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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

👏Wow, so emotional, really lovely,Awesome update. Please update soon, can't wait for the next one..

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IndYa4u

@IndYa4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Ma'am. You sure know how to keep us on the edge.

Fantastic chapter. Loved the part "Main janta hoon.. ye sab tum hi kar rahi ho. Tum chahti ho na ki main zindagi bhar aise hi yaadon mein jeeta rahoon? "

And Priya's Covo with photo frame . ""Kya ye aap hi kar rahe hain Ram? Main jaanti hoon ki ye aap hi hain kyunki aisa ehsaas, aisi bechaeni mujhe aapke siwa koi nahi de sakta."

Awesome touch my friend... 👏

Ram and Priya's meeting/eyelock was great.. and "Mumma"... wow.. 😛

DK in the story opened up so many doors of imagination now. WHo? What? Why? When? and back to WHO the heck is DK. 😲 😲

haha...

Can't wait for the next chapter girl.

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maris

@maris08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Punya beautiful.. Loved the ay you have proceeded to the future..Evil trio was mentioned in just a paraand that sums it up well...

Priya's attire is different and I like the way Ram was taken aback by the kid calling her mumma..

Now am tearing my head over who is DK..Getting an idea, but dont want to spoil youyr suspense..😆

Now lets see how things so about..Very nice; continue..

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: viny_queen

while reading it some time i 😭
some time i feel happy😃
all i say

4 theupdate
plz update soon i cant wait long

Hi Eram,

Thanks for the lovely pics!

I know.. there were many 'Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham' moments in there. well, lookout for them in the future updates too!

Thanks for reading! 😊

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Lavi_961
Superb.. Nothing to say..

Hi Lavi,

So glad you liked it. Thanks! 😊

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: balhfan22
OMG!! Awesome update! Ram finally finds Priya! U made me cry.. 😭 U penned down their emotions so beautifully! 👏 Amazing! Please unhe jaldi milaao na! 😉 Can't wait for the next part.!

Hey.. thanks so much!

I know, a bit emotional uppie. But don't worry.. promise lotsa sweet-n-spicy moments in the future.. just stay glued! 😃

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Sonakshi-grp
Very well written.plz try to update soon.thanx..

Hi Sonakshi,

Thanks for reading.. will update soon.

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: sss283
you penned down all your thoughts in a wonderful way...
first the strange feeling of happiness...pain...
then sighting apeksha...
encounter with priya and their daughter...amazing...
precap is so so so so so so interesting,...
continue soon

Hey,

Glad you found it interesting. yes, I made the last entry a bit fast paced.. too many things happening at once.

Thanks for appreciating!

Will update soon.

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Punya

@PunyaS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: ravichitra
Whoaaa gal! This is a mixture of emotion, love, romance, innocence & desperation. Fabulous update dear. Keep going. Woohooo.

Hey Chitra,

I had to do this! The only way to satiate myself... hihihi..

Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.