You described it all well
I feel sorry for Sharman because he had to choose and I feel like he lost himself in between it all.
Nisha I can only imagine the heartache she is going to go through once she wakes up

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update..
poor nisha, feeling so sad for her.. I hope NiSh gets back together..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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* i need a hug now*

*EDITED*
Sorry for editing out late Rae !!
I forgot and luckily my PM dabba reminded me !!

Gosh man !!
Havent I already told you, Sharman confuses me !! Well even Arnav does, but one big diff I found the way you write about both of them, is the way their heart/brain works !! While Arnav has many emotions they all come only one at a time, and Sharman !! Gosh, he has so many emotions and they all come out like music, one overlapping the other note !! the same way, I feel his emotions overlap the other !!

The beginning seemed to calm !! The calm you feel before a storm !! And by the end !! Gosh !! Sharman is left my mind like that !! I wanted to be happy , cry shout and do everything at the same time !! Thanks Rae, ek parda hatane ke liye !! The fact why they got divorced !! I'm wishing that by some means, someone other than him knows why he let Nisha go !! He loves her dude !1 SImple unconditionally, he love only and only Nisha !! He couldnt let her change cause of his family how much ever they wanted her to, and to make her he had to break it !! Gosh those parts were amazing !!

I told you right, the first part seems like he's a devotee, devouring her beauty !! And I just loved the way you described that part !! And by the end, I cant help but love Sharman !! And Nisha !! She's suffered so much !! I wanna hug them both !! And seriously, I love NiAr tooo now !!❤️

And as for the presence on Shyam lingering around in the RM !! That was amazing part tooo !! I loved the way you brought out everyone's emotions from Anjali's perspective !! The way Anjali thinks !! Yaa, even I got confused, but thanks for the clarification Rae !!

I just love this part !!
Thanks for the PM🤗

PS: A request to silent readers, PL COMMENT !! You guys are not only eating Rae's but my brains tooo !! So comment !! Its feel so bad to see YTNOO only with a few pages of comments !! Gosh people, just a line or two isnt going to kill your time !! So pl !!

PPS: Hope you dont mind the above PS Rae !!


Edited by -Shobhu21- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for the late comment rae and also sorry because this is gonna be short

i absolutely loved the update this time
since we had anjali and her emotions depicted here
oh she is still feeling the loss but understandably so😭

and i dont know y but i didnt like it that sharman left just like that i mean how could he
she will feel so cheap when she gets up
the whole update left me very sad and then that song too
i will have a good cry now and then come back and again read finally to cheer up my mood

lastly just excellent work u r write melancholic tone very nicely👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
really felt bad for Nisha and Sharman...
hope things get better..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsuuum chapter dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sharman left her after their love making & Nisha is going 2 b furious knowing her character well but from Sharman POV we know that he is a step son & perhaps his decision was 4 the family who brought him up. I just hope tat U will find a way 2 unite them bcoz it is unfair for Sharman 2 just let go his love for the sake of his family & from what u have written it shows that he truly love her & mayb Nisha also has the same feelings.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update & very well written 👏
thanx for d pm :)

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