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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely FF...do PM me if not an issue whn u update next...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello of my lovely forumwasis!

A huuugeee thanks to everybody who encouraged me when I was feeling low! Special thanks to Sharme - muaahhh - love you hun! Her scraps, cute PM and even FB post helped me alot! And Shruti and Sobi as well! 🤗 This chapter is for the three of you!

So finally, I'm ready with the next chapter Achilles' Heels: The Phantom of Iago! And in case anybody doesn't know the full story of Iago, check out the post after the chapter. I have edited a short paragraph about Iago. I hope you understand the reference of the chapter to the title, just in case!

As usual - I expect loads of likes and comments for this chapter! They mean a lot to me - I literally love all of them! I love your comments more than I love Barun... No kidding! 😃




Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago
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For those who don't know about Iago - Read this. This is taken from a random site I found. I've done a bit of editing from the original text which was a bit lengthy to read! 😛


'Iago is one of Shakespeare's most complex villains. At first glance Iago seems to be pure evil. In one of the most known and loved works of Shakespeare - Othello - Iago's entire scheme begins when the "ignorant, ill-suited" Cassio is given the position he desired. Iago is consumed with envy and plots to steal the position he feels he most justly deserves. Iago deceives, steals, and kills to gain that position. For someone to constantly lie and deceive one's wife and friends, one must be extremely evil or, in the case of Iago, amoral. Iago tricks Othello into believing that his own wife is having an affair, without any concrete proof. Othello is so caught up in Iago's lies that he refuses to believe Desdemona when she denies the whole thing. Much credit must be given to Iago's diabolical prowess which enables him to bend and twist the supple minds of his friends and spouse. Iago sees his wife as an obstacle and a nuisance so he kills her. He kills her not as much out of anger but for pragmatic reasons. Emilia is a stumbling block in front of his path. She serves no purpose to him anymore and she can now only hurt his chances of keeping the position he has been given by Othello.'

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...
*edited*

the phantom of Iago... well played words in the title...
Shakespeare's Othello...

it used to haunt me at times... the sheer malignancy and betrayal portrayed by that play...
it stun me the first time...

i read it after seeing Omkara... one of my fav movies...
Othello's Bollywood adaption...

the silent comparison u gave of Iago and Shyam...
it now made me see... the characterization of Shyam in a clear light...

yes...with just the words exchanged by arnav n khushi... and arnav's memories...
along with that title...
u managed to give us the alarming similarity of Iago n Shyam without pulling Shyam anywhere on the chapter...perfect words...

and Arnav deceived by Shyam became our Othello...
and he didnt believe Khushi then... and left her... just like wat Othello did to Desdemona
and suits the present track of the show too...
but arnav accepted his defeat...his vulnerability as Arnav Malik...yesss...ASR was always my superman... Khushi changed him...*sigh
and he fled like a coward as the ASR in him went down giving in to his weaknesses Di n Khushi...
now my question is...y shyam left too wen he told arnav to run off...
where's the creep now???hmmm...

wow...LOVED the update...
especially coz it was just the phantom of Iago playing here...in the form of Shyam
and our Arnav n Khushi will change the fates this time...

thanx for the dedication saie... i just did wat a frnd wud do if u were ever seen blue nah...
though im not near u... i cud do it virtually... thru my words...
thats wat i did to cheer u up...and my words will always be with u even if im not...
LUV YA girl...

~~~sam xoxo

p.s:
i personally love the name Desdemona... its ironic that Shakespeare gave that name to one of the good hearted woman... as it means "Of The Devils" literally...

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

😭
meli first place... i know its not your mistake...you told me...but i was busy... but sharme said from next time she wont comment before me... yayyy...😃

this chapter was for me na... so everyone close your eyes and only i will read...😳
thank you meli moti for making me feel special...☺️

first i will talk about Shakespeare... omg..!! he was a great writer though i personally din liked him when i was in school... but after school i do realized it... have you read julius caesar..??? my favorite drama... but i haven't read othello... poor me..😔 but i do know cassio...read about him...😛

second title... from where the hell you get such words, idea and the rest

third..nothing now coming to update...😛

Arnav smiled as he turned back; his eyes flickered to the skyline past her. The pleasant azure of the sky had vanished since long now. Someone had forcefully draped black velvet over it. Arnav stared at the flashy neon lights that lined most of the architecture of that beautiful city. The red and the green crept into the sky; their haphazardly smudged spikes masking the shimmery sparkles that were spread across the empty, hollow space above them. His life was no different, he thought bitterly. A car zoomed on the road several floors below, the whoosh of the engine cut through the silence of the night. He breathed in the cold, salty breeze that was coming straight to his face; taking in the crude aura of the endless nature as it stretched itself in front of him; unrolling some unknown vista.

.bloody hell... what was it..??? how you wrote it..?? from where you got the words..??? you actually wrote it..??? omg..!!! i was dumbstruck... you choose the words so well and even placed it beautifully forming a line...

shyam...kasam se jitna i love my kanhaji utna i hate that shyam... maan kar raha pakad ke maru usko main...huhh... serioulsy,... i guess i'm saying this to you third time... but bahot bahot bahot bahot bahot bura hai...cv's have crossed all the limits...😡

and where the hell that shyam went..?? and what he did..?? and if he was behind property then why he left...???

Well - leave her; or watch her die who is "her" here..?? khushi or anjali...??

and khushi loves shyam...?? yeah i know...ASR can be so stupid... i din knew...😡

..but but but...here arnav is so calm so soft so polite... baba re..!!! sachi mein the way he is handling khushi.. will that happen ever in the show..??? i so wish... i love this side of him...
and khsuhi...i have already seen her now in the show...the way she was searching arnav...

SHANTIVAN...
girl since when alcohol is permitted their..???
i love you n your ideas more then cv...huhhh...they should really learn something from you...😛
because you use every member very well... baki log ki importance toh our cv's forget...
loved the care n concern lavanya had for khushi...

its look like shyam is no more in their life..hai na..??you played well with the character of lavanya... i loved it anjali's thought about her...

SKYCITY

okay before i say anything else i need to say this... i want ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA back... with a bang on entry... make sure this time he ruin that bloody shyam...

its really hard to digest this arnav... sachi muchi...
he asked her permission to come in, made coffe for both, the way he is taking all the sarcastic note of khushi... ASR can never do that...😛
*coffee... it reminded me your love for it..*

freak... Arnav was getting a brother. i hate you for this line...
now i'm curious...what happened in past..?? how khsuhi and shyam are related..?? and why the hell khsuhi will be with that creep that too in his arms..??

And Arnav Singh Raizada changed into Arnav Malik for his Di... And more importantly - for you... if he never trusted khushi.. then why he fled away for her..?? kya hua tha...?? bata do...🥺

awesome part...loved it...
now time to take a BOW... for the words you used...and the thought... people will learn something from here... atleast i learned because i opened my dictionary...😛

and now i even understood the meaning of your title...😊

His eyes shot up to her from the spot on the rug that covered the wooden flooring of the suite. He had said it. He was there because of his only weaknesses. Di and Khushi...

The heels of Achilles....


PERFECT ENDING...


fourth.. the character iago... dangerous lagta hai..😆 well thats what i figured out from your note, sharme's comment and your reply to her...

update real soon...please...⭐️

Edited by Shruti21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww uupdated ...
thanks for PM off to read
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Posted: 13 years ago

Woah...now we know and why you titled the story as Achilles heels...they are anjali and khushi...

So he left for what shyam made him beleive and it was so apt for the character Iago...thats suite perfect with the story line...👏👏👏
And the worst thing was he has taken 18 months to realize the truth...that shyam was coward here...😡
And lavanya was really so sweet...AND will he tell her the exact reason why he left her...alone to gace the wrath of the world...😡
Cheerzzz...for ur work...
Edited by nareshSV - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh what a cliff hanger ...

fab fab part

extra love for making it long :)))))))))))

super going plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved whole update
each n every word
thnks pearl
thnks for awesome update n pm 🤗

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