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Posted: 20 years ago
Scene somethin

Recap:

Dhruv: Dhruv looks up in a shoc... Vedika..I..I

Vedika: Dont even try to justify yourself!!!!..me and u..we r over!!! 😡

Dhruv: Arre vediak tum!

Just then Vedika comes out of her dream..or should I say NIGHTMARE😆😆..she is still sitting at the table...she was only dreaming...So DHRUV AND THAT GIRL WERE NEVER SITTING AT THE TABLE AND TALKING...( soory khsuhi ji..😆😆) when she notices dhruv with a girl..standing next to her table...teh girl si theek thaak looking

Dhruv: Tum yaha kya kar rahi hoo?

Vedika: aa mein woh...mein to bus yuhi...(looks at rajni from top to bottom)

vedika; ( to herself) Itni bhi khoosurat nahi hain...mere dhruv ko apni chikni chupdi baato me fassa liya hoga...😡

Dhruv: Anyway rajni...meet vedika...my lovely wife..

Rajni: (smiles) Hi

Vedika: (fake smile) Hi !😡

Dhruv: Aur vedika yeh hain...(puts his left arm around rajni) meri pyaari si , sundar si, khoobsu..(rajni cuts him off)

The more he talks the more vedika gets jEALOUS

Rajni: Bus bus..ab tum meri taarif hi karte rahoge ya..

Dhruv: (faces rajni..still with hsi arm around ) Bhay tumhari jitni bhi taarif karu..utni kam hain...😉

Rajni: Accha...?

Dhruv: Aur nahi to kya...waise I must say ke tum jisse bhi shaadi karogi...woh bahut lucky hoga....bhay ab sab ko itni ravishing biwiya thodi na milti hain😉

Vedika who feels left out..as Dhruv si flirting with her..while she jsut sits there..getting more and more jealous!

Rajni: Accha to tumne mujhse shaadi kyun nahi ki?

Vediaka: (drinks an entire glass of water!)

Dhruv: Kya kare sweety...ab to shaadi kar hi li meime...but maybe agle janam mein...kyun ji😉 kya khayal hain...mujhse shaadi akrogi?

Vedika; (gets up from her chair) Kya?!?!?

Dhruv: Arre mein to agle janam ki baat kar raha tha...vedika tum bhi na...itne der se hum yaha khade hain...aur tumne humme bethne ko bhi nahi kaha......yaar tum baate bahut karti hoon...bechari rajni thak gayi hogi....comeon sweety...(he pulls out a chair for her and she sits down...fhruv sits next to her....while vedika is still standing)

Dhruv: Arre vedika tum betho na...( vedika sits down in her chair...which is across from their side)

Dhruv: ( puts his arm around rajni) Haa to kya khaogi tum??

vedika is not very happy...she gets a liitle sad😭😭

Rajni: Kuch bhi

Dhruv: Arre aise kaise ho sakta hain...aaj tum itni dino ke baad bombay aayi hoo...aaj to tumhari favorite khana hi managaaye..

Vedika..gets even more sad when dhruv calls teh waiter without asking vedika what she was gonna eat...

Dhruv orders food..

Dhruv: (puts his arm around rajni again) Haa to hum kaha the?

Vedika: (butts in) aa woh...dhruv meri dabyat theek nahi hain...mein ghar jaana chahti hoon...

Dhruv: leki itni jaldi...sweety to abhi hi aayi hain..humne to theek se baat bhi nahi ki...

Vedika: (her eyes wet..but no tears coming out) Pleasee..

Dhruv looks at her eyes..

Dhruv;( to himself) shayad meien kcuh zyada hi kar diya..

Dhruv: lekin vedika..

Vedika; (who acn ahrdly talk) (aankho mein paani) mein...mein ghar jaa rahi hoon...

Before dhruc could say anything..she leaves from there

Rajni: Meine pehle hi kaha tha...ke yeh jeaolusy wals idea bahut ho jaayega😆

DhruvMujhe kya pata tha..ke vedika ko itni chot pohochegi....

Rajni: Dhruv tum auarat ko anhi samjthe...woh kisi bhi cheez ko baat sakti hain..lekin apne pati ko nahi...,

Dhruv gets even more sad

Rajni: bhuddhu, ab jaldi jao..aur usse le kar aao...aur usse sab kuch such such batado ke hum sirf naatak kar rahe the

Dhruv leaves teh restaurant ..when he sees vedika necxt to a pole...he can only see her back....He goes close to her...

Vedika had tears in her eyes ...and her cheeks😭😭😭

Dhruv gets closer...holds her waist gently....and slowly turns her around....vedika quickly wipes her tears with her hands...and looks at teh ground...

Dhruv: ( soft voice) Tum yaha kyun chali aayi

Vedika; ( looks at him..a tear rolls down her left cheek) Kyunki mein tumhe kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti......😭

Dhruv: (looking at her tears...dhruv is touched😭)Kyun? Kyun nahi dekh sakti??

Vedika: Kyunki...kyunki mein tumse...( another tear rolls down her cheek)

Without waiting any longer...Dhruv takesher in hsi arms saying " hey hey... ...come here"😳... Vedika with her head on hsi right shoulder...she cries even more😭

Dhruv unhugs...holding her cheeks with both of his palms..wipes her tears

Dhruv; ( with all his love and passion) I Love U Vedika!

Vedika cries more...

Dhruc takes her in his arms again

Dhruv; (with his right palm on her hair)hey hey..vedika mein to sirf masak kar raha tha....rajni sirf meri doost hain...aur kcuh nahi..

Vedika..holding his shirt tight...cries even more...

Dhruv; (has liitle tears in hsi eyes) i am soorry vedika...please mat roa

Vedika: ( crying) Please aisa masak doobara mat karna..please mat karna

dhruv: kabhi nahi karonga...kabhi nahi...

Vedika holds him real tight...and crie fro sometime...and then feels relaxed in his arms

Sorry if i became toooo filmi..meri aadat hain😛

Bomby!



Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago

Hey..Good writing guys 👍🏼

Its sooooo hot today! Feel worse..I feel soooo lazy 😳 😭..Just feel like lying down with all the fans on and daydreaming 😳

So whose doing the next bit? 🤔

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Posted: 20 years ago

Sum feel exactly da same here dude!! Its soooo damn hot!! I think im gonna faint!!

yeh so who is doin the next one?😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
Bomby i love filmi stuff, da melodrama...emotion. All of it!! I wanna write like that!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Reema daadi 😆 Aap aagayi 😉

U write next ..I love your cute style 😳 Phir mein likhungi 😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
Haan Puttar mein aagayee😆. Ok i will write the next one! I actually have been planning to write a 'karva chauth' one for a while. I love these scenes in films!! Give me bout 1/2 hr!
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Posted: 20 years ago

i know guyz...its soooooooo hot here as well..well actually its a bit better than yday...thank god its not hot in HERE anymore 😆 😉

Reemz....yayyy! karva chaut's are rocking! 👏 cant wait..

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Posted: 20 years ago

Episode 49

Its Early morning, Dhruv and Vedika are sleeping. Vedika gently opens her eyes and realises the night has past. She gets up and stretches (still in bed). As she turns round, she looks at Dhruv sleeping so peacefully. She smiles and puts her face near his!

Dhruv: Kya dekrahi ho?

Vedika jumps 😆

Vedika: Dhruv! Tum Jaag rahe the?

Dhruv:[Nods head]

Vedika: To tumhari aankhen kyon band thi?

Dhruv: Because when I am awake you don't even look at me :(

Vedika: Don't bother feeling sorry for yourself. Now get up, get ready aur jao office...Jaldi!!

Dhruv: [moaning] Jaata hoon na. Pehle tumhe ek kiss to de do

Goes to put his arms round Vedika. She runs off the bed...

Vedika: Nahin. Jaldi office jao aur jaldi vapas aao

Dhruv: Kyon?

Vedika: Aaj karva Chauth hai

Dhruv: Toh?😆

Vedika: What do you mean toh? Ghar jaldi aana, varna mein bhuki rehjaongi

Dhruv: Toh?😆

Vedika: Haan tumhe kya hai, mein jeeyu ya maru. 😆

Dhruv: Toh mat rakho na yeh vraat, mein toh kehta hu chup se kuch fruit vrut khalo. Tum kehti ho to mein le aata hoon. Koi Nahin dekhega 😆

Vedika: Stop it Dhruv!😡Tumhare liye shayad yeh vrat kuch mayne nahi rakhta hoga lekin mere liye bahut rakhta hain.

Dhruv: Lekin mujhe yeh din acha nahin lagta, tum sara din bhukhi rahongi.[Awwww😳] Agar peechli baar ki tarah tum bimar hogayi to?

Vedika: [smiles] Mere Buddhu lal😆 [scruffs his hair] Mujhe kuch nahin hoga! Yeh to sab aurat karti hain...

Dhruv: Lekin sirf aurat hi kyon karti hain? Mujhe to yeh na insaafi lagti hai

Vedika: Acha? To tum aaj vrat lakhron😆

Dhruv: [changing the subject]Vedika mujhe der ho rahi hain. Mere kapre please nikal ke rakho. Mein Nahke aata hoon [touches her chin, and goes to the bathroom]😆😆

Vedika shakes her head and then puts out the clothes. Dhruv comes out of the bathroom and puts on his shirt and trousers.

Vedika is tying his tie roudn his neck

Vedika: Remember, ghar jaldi aa jana, varna...[tightens the tie a bit to make Dhruv feel a bit uneasy 😆]

Dhruv: Haan Haan, aa jaonga Hitler ki maa 😆. [Free's himself from Vedika, and walks away]

Vedika: Dhruv tum kuch bulrahe ho!

Dhruv: [to himself] lagta hai she wants to give me good-bye kiss. [So with eagerness he goes towards her, and leans his cheek towards her face]

Vedika: [confused] Yeh Kya kar rahe hon? Seedhe khare raho.[straightens him] Yeh tumhara wallet. Yeh Lo [and slams it on his hand 😆]

Dhruv disappointed goes away.

Vedika: Dhruv...tum kuch aur bhulrahe ho!

Dhruv: [in a disappointed tone] Kya?

Vedika walks towards him, and kisses him on his right cheek😳😳.

Vedika:[rubbing dust of his shoulder] Ab khush? [Dhruv nods his head] To jao [and pushes him out of the door and shouts before he leaves the house]...GHAR JALDI AANA!!

Late Evening - Around about 8.00pm

All the family is on the terrace. The women are getting ready to start the ceremony, and the men soon join them. All wearing traditional sarees. Vedika is looking round but cannot find Dhruv anywhere...

Kavita: Kya Hua Vedika? Kisse Dhund rahe ho?

Vedika: Dhruv ko. Pata Nahin kaha reh gaye

Kavita: Haan Aaj to der hogayi Dhruv ko. Ek Minute, mein Viren ko puchti ho.

Kavita goes to Viren

Kavita: Viren, Dhruv kaha hai? Woh aap ke saath nahin aaya?

Viren: Usse kuch zaroori office ka kaam tha, isliye usse thori der ho jayengi

Vedika hears this..her eyes filled with tears😭

Vedika: Office Office. Patni ki koi fikar hi nahi [angry but tears rolls down her face]

Kavita: Vedika kuch zaroori kaam hoga. Woh aajayega...don't worry.

Vedika: Nahin Mummyji. He wasn't interested in today from the beginning. Karva Chauth has no meaning to him. I don't know why I even bothered to fast for him...[heartbroken but still angry]

Kavita: Vedika...baat to..[ Phone rings, Kavita sighs] Mein leti hoon.

She goes into the house to pick up the phone.

Kavita: Hello?

Someone on the other side says something

Kavita: KYA??? [Shouting]

She quickly walks back to the terrace. Very frightened....

kavita: Vedika....Dhruv...

Vedika: Mujhe koi bahana nahi sun ni. Aap uski taraf dari mat kar ye...

Kavita takes Vedika's shoulder and swings her round...😡😡😡

Kavita: Vedika....DHRUV ka accident hogaya hai!!!

Vedika drops the thali in her hand! Extremely shocked....*shock*

What will happen to Dhruv? Will Vedika's vrat work?? I will no hand it over to VSK, [i think its sum, na?]

Edited by DkDish - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago

that was really good. So sad that dhruv got into an accident.😭😭

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Posted: 20 years ago
Reema...Haha..tumhe bhi filmi banna bahut accha lagta hain....bhi kya baat hain..i am impressed😉

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