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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

yes tich im online ...did u read my last comment abt my new ff idea ... need help with the name n e suggestions

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

ok tich um its like this

teaser

damn it aman tell her just because of her jansi i ki rani act she will have to do double time

with are number one clinet shyam... yells asr

sir she not listening in fact she has made a hungama out of this i even tired injected so she would calm down but god kya larki hai she took the injection and ..injected me i was knocked out for hours says aman

asr barges in her room she is wraped ina stain bed sheet covering her naked body

what the hell is this crap how dare u khushi

she stands up clutching the bed sheets closer to her body

and with her right hand point at asr

you mr. armav sighn raizada dont you dare mistake me that im like those other innocent helpsless girls you kidnapped n traffic her for your disgusting down market buiness of pleasing sick bas***ds

im everything but that under stood you will regret this

you have mess with Khushi kumari Vadhera m y brother viren is a lawyer you will pay for this

he grabs khushi's hand and pulls her toward him almost making the bed sheet slip from her body luckly she grabed it in time

dont test me khushi ...in fact after your double shit you come to my room we have some unfinshed buiness left says asr

hell noo with you .. how ... suddenly his his lips locked her and with one hand he yanked the sheets off

Edited by lalmirch28 - 13 years ago

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

"escape into love'

trafficked

"unsettled business"

"exception"

"erotica"

"the dirty picture"

"dalaal"

"jurm ki dhadkan"

"keemat"

"daraar"

"gunaah"

"lamho ke daman"

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: ...Tich...
"escape into love'
trafficked
"unsettled business"
"exception"
"erotica"
"the dirty picture"

"dalaal"
"jurm ki dhadkan"
"keemat"
"daraar"
"gunaah"
"lamho ke daman"

thank u tich darling loved them all now im confused lol um what does dalaal mean?

im debating between trafficked ,gunaah , or exceptiion idk ,,,what u think of story line too bold

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

dalaal means trafficker in hindi..

if you are choosing hindi title then "lamho ke daman" is bit apt since everything.. i mean intimacy happens in kuch lamhein.

"keemat" is another great option if you are showing khushi exploited.

trafficked" is one good choice if you are showing khushi doing the business..

but if you are showing khushi getting intimated only with arnav then "exception" is good. or "escape into love'

haan agar tumhari story mein ULTIMATE boldness hai jahan tum sex ko describe karna chahti ho then "erotica" is the best option among all.

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: ...Tich...
dalaal means trafficker in hindi..

if you are choosing hindi title then "lamho ke daman" is bit apt since everything.. i mean intimacy happens in kuch lamhein.
"keemat" is another great option if you are showing khushi exploited.

trafficked" is one good choice if you are showing khushi doing the business..

but if you are showing khushi getting intimated only with arnav then "exception" is good. or "escape into love'

haan agar tumhari story mein ULTIMATE boldness hai jahan tum sex ko describe karna chahti ho then "erotica" is the best option among all.

in the ff she wil l be expolilted n get close to asr while working in the buiness lol so i gusse either keemat or exception ... um do u have n e suggestions in how to make khushi be bold n mangae such a stituation i want make kushi a modern bold grl but still indian enough not sell her self ?

how u feeling sweets i loved how u showed get taking charge lol didnt cthat coming lol loved it

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

cool then go for keemat.. because there are many ffs that have exception in the title..

lolzz.. nahi yaar i dont like to take charge.. i love to be low profiled in many cases...

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

and every girl who doesnt want sell her body isnt traditional. The most modern girl too wont want to get raped or sleep with men.

you can show khushi in bikinis too but that doesnt mean that she is ok with sex. that's just a misconception.

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: ...Tich...
cool then go for keemat.. because there are many ffs that have exception in the title..

lolzz.. nahi yaar i dont like to take charge.. i love to be low profiled in many cases...

i ment muskaan lol n e ways how u feeling better did u get go to college i know u said u missed the first few days ... how is ur updating going for ur other ff's

what u thinking for next ch for lsd ...showing thier married life or flash backs from current life ...

how is ur weekend going i hada fun at the movies n mall with my mom n aunt saw avengers ...hoorible

movie 😕

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fiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Tich...
and every girl who doesnt want sell her body isnt traditional. The most modern girl too wont want to get raped or sleep with men.

you can show khushi in bikinis too but that doesnt mean that she is ok with sex. that's just a misconception.

i agree ...but their is a mystery here viren did something to asr's sister jeevika ...so this the "keemat" khushi has to pay for her brother's gunaa