HI!
Sooo I just started reading this story, like less than all of 4 hours ago, and needless to say, I'm HOOKED!
I love how the concept is slightly quirkier than even the usually quirky stories and I love love love how strong EVERY single one of the characters is, be it the mighty ASR, the damsel-with-an-attitude in distress KKG, the ULTRA cool Lavanya (I have to tell you, this version of La is by far my favorite- even beats the one on the show!) or Rajeev, Vabs, the baby twins, they are just such incredible characters on their own that when you pitch them together... It's something quite awesome, to put very lamely!
I love the smart ass remarks that Khushi/ La make, ASR's twisted humor, the fact that the women of this story are made of stuff just as tough as ASR and ArHi's obvious jealousies regarding each other!! Along with of course their love story (which for some reason I find thrilling haha) and the slight adult undertone to the whole story :D I also love the way you've shown Rajeev and V's relationship, very hatke but still very real!
THIS is the Khushi that I wish we would see on TV because the spunkiness and naughtiness and freshness that she has here is what is seriously missing from her character currently... This Khushi wouldn't just sit back and cry for her Arnavji, hell she would DESTROY those holding him captive! And that would be if THIS ASR would let her even get to that point because he would have never allowed himself to land up in such a mess in the first place/ would intimidate the hell out of his kidnappers... Really wish I could watch your story on TV!!
There aren't all that many stories on IF that are really something, but this is one of those stories that just strikes every right chord! It made me giggle at all the naughty conundrums/ jokes/ comments, blush at the very hot forbidden office dalliance as you call it, feel irritated at the two for running away from their feelings... There's nothing that this story doesn't have/ doesn't make the reader do! Simply brilliant :)
I can't wait for the next update, and I hope you never have to end this story!!
Love,
Shruti
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