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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

I just read 7E and that was amazing!!! Very very well written. They both draw strength from each other. It was a brilliant update!!! I will soon catch up. I have just been busy with family so I couldn't comment earlier.

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

Oops...Sorry Double post ... 😃

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

anjali simply tries to pull wool over her eyes wen she sees that something might go wrong but shell never let anything disturb her chottey's life...

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 13 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#855

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Oh you did more than justice to it. You have made me want to get inside your story, haul Shyam up by his collar and possibly throw him off the highest building...hmmm. Interesting possibilities, dont you think?

Anyway, one of my favourite chapters, Meera because it was like watching that sinister flashback thing in movies/TV and feeling terrible while watching it.

What a way to tell the story of Shyam Manohar Jha. You got everything right - the mask, the reason, the occasional slipping, the calculative brain, the turning into a monster with no heart. Brilliant job.

I dont know what else to write except that was a stellar chapter. Stellar.

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#856

Too bad his girl was not perfect but then money did make up for a lot of imperfection in life.

That unfortunately is the truth of all our lives- Money maketh the Man.

This is such a fantastic chapter- a chapter that shows us Shyam for what he is today and why he is today without being too judgemental and preachy. He is just a smart sorry shrewd man who like many others not only loved money but wanted it without much of an effort. Shyam is like a weed in a beautiful garden- he grows off by killing other beautiful plants but can never be as beutiful as them.

I love the whole of the back story and for once the story of Anjali and Shyam in a FF is as gripping if not more than that of A&K.

Fantastic update, thanks for the PM.

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 13 years ago