ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind Th-2 Ch-7G P142 - Page 93

That Shyam he's disgusting me !!!!

ITS JUST GETTING MORE AMAZING BY THE CHAPTER!! THE WAY YOU HAVE ANALYSED THE CROOK'S MIND AND HIS CALCULATIVE MOVES. WE JUST DETEST HIM DONT WE - AND THAT'S THE SUCCESS OF THE CHARACTER ITSELF. THE PAST HISTORY OF SHYAM AND HIS POV DURING AND AFTER HIS ENCOUNTER WITH ANJALI HAVE GIVEN US EVEN BETTER REASONS TO HATE HIM! THIS MEANS THAT WE ARE IN LOVE WITH YOUR FICTION!! ❤️

Shyam is such a slimy bas***d! This chapter was perfect. Your story could actually be used in the show itself because its perfectly in line with show.

The whole Anjali-Shyam background was really well done. Kudos! Now waiting for the action to start. :)

Sutron ke anusaar yahan par stalking karna shayad faayedemand ho sakta hai. ;) :D

Oh god! So dat was all creep's plan..he was nvr honest..nt an ounce of goodness in him..his situation was ofcrs bad..bt dats nt a good enuf xcuse..there r many ppl who face d same situation..bt they dnt turn into a devil..oh god..dis one was so distressing..i thght mayb he was nvr dis bad..mayb smwhre there was a streak of good in him..bt m wrong..poor anjali n arnav..fell into his trap..he cheated them frm d beginning..khushi's just a single notch among many others..
btw,sorry for commenting late..had seriously frustrating net prblms😕

Oooh!

*Stalker alert* :D

Wow! I feel bowled over by the narration in that chapter.

Khushi's emotions. Especially as things unraveled, was so poignant! First questioning her need to be involved with the conversation between siblings, then the guilt at her role, albeit unknowingly in bringing things to this juncture and then the acceptance that came along with Anjali's revelation. That she bore no grudges against her.

The description of Anjali's appearance and that of the room gelled in so well with what was to come.I dont begrudge Anjali for what she did. This again puts the bond that Arnav and Anjali share on the forefront. This was what they showcased beautifully on the show at the start and you have shown it to us in the update beautifully! Both doing what they felt right considering the circumstance. She needs an outlet for her emotions too, Anjali does. All her illusions of the perfect life shattered. I'm glad she has emerged stronger.

What did Khushi ask at the end? It left me baffled, that bit! Is it about her pregnancy? Or about leaving Shyam?

Lovely work Meera ! :)